Really a sacred confession by a noble heart
Without the assistance of the mighty Lord
Nothing useful will come out of a true poet
No poem can be surely written by me really
This poet only tells the reality very clearly
I must endorse his views without doubt
I am also like this poet only at present
I can coin nothing fine without His help
Thank you poet for this stunning revelation
I greatly appreciate your views by admiring
My concealed ideas are by you revealed
I greatly love your poetry and pray for you.
The poet gives startling truths to pacify
Mother and child never extend fights
Either of the parities will surely give up
And relation will continue unhindered
Normally mother only will compromise
And the son will immediately accept it
Vice versa may also take place finely
But, both will not carry it on forever
Mother will love son's child very much
She will adore that baby if is a girl
Her heart will be filled with warmth
As that child will continue the clan
She hugged the baby only recently
But, many years have gone in a flash
A brand new family is now started
How fast the time is moving ahead!
Finally the poet highlights blessings
Of a mother made through a prayer
Her heart prays for the best to happen
Mother is mother for all the living souls.
This poem looks like a perfect Mr. Universe
Strong muscles with top-class manliness
The poet has rhymed this poem amazingly
His English knowledge is here depicted
Beautiful words rich with powerful meaning
His kind heart expresses his sorrow finely
He has not wasted words for just rhyming
I actually envy the poet's poetic dexterity
His noble heart is here excellently revealed
This poem will purify lovers' heart surely
It is a fine one that will correct every mind
The meaning of Divine love is finely shown.
Here the word "mother" must be replaced by father
As ninety nine percent of mothers are totally great
Every mother on this Earth is a noble individual
The poem tells the truth of a bad house of a father
The poetry has a fine structure to envy by a poet
But, unfortunately, a mother is just like a Goddess
So, the poem is beautiful, but damaging a mother
The author has carefully rhymed the poem wisely'
The poem has a negative impact on mind
Still it is written finely showing many facts
We cannot say old age is real Heaven
That is why we want relatives to cheer
If the old lady has a son or grand son
Surely her position is totally different
A kind look of a grand daughter will
Inject into her mind colossal faith
Grand children are God's way of
Compensating GF for growing old
So if we have affectionate souls
Life may be better in many ways
I must pity this old lady enormously
As she has none to give presence
The poem is perfect in every way
Unfortunately heart feels hurt
In this modern fast World
This will surely happen
Nothing is said wrongly
We must accept the truth.
Here the language is simple and clear
Every word is damn easy to finely grasp
The author's description is very touching
And his experience is to all a lesson
His grand father was educating him kindly
He made his grand son wise and witty
He gave him his time with deepest love
As he enjoyed his company with pleasure
"Grand Children are God's way of compensating
Grand Fathers for growing old" is a famous quote
This expression runs like clean water in a stream
And the emotions are indeed eye-opener for all
The grand child was near that great old man
And during end his hands were lovingly clutched
Those hands which carried that tiny boy
Were held with deep affection by the youth
This type of end denotes God's truest presence
And this will make the reader believe in God
May God bless this youth through his grand dad
The article gives all kinds of positive emotions
Abraham Lincoln only said the following clearly
"I am not worried as to what my Grand Dad did
I am concerned only with what his Grand son does"
I am indeed pleased greatly by this moving write.
The poem is well-written I truly confess
At no place comes any kind of confusion
Here one can put oneself in sparrow's spot
And think about his sad life philosophically
The little sparrow teaches a great lesson
It is acting like a mind healing Psychiatrist
A little soul showing an example for optimism
I like this poem and I applaud the writer's skill
What a lovely last letter written by a great poet!
Tomorrow we cannot read such a lovely one
Who made this poet wallow in self-pity?
Cannot they see the talent behind her words?
Your poem is indeed superior and excellent
I admire the way in which it is written dear
Rhyme and rhythm are brought superbly
I can easily understand your distress fully
Please use your poetic talent to write
Great positive poetry to save the World
Exploit your potential and elevate minds
Struggling souls are awaiting your help
If this poem is simply an expression only
Then I truly appreciate the beauty of it
In case it is your life's saddest reflection
I fall at your feet to coin bliss via poems.
Love alone makes this World interesting
With love, World is Heaven, without, Hell
All live in this World to love, to be loved
Loveless heart is inferior to beast truly
All the points quoted are true to the core
Like a coin has two sides, love also has
Let us see the brighter side and act
Love alone will give us energy and zest
Every time when I get not a girl's support
I will immediately switch over my love
I will never worry about the lost love
My policy is to try and win a girl's heart
In this way I prolonged my life time
And after reaching sixteen in number
I married a girl using horoscope
There ended all my adventure in life
A new responsibility and a new outlook
Love alone will safeguard our happiness
Never think of love pessimistically please
Love is another name for the Almighty
The article is indeed superbly written
Giving valuable information with style
I thank the author for his different write
May God bless him to write further.
What a classic poem is this fine one!
My mind, rhyme and rhythm truly stun
This cute poem is extraordinarily done
Depression of course cancels fun
The poem contains a simple language
But, explains depression like a sage
Surely depression is a disadvantage
Let it not come to anyone at any stage
By playing with word highly skillfully
The poet conveys the news tactfully
One can understand his problem fully
He drives home very vital points duly
For his last four lines I love to suggest
That the Almighty is always fair and just
Taking tablets without skipping is a must
Prayer is a sure cure and is ever the best
As today is x-mas, to Jesus you go
Your problems let Him come to know
To give you peace, He will say not 'no'
Your depression will melt like snow
Just go the the nearest Church please
Surrender to Lord Jesus for true peace
You must pay only prayers as His fees
He wil make depression bend its knees
Jesus will kick it out of your mind
No staying place in you it can find
Toward yourself try to be damn kind
Toward medicines never be blind
Just a chemical change in the brain
It gives you deep strain and pain
Regard not tablets as a chain
In this way only I can now explain
Exercise, prayer, meditation and tablet
Can help you win depression I bet
Surely solace if you try you can get
Peace and bliss and joy can be met
If you must take medicines life-long
Regard it not in any way as wrong
It will make your mind really strong
Taking of medichines, just prolong.
This write made me grow damn curious
As it is written with adequate knowledge
Every word gives thrill and satisfaction
The writer leads us giving the best effect
While reading this, comes to mind Nobel Prize
The World laughs at me when I want it badly
I turn out to be laughing stock in all the minds
Like this woman, I hopefully scatter my words
I hope on one fine day, seeds will fast grow
This poem has given me colossal belief
I deeply thank the Author for giving me faith
This helps all generally and me particularly.
The child looks like a fairy
Her profile is extraordinary
Her hair decorate her face
I see their Divinely grace
The poem rhymes superbly
Meaning arranged remarkably
What a flow it has like a stream!
Words form a wonderful team
Thank you poet, great thanks
Upon God that tiny soul banks.
The poem is simple and straightforward
Rhyme and rhythm are kept wonderfully
The poet has carefully chosen every word
After reading satisfaction is had fully
An affectionate soul expresses its mind
It wants to love and be extremely kind
Great solace in love it does truly find
May the recipient be not foolishly blind
Mary’s Sacred Son will be forever remembered
He will protect the entire Universe with love
Mary is the mother of that God’s holy messenger
He will protect the innocent with immense joy
He will live for the World and its beings
His absence may be a temporary shock
But, His presence is now truly permanent
He permeates the whole Universe kindly
And nothing escapes the eyes of Jesus
A poem written with great skill
To provoke the minds of the reader
O- Jesus- Your mom is anxious
Please console her affectionate soul
Go and embrace that holiest Angel
Fill her cheeks with lovely kisses
O- Jesus-A poem about your dear mom
What a love the poet has developed
For your beloved mother holy Mary!
I truly appreciate the poet’s write
It indeed made me write this review
My heart and mind are greatly moved.
The narration is no doubt thrilling
And the suspense is really fine
What happened to mom and dad?
At this juncture where are they?
Why mom asked her not to enter
Into her room is still a mystery?
Why mom took not her daughter
Along with her while leaving?
That is not mom's corpse of course
Then whose body was lying there?
Who are those green-eyed strangers?
What business they have there?
The story is not fully completed
And many questions arise
Is the heroine gone forever?
Does not she have any remedy?
The story moves like Hitch cock's movie
But, the end is left to be indefinite
The theme if is continued further
It would have been indeed splendid
To conclude, I am impressed absolutely
The author's language is very smooth
Using apt words to provoke tension
In a nutshell, a thriller needing completion.
I have copied the article in my word
As the subject matter is important
I am with it connected for decades
And the title made me first copy it
I took strong tablets for depression
Often I used to be affected by it
Due to incessant losses in life
My emotions derailed like a train
As a result of my taking medication
My child at the age of three months
Started getting epileptic attacks
That too five times in an hour
As a baby only a murmuring sound
Was heard from her tiny, fragile body
My sister-in-law studying medicine
Started to diagnose my baby carefully
We started to visit innumerable doctors
Using tablets the fits was arrested
She was given also one syrup
But, the medication sadly continued
One day my growing little daughter
Consumed the entire syrup bottle
To relieve us of this botheration
And she was treated for toxicity
Our pediatrician accepted his inability
As fits attack could not be stopped
To another doctor he kindly referred
New one turned out to be a great genius
The new doctor stopped the entire medicines
And bouts of fits’ attack came into picture
I wanted to revert back to the old doctor
At least those medicines controlled fits
My new doctor allowed me to do this
But, warned of undesirable consequences
These tablets would retard the child’s brain
And great learning disability would follow
He wanted us to wait using patience
He prescribed brand new medicines
For ten days my daughter consumed
Those new controlling-fits medicines
Then he stopped the new syrup
And waited for the result anxiously
When no fits came to attack
He stopped with a singe tablet
Both day and night she must take
Then for four years she had no fits
We visited him every three months
And after four years the fits stopped
My brother taught to my daughter
The habit of smelling petrol
And she did this without us knowing
On one fine day she swooned
She fainted and fell on her back
Her head hit the floor with a thud
And her head was terribly swollen
And she developed again fits attack
For two years with no medication
She came out of epileptic disease
Just a very bad petrol smelling habit
Made her get back that devil fits
In fact when we earlier visited the doctor
To know about our next visit to the clinic
He asked us to come with marriage invitation
The whole medication was totally stopped
But, now we went to the same genius
And he regretted the incident seriously
As the child reached the square one position,
At that time she was just eleven years old
Now she is twenty one years of age
Has finished her commerce graduation
Studying cost accountancy for future
Indeed having no learning disability
But, stopping medication helps not
Twice she got the monstrous attack
But, fortunately tablets are effective
The doctor is a child neurologist
Now, she has become an adult
LINDA IS A LUCKY GIRL
AS PER OUR HINDU LAW
EPILEPSY CAN BE QUOTED
TO OBTAIN EASILY DIVORCE
I am terribly confused about her future
Will a noble gentleman accept her?
Will Lord Jesus send a noble soul
Like the author of this fine article?
Doctors say that I am not responsible
They advice me to stop feeling guilty
My daughter’s future to be very rosy
I pray to Jesus, Allah and Lord Krishna
The article only made me write this
Its worth is known only to me
I pray to God to protect LINDA
Truly God must be very great.
M V VENKATARAMAN
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