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I liked this poem, it made me realise that I am not the only one who finds writing superior for the spirit. Nice flow, good imagery. Sometimes we wake to a morning where the need to write is powerful. Nice theme and good work.
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The title really drew me in, it created lovely imagery and was quite powerful. Horses are beautiful animals and worthy of a good poem. I will one day write one too. I liked the overall feel of your poem, seemed to pay homage to the horses. Good work and write on!!
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A powerful thank you, written with skill and emotion. You have obviously stopped in your tracks and evaluated your life at some point, I feel all poets do this. I am glad you decided to write about it and share it here. It was well expressed and I liked the empathy you gave here. Good, original work. Write on!!
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Nice writing, I enjoyed reading this through. It must have been tough living during those years. A nice ellagant feeling to this poem. The glory of finding a handsome love is evident here. Romatic power came across me as I read this through. Good work and write on!!
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Nice writing. The title was great for the words and lines. I thought this was an inspiring piece to read through and it made me smile. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work and write on!!
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I related well to your poem here. I am drawn to derelict buildings, they make me think of times gone by, a kind of nostalgic feel for me. Your poem held good imagery. I liked the overall feel of this writing. Nice work and write on !!!
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I thought this writing from you was nostalgic and magical. You made me smile as I read this through. Nice poetic sway and power. You managed to say so much in just a few short lines. A nice piece of writing, good work and write on !!
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I thought this was a wonderful piece of writing. Written perfectly, nice flowing rhymes, good rhythm too. I found no faults. Good work. The poetic power you gave the reader was lovely. I enjoyed reading this through. I see you are no stranger to the world of writing. Nice work and write on!!!
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I smiled at the ending. I honor anyone who can write limericks, it's a very skillful process. Good work. The title was perfect for this poem. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought I would visit your portfolio and noted this had no reviews. I loved it, you wrote this out perfectly. The syllable count was perfect for each rhyme. The flow was great and was easy to read through the poem. I could sense the humor here. Superb writing. Keep going.....
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I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I felt the calling for the one you want. The combination of dreams and reality are great here. Nice descriptive lines of a beautiful scene. I really enjoyed this poem. Good work.
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I thought this was an accolade to women. You and I both know of the complexity of women. I liked how you said it was Gods gift. I liked the overall effect of this writing from you. This writing from you is a conversation provoker. I loved it, superb work.
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I liked your writing style here, this was written clearly and easy to follow. I feel you expressed yourself very very well. Fact or fiction this was a good insight into someones mind and times. No errors found. Good work.
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I thought this was a great little story from you. Short, sweet and very cute. I really liked the subtle ending, this made me smile. Your grammar was fun and made the reading so easy. I thought this was a very uplifting little piece of writing. Great work and write on !!!
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I liked the combination of two meanings here. I liked the romantic power in each line. The rhythm was good and it flowed along perfectly. I also liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels high. A clever piece of writing, good work and write on!!!
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I enjoyed reading this through. I liked the theme. Nice flowing rhythm and good presentation. I felt this was written in a light-hearted way, it was not too serious and depressing. I think you are a great writer and I have read many of your writings. Keep writing and posting. Good work.
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I thought this was enjoyable to read through. I really liked the last two lines, to me they summed the imagination of a child very well. They all dislike school. Nice presentation, easy to follow and understand. Good work.
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I really liked the raw cutting edge to this piece. I liked the depth and darkness. Not all poems have to be rosey and flowery. Nice rhythm in the lines and good flow. I enjoyed reading this through. I feel the title was indicating a rebelion and I loved it. Good work.
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I thought this was well expressed, written and displayed. This poem did make me feel sad but I took the positives from this. I am shocked this writing has not been given 5 stars, I found it very, very emotional. I just have to to give this an awardicom. Thank you.
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I liked the complex way you wrote this out and posted. The title drew me in. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I liked the poetic power this work gave me, I was lightly insired. Nice work.
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I liked the descriptive emotions here, lovely expressions. A nice depth to the poem. I felt inspired by the first two lines. This is why I like reviewing poetry, it gives the writer hope and the reader inspiration. Good work.
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I really enjoyed reading this piece through. I loved the imagery coming from what you wrote down and posted. You wrote this out very well. I hope it did well in the contest. I found this little poem to be quite inspiring. Good writing...
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I liked the title, it drew me in. I liked your philosophy used in this piece. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Good writing style, nice and easy to follow and understand. Good work and write on!!!
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I agreed totally with you here. We are all just cattle, prodded into position. Nice length for a poem, keeping your readers attention up. I enjoy all your writings. Keep going. Good work.
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I thought this was a very nice, romantic poem. Lovely sentiments and nice loving quotes. I enjoyed the form you used too. I enjoyed reading this through, there was excitement in me as I read this through. Nice imagery too. Good work.
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