you are very creative...
very different from any other writer that i have yet to read...
your words aren't all depressing... or filled with romance and love...
for that i have no choice but to thank you...
thank you for being unique and good at what you do... you can write!
such heart felt and stunning words these are...
i can feel each emotion as i read line after line....
and i just want to read more and more of the words you create as one.
thank you for sharing your words with the world and me...
you are dark angel...
the angel that longs for love, life, and light...
one day you will ask yourself "exactly who am I?"
but your answer will not be ' Dark Angel '
rather, the ' Angel of Light '.
that will be that day that you were sat free.
are you sure that the other you is not ME?
for all the words that you write are the words from my soul, that words that i feel every second, hour, and day...
what you need to know is that you are not ALONE, never will you have to be....
for i am feeling what you feel, so my only advice to you is to just keep being strong...
for in the future you will be the YOU that longs to come out, it is just waiting for the time when you are free, and like me, one day, you WILL BE FREE!
i cant speak to telll you how this poem had made me feel for it would bring back to many painful memories of my own...
all that i can say is that you are the writer that i was waiting for, you own the word that
have reached and danced around my soul...
how could you say that this is not your best?
i know that this is the first poem of yours that i have read, but already i am craving more, im ready to read all the words that belong to YOUR soul . . . . .
this poem was devistatingly eligant, filled with beauty and sorrow . . . . . . . . . .
these words have caught the depths of my soul, and i am not sure when it is that they will let go!
oh, i loved that so very much and at the end it made me cry. i do not know what to say, but to you i am sorry. all i know that you are a good person, and that you were forgiven long ago. just know that the one you lost is the one that did no wrong, but in the end loved you! was this your grandpa, the one that sent you chocolates?
all i have to say is never stop these wwords from flowing, for you can write, and reliese your heart out! thank you for sharing your beautiful and touching words!
i am not one for grammer but i really didnot find ANY mistakes!
this is the most beautiful poem, and i absoutly LOVE the twist at the end, it is all about that person and the amazing things they are like, but in the end . . .
they were the one who left you to die.
i am sorry for the pain you mush have felt . . . .
but you are strong! i know that i barley know you, but this i know for a fast, you have a strong soul, and it is capiable of loving far beyond this worlds dreams!
Never, EVER, stop writing! you are to amazing, and your words touch me . . . .. .
your words i love!
thank you so very much for sharing with me and the world, for your writing will forever have me dreaming magical dreams!!!!!!
that poem was fun to read . . . . . . .
and a good mood lifter!
your words flow so smoothly from the screen and into my mind!
keep up you amazing words of LIGHT and HAPPINESS!
OH how i wish to hear this song with music . . . . .
for it is quite possible that it would my very favorite!
the words were written as if to me . . . . . of rather . . . . FROM me!
you have touched the depths of my soul with these words . . . . . .
and for that i deeply thank you!
WOW!!!
the way that that was written was so perfectly exicuted, and yet again so very amazing!
you are the KING of great poems . . . . . .
and in my memory . . . . .
your words will forever last!
that was so beautiful . . . . and i dont know how to tell you how i feel about it!!!!!
but i can say that the feeling is GOOD!!!!!! no beyond GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
i love these words and i so hope that you plan on writing more poetry her VERY
soon!!!!!!!! thank you for being a writer, for you are good!
this is a very good poem and it left the best of pictures in my head, for the words were like a movie!!
thank you for the words that you write and i hope that you plan on writing more in the near future, i will surly read them all!!!
you are so lucky to know your mind . . . . . . for i wish that i did!
your mind is a power beyond all that i know, and your writing is the core!
please, dont you ever stop writing, for that would be a sin and loss of brilliant words!
how do you do it???????? how is it that every words i read that is from you soul, captivates my every thought, till i am no longer a part of this world?? i love the words that are now on my screen, but i see that you have another prize that i have to go and read.
the power of your words is a rare beauty that i have not seen in many writer, and i very much loved the words that i found and just read from my screen.
please . . . . . dont stop the words that come from your soul . . . .
for i long to read more!!
all i can say for sure is that i was touched by this poem and the words with in, though i have to admit that i did not fully understand it . . . . . . .
i guess that that is the beauty of poetry . . . . . . .
you do not HAVE to understand . . . . . .
but never the less . . . .
it is a beautiful and stunning piece of work.
you miss your childhood dont you??? though i do not blame you, things are so much easer when you are a kid, take it from somebody who knows . . . . .
but on a lighter note . . . . .
i rather enjoyed this poem, it had good memories with it and left great pictures in my head!!
so than you found your creativity AFTER all the events from this poem, for this was a most creative piece of work and i loved it, i really enjoyed reading these interesting words.
keep it up, for you are great when it come to writing!!!!
Master L . . . . .100 more years till your life is gone.
you are to kind a person to leave this earth a minute sooner.
this poem said 1000 words, yet there were only a few.
that was so sad, yet it was my favorite one that you have written so far. i like the expression of feeling and the feeling that i get as i read, for it was so very true . . . .
the longer we're waiting
the sooner we die
no longer will wait, nor linger on the past . . .
thank you for the words that have shown me truth.
that was so beautiful . . . . . . i could literally feel the love that YOU feel for this unknown person, well your husband. your words are so stunning and so very touching. i am glad that you chose to share your work with the world, for it is what i long to read. thank the stars that i have found you, amazing writer!
that was a fun poem to read. up beat, and a little confusing . . . . . . .
but i mean that in a GOOD way. the words made me think and i like the for it puts painted, beautiful pictures in my head.
thank you for being the fantastic writer that you are!!!!
addison
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