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Review of Mine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you used the prompt very well. There was a dramatic twist near the end with the plane crash, I wasn't expecting that. There was also a philisophical tone to the story you told. I enjoyed every word and line written. Nice grammar too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Inside  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed every word and line of this poem from you. There was a poetic power over me as I read this through. You expressed yourself so very clearly and honestly. I liked the flowing rhythm here. There were no distractions at all. You did a fine job here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of It's Now or Never  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this was a very sweet little poem here. The tone and manner of the words and lines was great. A simple yet very effective item to me. The title matched the writing. I really liked the very last line, it seemed to round the writing up very well. There were no distractions in this piece. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of My garden  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sue,

Great theme here for this writing. Once again, lovely rhymings and structure. You always tell a good story in your eight lined poems. I enjoyed every word and line. There were no distractions at all. Another refreshing little read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Bucolic Beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was a refreshing little item to read through. I have never used this form before, to be honest it does not appeal to me. The words and lines were great, the theme was new and inviting to me. There were no distractions in this poem. I enjoyed the refreshing read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Throb  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well expressed and written out. Again there was a nice tone and manner to your work. I am guessing this was about a love that was not very well? I liked the title and it drew me into the poem. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Pillars  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again,

I see this has no reviews?

I enjoyed the mysterious manner to the writing. I recieved good imagery from the words and lines. I liked the tone and manner in the way you wrote this out. Very biblical and strong. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of You Could've  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
An interesting piece of writing. I thought there was a quirky feel to the words and lines. I liked the writing style you used here. The theme was original and inviting to me. The title drew me in to the poem, wondering what you had written. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was a lovely little poem from you. There was a natural beauty here. There was also great imagery coming from the words and lines. Combining wildlife with the earths problems was a nice touch. You did a fine job here. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Barren  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this little poem through. The theme was refreshing and inviting. There were some nice lines in this writing. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. There were no distractions in this poem. Well expressed and displayed. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A well expressed point of view. I enjoyed your philosophy here in this write. It is true that when one feels true success tears can easily be followed. I have stood on top of a mountain and looked out across the land and felt emotional power grip me. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was very sweet and calming to read through. There were no distractions in this poem from you. The title was inviting and matched the meaning of this item. You did a fine job of only using 24 syllables. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of 1798  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the historic feel to this item here. You painted a good picture with your words and lines. There were no distractions in this poem from you. You manged to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Fleeting Beauty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked the tone and manner to this writing from you. I also liked the philisophical meaning. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. There were no distractions here in this piece. I enjoyed it all. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Spring Is Here  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the read through of this poem. It was uplifting to me. You managed to sum up the season very well indeed. I liked the imagery that came along with this writing. This time of year does bring out the poets in us all. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Sunflower  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was kind of emotional to read through. Combining the womans life with a sunflower. Nicely told story and heart-felt. I liked the single line at the end...."I am the sunflower".... this held great meaning to me. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of My teacher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was rather quite good for the age you were when you wrote this out. A nice accolade for the woman in question. I like when people post their earliest works, it proves that words are timeless and poetry never changes. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Ideas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Try this:

The beginning of time, write out your thoughts on the beginning of space and time as you percieve it. Do it essay style, we all have our ideas on this subject, some relate to God as the creator of time, some say a higher power or entity. If you go to my portfolio and then scroll down to "Works without reviews" and click on "The Shamen, Re-Evolution" you will find my favorite piece on this subject. Or, if you're really clever you could write it in poetry form. Get inspired!

I hope this helped.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this gripping piece from you. The theme was great and rewarding. There were no distractions at all. A great take on the meaning of love, well expressed and well explained. I liked the tone and manner of your writing here. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the theme of this writing here. This little woman in question sounds awesome to me. There was a an emotional power to this poem. I know this was written a few years ago and I hope all is ok with Marissa. A fulfilling poem here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Lexical  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing came up in the random read and review page.

I had to look in the dictionary to know what lexical meant. (lol). You did a fine job in using just 24 syllables, I know this is not easy. Your character here sounds intelligent. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Mark  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this writing through. The philosophy here was good and made the tone of the words seem alive. You made me feel lucky that I dont suffer from this condition. An interesting read and was well expressed. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww. Nicely expressed writing. The combination of time and love was great. The title was perfect and suited your writing very well. I wish you luck in this subject and matter. There was a lovely sense of philosophy in this poem from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The little man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poetry here from you. The rhymes and rhythm were great. I enjoyed the read through. There were no distractions at all. I liked the imagery from this writing. This reminded me of a Pink Floyd song from years ago. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Rain Reveries  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was very creative in the last few lines. The whole poem was great and I enjoyed every word you wrote out. There were no distractions at all. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Nice imagery too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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