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#4784016

Review of Beneath One Distant Spring

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Nicely presented with a good sized font. A nice, rolling theme and rhythm. I enjoyed reading this through. I also liked the philisophical touch and tone to the poem, it was inviting to me. I see this won 1st place. How wonderful. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4784015

Review of The Last Love Letter

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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I thought this was short and simple to read through. The woman has made up her mind not to drag out the relationship. A little sad but effective. You expressed yourself very clearly here and I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783988

Review of Soccer Surprise

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Rated: 18+

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I enjoyed this little tale, it was rather good. Good grammar, good story telling. The pace surely did speed up when they stopped playing soccer. Of course the imagery was good and vibrant. An inviting little read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783986

Review of Sails of the awakened

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a decent piece of writing from you. Describing natures path so very well. I liked the poetic power in this poem. There was good imagery from the words and lines. A short and sweet little poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783979

Review of Photographs and memories.

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

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I thought this was a good little poem to read through. I liked the sentiment and meaning. I also felt emotional about the theme because I understood where you were writing from, (the heart). I found this poem quite powerful. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783978

Review of TO A. H.

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Rated: E

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I thought it was nice that you saw the potential in this person, even if his father didn't see it at all. Was this really written in 1967, like it states at the bottom of the poem? This person has made an impact on you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783976

Review of Schema

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a very, very good piece of writing from you. The meaning and the way you wrote this out was oh so sweet. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. I found this very philisophical and deep. A great read, thank you, be blessed and write on!

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#4783975

Review of Writer's Cramp

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a great little poem. Not only did you nail the message, the tune was so funny as I read it aloud. Good presentation on page. You made me smile. The length was good, it kept the readers attention levels up high. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783846

Review of Remember

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed this great little poem from you. I loved the tone of the words and lines. The romance was very good. I smiled as I read this through. The rhythm was good, the flow was good and the emotions here made the poem the poem a sucess. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783845

Review of The Horizon

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Rated: ASR

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Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a beautiful, beautiful poem from you. Such a heart-warming piece. Written perfectly. No errors found. I truly hope you find your dreams. I really enjoyed reading this through. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783844

Review of RAINING IN THE GARDEN

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A simple and effective poem from you. Nicely presented on the page, centered. There was nice imagery coming from the words and lines. This was nice poetry here. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783843

Review of The Moon

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

Again, your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a lovely, beautiful piece of writing from you. The scene was so mysterious, powerful and inviting. I too wait at night for her to come to me. I look at the night stars and wish her dreams to come true. The title of your story here was good and invited me in. You are a very spiritual person, life is never easy for spiritual minded people, we always are searching, waiting and wanting. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783842

Review of Pick Me

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Time is the key here for you. Just wait and all will happen for you. I felt the heart warming details of your writing here and related very well to what you feel. You were very honest in writing this item out. You expressed yourself very clearly. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783841

Review of Who Stole Your Heart?

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a decent piece of writing, very poetic and powerful. Nice presentation on the page. The structure and flow were very good. There were some very good lines in this work. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783840

Review of Joining the Fun

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Rated: E

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I thought this was written out perfectly. The comical rhyming scheme was excellent and made reading the poem so very much fun. Nice presentation on the page. There were no faults within this poem. A fun piece of work. Be blessed and write on!

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#4783839

Review of A Road Going Nowhere

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A lovely, deep thinkers poem from you. I recieved a lot of soul-searching from this writing. Somehow, I related so very well to what you had written down. I dont know if you actually did sit in a forest and ponder your worth and path. If you did it would explain the lavish details of the forest. Forests are so very specail, void of human life. I hope your path was completed sucessfully. I know this was written and posted a few years ago and times change. Thank you for the lovely piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783669

Review of Whispered secrets

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a very good piece of writing. I really loved the poetic power this poem held. Good imagery coming from each word and line. You made me wish I was in the fields with the flowers, as one. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783662

Review of Book of Conversations

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Rated: E

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An original piece of writing by subject. I stopped for a moment and thought of my own love gone bad and forgotten. There was a lovely tone to this work. I enjoyed the emotions in here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783661

Review of Miss Piggy

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a cute little poem, I had to smile as I read this funny piece through. The title said it all. The funny thing is there was imagery coming from the words and lines. I could see miss piggy ranting and raving. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783660

Review of Nostalgia

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I enjoyed this little poem from you here. I live in England UK and any summer sun is a blessing. I liked the poetic sway to this item, it was very nice. Good presentation and good sized font used. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783659

Review of Fading year

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A well presented poem with a good font used. Nice descritive words and lines. I liked the title, it was fitting for the poem. There was a warming atmosphere to the item. The length was inviting, keeping the readers attention. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783486

Review of Wallow No More

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a neat little poem. Offering advice to the reader. You expressed yourself very clearly. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I enjoyed the read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783483

Review of White Dove

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Rated: E

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A clever piece of writing. Htting out at the amount of darkness and lack of peace. I enjoyed reading this through. Nicely executed and written out. No errors found. I liked the philisophical power of this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783474

Review of The Walking Chalk

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Rated: E

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I thought this was perfectly written out. Great flowing rhymes. You have done a fine job with this work. The details in the poem were very wise and humbling, great work. I really enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4783469

Review of 24 syllable poem

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Rated: E

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Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a sweet and positive poem to read through. I really liked the last line, it was very warming and humbling. I have entered the 24 syllable contest before and found it very difficult. You have done a fine job here. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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