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Review of The Best Gift  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That was so lovely. I could feel how the narrator feels proud of his kind mother and wishes to show the love she gave to him in the past.

Most doesn't have any wish to show this love bad. It's sad, but is true. At least read your poem made me smile this night. Thank you.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Mother. Always a nice theme. Makes us think of the past, think of our choices. "Would she be happy if I do this?" I sometimes think. I think I have lived in her shadow for so long, that I no longer can live without her in my mind.

Would you understand? Figures?
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Guess my memories are bitter, for I easily forget my past. I don't like thinking about it, sometimes I think it will make me regret. Forget made me have so many troubles, yet I feel like it is better like that.

If I remember now, I will only feel worst.
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Review of Depression  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Woah! I did think for a moment that it was about depression, but the way how you made the twist really impressed me. And the way how you use those adjectives made this poem even better.

An tone that managed to fool the readers. What a way to create such a great work.
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Review of Corrupt Society  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hope.

A simple word with so much meaning. I sometimes forget how it feels like to have such hope for the world. I think I've gave up a long time ago.

What is hope for you? I wonder... Will those words matter anything for the two of us in the future?
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