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Review of Far away  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I felt there was an element of truth used here in your poem. I found the prompt to very difficult, I would not have come up with a piece as good as yours. There was nice sentiment here, nice feelings. Nice expressions. I liked the size of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and keep going.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ava

I thought your little poem here was excellent. I loved the poetic sway and power. You described the light and power of the moon so very well. I smiled as I read this through. There was also good imagery coming from the words and lines. I loved every word you wrote. Good work and keep going.

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Review of MY SISTER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Monty

Aww. I thought this poem from you was beauitful. I am sorry for your loss. I felt humbled as I read this through. The rhymes were great and the flow was awesome. I really loved the power of feelings here in this writing. You expressed yourself so well. I did feel emotional as I read this through. Good writing and keep going.

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Review of The Course  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Have a sunshiny day!

I enjoyed reading this poem through. I also enjoyed the form you used. I thought the summing up of life here was awesome to me. There was a lovely poetic feel to this writing. I loved it all. Nice rhymes too. The size of the poem was great as it kept my attention levels up high. Good writing and keep going.

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Review of THE PERFECT GIFT  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG

I liked the sweet humor used in this poem. I thought the rhymes were great and flowed along perfectly. Men shop diferently to women, some spend hours in shops and some spend moments. I prefer short visits. I like how you wrote about WDC here and the raffles too. This is certainly a great place to be .... good work and keep going.

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Review of MAMA  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
SSpark

I saw your entry in the newsfeed so I gave it a read.

I am sorry your Mama is no longer with us, I know life can be cruel. After reading this writing through I thought you are able to look back on your mothers life and smile, almost celebrate her awesomeness. The grammar in this piece was cheerful, colourful. It has been a long time since Mama left and here you are writing about her. She must have made a huge impact on you. Some people are in a league of their own, your Mama sounds like one of those people. I felt your reminsance in this writing. I could sense a tiny tear drop but with a little smile as you wrote this out. One day you will be back with her and smiling again. Keep going, thank you for posting.

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Review of Truth in Action  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- back to basics again!

Nicely executed poetry. I loved the rolling rhythm to you work here. I never use poetry forms so I cannot comment. I liked the different stance to this writing, it was very refreshing to me. A nice size too, it kept my attention levels up high. Great work and keep going. Thank you.

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Review of Barnwood  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Words Whirling 'Round

Nice structure. Nice flowing rhythm. Lovely descriptive manner in this piece of writing. There was a beauty about this piece. Capturing time as the barn rots. I was gripped to every word and every line. No way of improving this piece. Great, inspirational writing. Thank you.

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Review of the dream  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
lynn avalon

I have one request from you before I start your review. Please try to capitalise the I's in this writing.

I have flown across the fields.

Not...

i have flown across the fields.

Well, I thought this writing from you was absolutely amazing. So rich with great grammar and story telling. Honestly, this writing from you sent shivers down my spine and lit up all my senses. Such a beautiful piece of writing. So deep yet easy to follow. I just loved the philosophy of the meaning here. This is by far the most creative piece I have read in many years. So beauitful. I cannot praise this poem enough. It was so very special. This is poetry and writing at its best. Fantastic work. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Arakun the Twisted Raccoon

I loved the story in this writing from you. I really apreciated the depth and meaning. Your descriptive lines were a real treat. After reading this through, I stopped to think for a while. The solitude in Jim's life, the life he has, the meaning of the soul. This was a great inspiration to me. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi

Well done you for believing in hope. What we have to remember is that us humans are very complex and will always trun things sour when they are good and good when they are sour. Life is actually quite a simple little thing. Unlike love which can kill. Thank you for writing a positive piece of writing. Keep going.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
jackiesmuse

Aww. I thought this was a wonderful piece of writing. I was so inspired by this writing from you. I loved the philisophical power you gave me here. This work had everything. You said so much in a few lines. Summing up our mortal lives so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through.

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Review of Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

The rhymes in your poem here were great. I hope I don't offend you but I saw a funny side to this poem. But in all honesty there was an interesting feel to this poem. A truth. Nice sized poem, keeping my attention levels up high. A sweet little poem and was easy to follow and understand. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The sea, part II  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog

I enjoyed reading this exciting story through. Your story telling was great as I was gripped to every word. I am glad the story ended well, this made me smile. The uplifting story was sweet and very simple to follow. You managed to say a lot in just a 100 words. Nice writing, keep going. Thank you.

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Review of Nice Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Norman

Nice rhymes. Nice flowing rhythm too. I felt sorry for the girl in this poem but still had to laugh at your humorous lines. This was an uplifting poem to read through and it made a nice refreshing change. Nice sized font, clearly presented. No errors found. Great writing. Thank you.

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Review of Group Therapy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Choconut

I am not familiar with the form of the tanka so I cannot judge the form. But I did like the honesty in this little poem. Reading this through, the words and lines and what you wrote made me feel nervous, it was quite real. I could feel your tension here. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Thank you.

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Review of Another Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- back to basics again!

To me there was an uplifting feeling along with this poem from you. The rhymes were great and the flow was good too. The title was very fitting for what you had written down. The simplicity of what you wrote was somehow fun and rewarding. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you.

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Review of Without Him  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sophy

I had to feel sorrow as I read this through. Oh the pain and suffering. A nicely written piece of writing, expressing the hurt very well. The sentiment was vivid and real, the pain was evident. The title said so much and drew me into the work. God only knows of the suffering. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mayron57

A well structured piece of writing. Good flowing rhythm, nice rhymes too. I think you covered this subject very well, telling your readers about the confusion alzheimers creates. I can only sympathise with you on this matter. You did express yourself very well. A sad but enjoyable read. Thank you.

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Review of Summer  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

I liked the format this poem was written, short and direct and powerful. There was good imagery coming from this writing. I could feel the heat around me as I read this through. There was also a very poetic sway to this piece. I loved it all. Nice work and thank you.

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Review of Fantasic Zombie  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sox and Sandals

I loved the gruesome feel to this little poem from you. The image is very dark and yet powerful. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I was gripped to every word. It was a refreshing change to read this gory little piece. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning
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Review of My Hero  
Rated: E | (5.0)
THANKFUL SONALI Now What?

I thought you wrote this poem very well. The rhymes were great, the flow was great too. A lovely acolade for this man you have in your life. A lovely positive piece of writing to read through. I would have loved it if this was longer, simply because I was hooked to the rolling story. Great writing. Thank you.

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Review of Our Vows  
Rated: E | (5.0)
G. B. Williams

I thought your writing here was lovely, sweet and warming. The flowing, loving quotes were beautiful to me. I also loved the simplicity of this poem, so easy to follow and understand. Overall, a lovely, refreshing read and was a treat to read through. Nice expressions. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Pony Tale

Aww....

I thought this writing from you was very emotional to me. I felt kind of sorrowful but warm at the solitude in this poem. The honesty of being alone was great, I loved the depth of this poem. As I read this through, I smiled and also felt a tear rise. Nice writing and thank you.

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Review of The Intruder  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Espero

Beautifully written and displayed. Nice story telling too. Moments with nature always stay in our minds. I felt free and spirited as I read your poem through. The wild will always be a good source for writing and you proved that right here. I liked the angle in which you titled this poem. There is a gulf between man and the wild. Nice work, thank you.

Spiritual Dawning
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