I thought your writing here was lovely. Great descriptive lines and words. The beauty of a new born life will always make for good writing. There was a lovely poetic sway to this poem. You expressed yourself very well here. The title drew me in and at first I couldn't tell if you were writing about a lover or romantic partner. Then it all became clear, a child, new born. Beautifully written. Thank you.
I thought this poem from you was very peaceful and satisfying. The beauty of the brook, the nature all around all made this poem a joy to read. The rhythm was great and the flowing rhymes were great too. I love reading poems where people connect to the land, rivers and fields. Nice writing. Thank you.
I thought your poem here was beautiful through out. I enjoyed every word and line. There was a lovely poetic feeling which came with this writing. I loved it. It is poems like this that make me smile inside and have a great moment in time as I read them through. Great writing and keep going. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was excellent to me. Nice rhymes, nice flowing rhythm, you executed this poem perfectly. You told a story here too, I was gripped to every line. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. I found no way of improving this writing. It was very good, well done.
I thought your poem here was very sweetly written. You set a scene very well. The imagery that came with this poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this through. The innocense of the meaning was perfect. A very symbolic piece of writing from you. Keep going....
I thought this piece from you was different to me. Like it was written for someone you know?. The title was fitting for the poems words and lines. You wrote this very well. I liked the size of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Isn't love a complicated thing when it goes sour?
I thought this writing was great, I loved the way this story ended. It lit up my senses and inspired me. A nice simple little story, well told and executed. You managed to make me want to read more. The title was fitting too. I enjoyed this story. Thank you.
I liked the emotions in your writing here. A nice, positive piece of writing. I also liked the romance here. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I would have liked the poem to be longer because I was enjoying the read. The title was effective and strong. Nice work.
I liked the poetic sway about this piece from you. There was an originality about this piece. Nicely presented on the page. I would have loved the poem to have been longer. The theme was thoughtful and deep. I found this poem quite humbling. Thank you for sharing.
I thought this was a lovely little poem to read through. Your rhymes were great. I loved the simplicity of your memories here. The flow was perfect and the rhythm was good too. A humbling feel came across me as I read this through. I enjoyed every word.
A nice poetic step into the past. I loved the begining of this poem. I felt humbled as I read this through. Simpler times is a lovely way to explain the changes in time we face. The nostalgic feel to this poem was great. I loved the title too. The innocense of your memories were very sweet and honest. Great work.
I thought your poem here was lovely. Nice word crafting. The structure was great. The length of the poem was inviting. A simple title, drawing me in. I found no way of improving the poem, it is great the way it is. I enjoyed your creativity in this piece. Good work.
I loved the title, it drew me in. The love was special and was very nice to read this through. The flow was great, the rhymes were perfect. A sweet, innocent little poem. I loved it. Great writing and thank you.
Aww. I thought this piece from you was beautiful. The power of the imagination is evident here. The love was great and the tale was uplifting. The title was simple and fit the words and lines perfeclty. I like how the princess took care of her unicorn. Unicorns are so very special. A nice and refreshing little read. Thank you.
I related so well with your poem here. I have done the exact same thing many times. Just being alone with the woods, fields and trees. I know how you felt when you had to leave, the peace and tranquility is very soothing. I really enjoyed reading this through. Nice work and well done.
Lovely flowing rhymes in your poem here. This poem came together perfectly. I found no way to improve the writiing. Your descriptive writing style was a treat for the reader. You set the scene very well. A nice sized poem, easy to follow. The title was simple and was fitting for the words and lines. Good work and write on.
A neatly rounded story to read through. Sadly this could easily be a true story too. A direct tale and well written in just 75 words. The title was fitting for the story. You managed to leave me wanting to read more of this story, it was in good grammar. Great work.
Nice gripping little story, a great build up to what I never knew was coming. I loved your gramma, describing the storm. The imagery I recieved from this story was great, it was clear and vivid. A dark ending and it also left the reader wanting more. A great little read.
I really liked the rhythm to this little poem from you. The rhythm was catchy and flowing great. You summed up Springtime very well. I loved the sweetness of this little poem. You left me wanting to read more and more of this poem. It was kind of addictive. Great work.
It is funny how this poem from you popped up in the random read and review page.
Great rhymes, great flow. This poem came together perfectly. The funny side was evident here. I bet you were being rather honest too. The poem was sweet and cute together. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought your writing here was beautiful and very moving. Such a beautiful meaning in every line. The tone was heart-felt and deep. I feel this was written with real loving senses. I am touched, moved by the special power of this piece. A passing is to me hard to write about because there are so many feelings involved, but you managed this perfectly here. A sad moment to read through but also very humbling. Thank you.
I have read a few of your writings and enjoyed the depth of how you feel. It is also sad that you feel so hidden away. Keep writing and expressing yourself. Also learn to love yourself. Writing will help you free your feelings. Keep going.
I think your writing is deep, raw and honest. Feeling alone can be very sad and worrying. Again, you have expressed yourself clearly. This piece was simple and direct. Sometimes we have to distance ouselves from our worries and learn to live again. Keep writing and posting.
I thought you wrote this piece very well. You could easily spark a deep conversation with this writing. Nice philosophy used and in fact all you wrote was true. Men do claim their womans body. Your poem was direct and to the point, a well executed piece.
I liked the title of your writing here. I am glad you expressed yourself well here. I liked your depth used and your honesty. This is the beauty of writing, we can let things go and really release our heads onto the paper. Keep writing my friend and keep expressing the deepness in you.
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