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#4800228

Review of To My “Lady’s Slipper”

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I enjoyed this little poem from you here. It was very enchanting, rich with positivity. A good structure and good form. I liked the simplicity of the meaning, a sense of peace over me. You said so much in just a few lines. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4800223

Review of “Falling, Fading”

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reading this poem through. It was well executed and rolled along perfectly. The structure was great. You did a fine job here. The subject was fresh and rare. I liked the originality of this work. Good writing, be blessed and write on!

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#4800213

Review of Ocean

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Rated: E

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Great structure and rhythm to this poem from you here. This all made the writing so much fun to read through. You said so much in just a few lines. I truly enjoyed every word and line. Yet another classy poem from you. Keep going. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4800212

Review of THE WONDEROUS ROSE

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I thought this writing here was lovely. There was a positive feeling about this work from you. I loved the grammar and the imagery coming from the words and lines. A simple, sweet and loving item to read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799760

Review of Just a Moment of a Morning

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Rated: E

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I thought this poem was lovely to read through. Nice descriptive manner. The imagery coming from the words and lines was great, it kind of made me feel cold though. Nice presentation on the page. Easy to follow and understand. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799628

Review of Coldwater Creek

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Rated: E

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I noted this writing in the newsfeed. The title drew me in, so I decide to read and review.

Good imagery from this poem. Nice presentation too. I liked the tone of the words and lines. I liked the first line of the last stanza, this is where the imagery came into play. I could even smell the stew boiling away. I enjoyed reading this writing through. good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799607

Review of PSYCHOSIS

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Rated: E

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I thank you for your honesty here in this writing. I know a woman who has the same condition, and she is never happy, never content, always blames herself for things that happen. I can relate to the missery this must cause you. You just have to fine the right place for you, the right area of happiness. Be blessed.

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#4799597

Review of TV Tower

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Rated: E

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Nice presentation, good sized font used, looks good on the page to me. I couldn't help but see a comical tone to this writing, but that's just my opinion. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. The mini story was great. I enjoyed this work from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799590

Review of Hold Strong!

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

I enjoyed the philosophy of this writing from you. I also liked the font you used. A simple message and a powerful tone to the words and lines. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I didnt follow the link to youtube because my browser is too slow for it. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799589

Review of Chasing Dreams

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Rated: ASR

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I thought the rhymes in your poem were great, the flow was great too. This was easy to read and follow. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. The tile was sweet and inviting to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799379

Review of Why ? Oh Why ?

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a powerful piece of writing. The meaning was strong and real. The emotional tone was deep and Godly. The pain was evident and seems overpowering. The title is very inviting and real, it drew me in to the writing. I hope there is peace for you and your friends and family. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799367

Review of Ashamed

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Rated: 18+

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I thought this was well written and executed on the page. The theme was real and vivid. A graphic poem and one I could understand well. This was like a mini film. The title was perfect for the poems words and lines. I have heard ture stories of this kind of nature, real life stories. So sad. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799363

Review of Reminiscence

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Rated: E

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This was well structured and executed. Nice rhymes and rhythm too. A very sweetly written poem. The theme was great, I loved reading this through. The care and sentiment was lovely. This was a joy to me. No way to improve the writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799103

Review of Elsa's Happy Ending

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)

Awww, I liked this little story here, it was rewarding to me. I love all your stories, they always end well. I have never seen "Frozen" but heard a lot about it. To be honest, I dont think I could bare an unhappy ending. The imagery here was good. Nice constant grammar. Adriana was put to rights in the end and that was good. I always see lavish dresses, smartly dressed men and Kings in your stories. I wish I could close my eyes and be there too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4799096

Review of For I love

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Rated: E

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I enjoyed reading your poem through. It was very positive in the end. No one knows why the towers fell, like you, I rise above it. An act of insanity. There were some lovely lines in this item. Nice rhythm too. There was a sense of power of me as I read this out loud. A symbolic piece of writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798890

Review of Respect

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Rated: E

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Very good writing here from you. Great rhyme and rhythm too. A good subject and you expressed yourself very well. Nice writing here. I liked the honesty in your words and lines. I enjoyed every line you wrote out. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798826

Review of Unsung Glory

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Rated: 13+

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I thought this was a great little poem to read through. The flow was perfect, the rhymes and rhythm were perfect too. A noble, powerful poem to me. You used the prompt very well. There were no faults in this writing from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798727

Review of In Memory of Camp

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Rated: E

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I enjoyed reading this through. It was very sweet at the end lines. I was humbled by the romantic power here. A good length for a poem, keeping the readers attention. No errors found. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798726

Review of The Stars

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Rated: E

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I thought this was a very simple yet effective poem from you. I liked the theme. I enjoyed reading this through. I related to what you had written out. I love those extra hours in the morning, just a few more hours. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798559

Review of My Spirit Is Free to Wander

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Rated: E

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I enjoyed reading your little poem through. It was very spiritual and I loved that. There was a nice feeling over me as read this. You managed to give me a sense of freedom. A simple yet very effective piece of writing. I loved every word and line. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798240

Review of Cusp

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Rated: E

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I liked the tone and feel of this classy poem from you. The lines were very descriptive and painted a lovely picture for the reader. I also liked the presentation, centered on the page, looks good to me. A good length for a poem too, keeping the readers attention. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4798237

Review of Here I Am

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Rated: E

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I enjoyed this poem from you, it was very descriptive. There was plenty of imagery after reading this was about a high up temple. The writing made me feel free and warm with excitement. A good theme and a good read. Keep writing, be blessed and write on!

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#4798083

Review of GoT Poems and Stories

for entry "Tripping Through the Shadows"

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Rated: E

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Here is an anniversary review to celebrate your years on writing.com.

I picked this item because the title was very inviting to me. staiNed

Once stated on the newsfeed that "the bigger the light, the bigger the shadow"... I found this quote to be very inspiring and also true. The little poem you wrote was cute and rewarding to me. I must say your portfolio is looking mighty good. Happy anniversary here on writing.com.

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#4797895

Review of In My Minds' Eye

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Rated: E

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Aww, I thought this little poem from you was very sweet. I loved the imgaery that came along with this work. It seems I am not the only one with a vivid minds eye. I enjoyed reading this poem through very much. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4797887

Review of Rush Of Peace

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Rated: E

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I thought your poem here was very lavish by choice of words and descriptive manner. You painted a lovely scene here. This was very enjoyable to read through. The writing was rounded off with the sense of peace and it worked very well. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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