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Review of TRUST IS A MUST  
Review by rhymer
Rated: E | (5.0)
Respected Carlota,

If parents' mood is terribly attacked
Children may not be by hope backed
Peace of mind cannot be at all tracked
As affection is by their blood lacked

Childhood memories are very strong
In case had happened anything wrong
Haunting sensation will surely prolong
Often it will very cruelly come along

This poet must have been affected
Her young soul remained unprotected
Her whole personality is infected
By trust she tries to get it corrected

God is at times behaving cruelly
Even if prayer is delivered loyally
The reason remains unknown really
This cannot be ascertained certainly

Human mind when is severely hit
Worrying becomes a constant habit
Heart will be afraid like a rabbit
Sorrow will seep into mind bit by bit

Anything may happen to anyone
This is a rule under the Sun
This can be escaped by none
This is only by God done

This poet must have severely suffered
Still help for others is by her offered
Though past is by memories referred
"Trust is a must " is by her offered

I am also a person with the same story
I have had during childhood injury
So far I have had no useful victory
Like this poet with hope life I carry

In all my songs I instill trust
I enthuse myself with zest
I know fate may try to twist
My defeats form a long list

This poem soothes my mind
Holy words in it I truly find
Towards me God was blind
In a way he was also unkind

This poem reveals the truth
How past that is not smooth
Creates worry that is mammoth
Why even God is so uncouth?

I fall at this poet's tender feet
To forget about the past defeat
Now this poem is a great feat
Her advice is soft, lovely and sweet.

With best wishes,
M V VENKATARAMAN
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