Passionate, poetic anger! Something more than just a typical rant, this one speaks volumes about betrayal, bitterness, and eventual revenge! Very powerful and nicely written!
Excellent poem! Nice flow, good word-usage, and bitingly honest! One small typo, last verse, line one, JST I believe was meant to be JUST! This is great work!
Whew! One almost needs a cold shower after reading this passionate piece! It is well put together, has good imagery, and flows along like a whit-water river! Great stuff!
Nicely written poem on playing with old school poetry! Has excellent rhyme and meter, while at the same time spoofing same! The flow is very even, making the poem roll effortlessly off the tongue, and it also contains a wonderfully witty use of language! Very good!
Been there, done that, didn't buy the tee-shirt! LOL!! Cute little verse that pretty much tells it like it is when one is feeling empty of ideas! Very cool.
Exceptional piece that deals truthfully with a person coming to grips with their own reality! The reflective aspect of the imagery is very powerful and intense! Great stuff here!
A truthful, to-the-point piece about a final break-up that is skilfully written and uniquely memorable! It touches one with its down-to-earth language, and simple, yet poignant profundity! This is a quality piece of work and should be acclaimed as such! Nicely done!
A beautiful example of structured poetry that bounces off the inner ear with joyful exuberance! Well-worded verses that faithfully reflect the spirit of the poem and the New Year! This gem has excellent flow, good imagery, and an over-all feel of optimism that we all desperately need! Great!
This piece could have more power and intensity if not quite so convoluted theme-wise! I like the way its put together, but feel it needs some good, solid tweaking to become a more memorable piece of poetry!
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