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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

I thought your Santa poem here was awesome. You really made me smile with your awesome rhymes. Such a cheerful little poem. Great rhythm, great flowing lines. Nice story inside the poem. I really enjoyed reading this through. I loved it. I know it is not the right season to be reading Christmas poems but this poem from you cheered me up somewhat. Thank you.

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Review of Teenagers  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
LorenIsOneOfMyNames

A neat poem from you. You summed up teenagers quite well. The flow was good, the rhymes were good too. I enoyed reading this through. I think you worked well on this piece of writing. It was light-hearted but quite factual too. Nice work.

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Review of APRIL  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

A sweet, simple little poem. I loved the first two lines mostly. The presentation was excellent, nice big sized font. Yes, it does rain a lot in April, I was born in April, so this poem mean't something to me. The imagery was good too. Good work.

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Review of Walk Away  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
orengore

Well written, well expressed too. I liked the depth of this writing. I get the feeling this was written about real life situations and experiences. This is why writing is so good. We get to empty our feelings onto a page. With a little editing, this could be much better. Good work though.

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Review of Night Stalker  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Words Whirling 'Round

Great presentation here. Easy to follow and understand. Nice poetic feeling to this writing and I enjoyed reading this through. There was good imagery coming from the words and lines and your authors note really helped this piece. Nice writing.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

WOW, what a clever little poem from you. The theme is very original and different. I really enoyed the rhythm here, the rhymes were great too. You are right, somethings are better to talk about than hide. You did a fine job here in just 8 lines. Good work and write on!!

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Review of Broken  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
fyn

The title was simple and drew me in. I enjoyed the revenge so to speak in this piece. Your originality was great. I like how you ended this piece, it was with power and glory. Fact or fiction, the words and lines were powerful. You expressed yourself so very well here. Good work.

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Review of Fading Memories  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Graywriter

I thought this was sad to read through. Your descriptive lines were great, very poetic. I liked the title too. My heart felt heavy reading this through. You expressed yourself so very well here and wrote this out perfectly. A deep, meaningful piece. Good work.

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Review of Searching  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
PoeticFox

I liked the raw feelings this writing gave me. You expressed yourself so very well. I like how you ended the poem, so original. A deep piece of writing, shedding your feelings onto the page. Nice size poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work.

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Review of AGES OF MEMORIES  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

Aww.

I thought this poem from you was so sweet, so fulfilling, so special. Although you warmed my heart you also brought a tear to my eyes. Such a thoughtful piece of writing. Good flowing rhythm and rhymes, nice presentation too. I really loved every word. Good work.

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Review of Starlit Sky  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I have a feeling this was written from true events in your life. I felt the honesty and truth. The ending was very thoughtful and philisophical, also inspiring. A well written piece of poetry and flowed along great. I also felt a sense of freedom reading this through. I believe we are just tiny dots ourselves in this life. Nice work.

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Review of Assignation  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beholden

I really enjoyed reading this through. The imagery coming of the first three lines was amazing, you really set the scene very well. The ending was great and very positive. I also liked the size, (form), it kept my attention levels up high. Very nice work. Well done!!!

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Review of Bamboo  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale

I thought it was very diligent of you to notice the ways of bamboo in nature. Hat's off for originality here. Nice flow, nice rhythm and good presentation. I loved the start of this poem, I found it gripping. There was a poetic sway about this piece, it was very natural. Good work.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Carol St.Ann

I enjoyed reading this through. The picture at the top of the writing is superb and very special. Your words and lines were great, I liked the sentiment. Lovely presentation. I enjoyed this because I wasn't aware there were female werewolves. I am a fan of werewolves but they scare me. Your tale here touched on the fact that this she-wolf may not be entirely happy with her trappings and pleas to be human. Great poetic power. Good work.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Weirdone-Back in the games

I like how you managed to tell a sweet romantic story coming from a spiders web. Your imagination must have been so alive when you thought this poem up. I liked the innocense of what you wrote. It was humbling to read through. Nice work and well done for the originality.

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Review of Bathroom Inequity  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hyperiongate

I thought your rhymes were excellent here. Great story telling. Gripping to the end. I did find this writing very funny and very original by theme and subject. I was not sure what kind of toilets you were talking of until you revealed it at the end, jail loos. The thing I will remember the most about this writing is its originality. Great work.

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Review of GPS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

I thought the rhymes in your poem here were excellent and made me smile. Writing.com is an excellent place to spend time. I enjoyed reading your poem through. A nice little poem which was sweet and light-hearted. Nice writing and keep going.

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Review of I had a dream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I thought you expressed in eight very well. A nice, well rounded piece. I liked the romantic ending too. The title drew me into the poem and made me smile. Nice large font used making it easy to read and follow. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
LeJenD'

These night terrors must be awful to experience. You expressed yourself very well here. The flow was good, the depth of description was great too. The darkness in this piece was real and scary. I don't know how you cope with this at night. I would love to have read more of this writing, I found it gripping. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale

I thought you expressed yourself so very clearly here in this piece from you. I enjoyed your descriptive words and lines about your situation in life. There was good imagery coming from the words. I enjoyed reading this through. The ending was nice and very uplifting. Nice work.

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Review of O Water  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

I liked reading this through. I also liked the feeling this gave me. The deepness was great. The whole structure in everything you wrote was very special. I have often stared at water droplets, felt their power. You wrote this very well. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you.

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Review of My Woe  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Elisa: Middle Aged Stik

I loved your honesty in this acrostic. I wonder where your critics are now? are they here on WDC? I liked the depth of this poem, it was really interesting to read about your challenges in writing. I see this was written several years ago now, so much may have changed by now. It helps to read other peoples poems to regain that inspiration to write. Good work and keep going.

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Review of Broken Heart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
lexos02

I thought your poem here was rather good. Nice rhythm, nice flow. Good rhymes. The title was simple and matched the writing perfectly. I think losing a love can be too much but it does make a good poem. Writing about a broken heart is helpful. You expressed yourself very well here. Good work.

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Review of A Place to Hide  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elizabeth

I thought your writing here was lovely. You managed to transport me to another world, a world of hope and wonder. I loved it. I think we all have a special place to go and be at peace. You wrote this very well indeed. Nice flowing lines, nice imagery and feelings. Good work.

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Review of MOTHER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

Simply written and displayed. Nice sentiments and good meaning. Mothers are very strong in thier roles as mothers. You described mother very well here. The title was simple too. Easy to understand this poem and I enjoyed it all. Good work and keep going.

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