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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
intuey

I noticed your item here in the newsfeed and decided to give it a read and review.

Very good story telling, great punctuation. The grammar flowed very well. I found no technicle faults. The large, comic font made it easy to read through, follow and understand. "The Voice On The Back Of The wind" is a very inviting title, very spiritual to me. The story and plot was good, I wasn't expecting Daddy to rise the way he did. I also wasn't expecting Momma to make her own plans for Daddy. The evil that Daddy had become was kept clean and not too dark, to me this kept the focus on the angelical side of Momma and the lovely surroundings of where she lived. I enjoyed reading this story through. Nice, interesting work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Heart?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elby Wordsmith

I decided to visit your portfolio here on WDC.

I really liked the structure of this poem. The rhymes were very good. Love makes great writing but can also leave a person too tired for life. I liked your positive attitude to love here. Great flow. Nice presentation too. I couldn't see any faults with this poem, it was great and I liked your honesty here. Good work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elby Wordsmith

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

I liked the philosophy here. I do look in the mirror and see me, smiling. I thought the theme of this writing was very original and positive. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. I also liked the effect this work gave me. You reminded me that we all can be in control of destiny. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Yuba  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- back to basics again!

I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought...

Yuba is a very rare name and kind of catchy. I couldn't help but feel sad as I read this poem through. I have lost two dogs in my life time and it does not get any easier. They do as you say become part of the family. Nice presentation and easy to follow. I found no way of improving your wriiting. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Search  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Mr.Y

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed this little poem from you. I thought you told a little story so very well. The imagery coming from your words and lines was great. You managed to say plenty in just a few lines, the simplicity was fantastic. Good writing.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Greatest Gift  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

I came across your writing in the random read apge.

I really loved the simplicity of this poem from you. It was a clear, positive message here. I was taken back by the inspiring feel you gave me. This is the best piece I have read today. Great writing, so inspiring. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Done.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
fyn

I came across your writing in the random read page.

Great descriptions of a fed up person, expressing their feelings. The title was a good match for the writing. I liked the last line very much, "They won't; we will" this line inspired me to think more positive. I liked the originality of this piece. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Passing Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Envi

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I really liked the poetic swagger to this piece, the title was fitting for the words. I also liked the very last line mostly, it held a special feeling for me. I liked the length of the poem too, it held my attention levels up high. Good writing.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Ruts  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
AJblurryface

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I think you raised some very good questions here in this piece from you. I liked the emotion coming from this piece, I didn't feel so alone as I read this through. Good expressions here, nice work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Jaiam

I came across your writing in the random review page.

Lovely presentation of this poem, easy to follow and understand. I liked the poetic power this writing gave me. I also liked the title, it drew me in to the meaning. The rose is very symbolic and always makes good poetry. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
intuey

I seen your writing in the newsfeed and decided to give a review, seeing as it is an emotional piece.

Very well written and displayed. Nice grammar telling the story. Such a heart warming poem. I am not American and nor did I know your grandson, but I feel the connection of understanding his devotion to the forces. I kind of felt the proud, the honor and the glory here from you. Very sad but very proud. I pray. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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for entry "Morning Poem" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
It's a beautiful piece of writing....
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Review of Finally Free  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this was well written and executed. I liked the freedom you gave me as I read this through. The title was great and drew me into each word and line. With this freedom you have, the art of poetry followed behind. Great work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Independent  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought you expressed yourself so very clearly and direct. I liked the depth of this writing. Good theme and no room for improvement. Independance is a choice but like you said, no one is an island. The freedom of independance is great. Nice work and write on!!!

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Review of When I am no more  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Gaby ~ Finding my way back

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this piece from you was very special. Very thought provoking. I liked the title, "When I am no more" drew me in. The spiritual power in each line was rewarding and you asked some pivitol questions here. I liked the depth of each line. I also found this very inspiring to read through. Good work and well expressed. Write on !!!

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Review of The Realization  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought your little poem here was great, you seemed to make me laugh. I found this poem to be cute and rewarding to read through. I could just see the cat chasing the dot. Nice length for the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and write on.!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I really liked the message in this poem from you. The harsh truth of mans growth here made me feel sad. The descriptive words and lines of this poem were great and painted a lovely picture for the reader. I was gripped to each line. The contrasting values between man and nature. A thought provoking piece of writing. Good work and write on.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Anna Marie Carlson

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed reading this through. The whole item made me smile, it was lovely and refreshing to read through. A simple but very effective piece. I found the poem to be uplifting and positive. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and no need to improve this piece.

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Review of A Writer's Prayer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Prosperous Snow celebrating

I noticed this piece in the newsfeed.

I loved the last two lines, they were very captivating. It's funny because I think we all pray a little before writing, in the hope of writing goodness. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Unknown Icarus

I came across your writing in the random read page.

WOW!!!

This was a lovely poem from you. It held great mystical power and a poetic sway and swagger. I found it very inspiring indeed. This was a clever, well thought out poem. Never doubt yourself as a poet. This was a great piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Jocund  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed this little poem from you. It held good flow and rhythm. You summed a joyful day very well. I enjoyed the imagery coming from this poem. The 24 syllables is not easy to execute but you did a fine job here. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of Work of ages.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sox and Sandals

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I liked how you managed to place an historic feel to this poem. The imagery was good coming from each line. The length of the poem was cool because it kept my attention levels up high. An original theme for a poem and quite inspiring. Good work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Send me a rainbow  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed reading this through. I was gripped to each word and line. I related well to the sorrowful quotes you made and also the positivity of hope and wonder. I liked the title too. There was good imagery coming from the hope in this poem. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Sea  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Have a sunshiny day!

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was very poetic and lavish. The title was simple and the lines were inviting to me. I live by the sea and related to everything you wrote down here. Nice presentation and was a clear and easy read. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Spring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Norman

I came across your writing on the random read page.

I thought this was a lovely, refreshing read. I liked the flowing lines. The title was simple and the meaning of the poem was great. You wrote this out with a cool angle and thought of spring. I found this poem to be very original. Nice work. Write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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