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Review of It Was...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I liked the female in this short story, she had a lot of empathy for him. A good amount of vision in this writing. I enjoyed reading this through. The grammar was good and the flowing tale was inviting. I thought for a moment this was going to turn into erotica, it stayed clean. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem through very much. I liked the comic font you used. I also liked the positivity of this piece. Good imagery came from the words and lines. A kind of fun poem with a light heart. I liked the very last line, it gave the whole poem good shape and meaning. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Platonic Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was a very good piece of writing. I loved the honest tone to the words and lines. A deep, sensitive poem. I really enjoyed the read through. I also think you spoke for many other people. Love and life is the same for everyone, it's just that some are more lucky than others. Well expressed, good work and write on!

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Review of Starry Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice font used here and I liked how it looked on the page. A good theme and a little inspiring. There was originality of this poem from you. I enjoyed reading this through. I also liked the imagery. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention up. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I liked the depth of this dark item. I wonder why you wrote such a gruesome piece? Gruesome as in the dark, twisted details. The title was simple and inviting. Dreams often make good writing. I liked the simplicity of this form. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Table of the Dead  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the dark imagery that came along with this writing. I saw a big stately mansion, with paintings in the halls. A long table with candles and silver spoons. I also saw a ghostly figure.

I liked the tone of the writing, it was very secretive. A good sized poem from you, keeping my attention levels up high. I liked the title too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Visiting Someone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
There was good imagery coming from the words and lines here. I could see a road trip but I know that's not the theme. Fact or fiction, I wonder if you found the author. A short and sweet little piece of writing from you. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this poem from you. I also agreed with what you had written out. I am one who sees the beauty in everything and everyone. It takes a caring soul to see through the masks, the make-up, the falseness and still see the beauty. Your poem made a good conversation to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!

Merry Christmas!

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Review of Twist and Turn  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely presented on the page, good font used. I liked the descriptive manner of this writing. You summed up how we forget the scary ride and go again. I enjoyed reading this through. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Widow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I loved the imagery that came along with your words and lines here. A very poetic little story and was a little romantic by theme. I liked the sudden ending too. There was something very inviting about this piece from you. It was short but the story was great. I liked the mysterious tone to the words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think one day, your dream will come true. If Mathew is a kind young man then there is no reason for the dream not to happen for you both. Bella is a nice name and I think you would make a great mother and young family. I read your biography, blue is my favourite colour too. It is good to have dreams that come true. One day yours will. Nice writing, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this writing from you here. It was very well written and nice font used. The humor was great. I had to look up the meaning of britches in Google. lol. A light hearted poem, fun filled and innocent theme. A good read, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Birth Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfectly written and executed. Great poetry and you told a lovely tale here. I enjoyed the rhythm and flowing rhymes too. A good structure to the words and lines. A bright, sunny little poem from you. Absolutely no errors found. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awww, a well written and executed piece of writing. You explained yourself so very clearly and written from the heart and soul. I couldn't help but feel the sadness you must have to live with. One day every thing will fall into place for you. Keep loving the way you do, that is a powerful quality you have there. Be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
A very deep and well expressed piece of writing. I hope the fear passes soon for you. Everyone gets scared, I get scared too. I liked the tone to words and lines, you were being very honest here with this writing. You think very deeply and that is good for a writer. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of So You Come Back  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed the read through. I liked the depth of this writing, it was very poetic to me. The romantic hints were very good. The healthy relationship is promising. There was a good tone to the words and lines here. A decent length for a poem and you managed to tell a good story in a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You are a very well organised woman. It is nice to know you have a loving husband and caring daughter with you. I am glad you found writing.com, everyone seems to say the same things about this site. I joined in 2011 and have never looked back. There is a lot going on in this website and community. And yes, the technicle side of things is confusing. Thank you for the insight into your life and reading adventures and plans in life. You have done well by becoming a YELLOW case here. Thank you and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was a magical piece of writing from you here. The depth and style were great. There were some fantastic lines in this item. The title was very inviting. I really enjoyed reading this through. I also found the poem to be exciting by each word and line. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of My sick dad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt your sorrow as I read this through. I liked the honest way you wrote this, like a letter to everyone. The title was simple. It's not too late to change things around and be at peace again. I hope you find a solution soon. Good writing and thank you for sharing this insight here. Be blessed and write on!

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Review by First Light Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I liked the originality of the writing style. A philosophical piece of work from you. I liked the depth and tone of the meaning. I liked the title too, it drew me in. I found no mistakes or ways to improve the item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of I Never Knew  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought there were plenty of feelings on show here in this piece from you. The expressions were hearty and real. The emotions were running high. A good read. The presentation could use a little work but I still enjoyed the read. You so should show this to your friend. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Bang, Bang  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought this was a very graphic piece of writing. The tone was fearce and the subject was quite up with the times. Schools are different here in the UK. I liked the writing style you used here. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Describing Women  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Perfectly written. Perfectly stated. I enjoyed reading this work through. I related very well to what you had written out. I also agreed with everything you said. Nice presentation and good usage of words. Looks good centered on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Good font used here, looks good on the page. Nice flowing lines, good rhythm too. I enjoyed reading this through. You used the prompt words very well. A good length for your poem too, it kept my attention levels up high. I found no way to improve the item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Butterfly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I related well to this item from you. I think you spoke for many females here in this writing. A deep style of writing, mixed with nature and meaning. It was a joy to read this through. An original themed poem. Good presentation on the page too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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