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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of Whistle Stop  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
OMG, that is funny! So well written and so many of us can relate to the idiosyncrasies of others that drive us crazy.

It was beautiful how coming back with The Battle Hymn of the Republic chocked Betty's ambition to carry on.

Excellent writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of Fever  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, quite the description! You have a talent for words, descriptive and you make it interesting to read. I wish you the best in your writing.

Seabreeze

p.s I see you are a newbie - welcome to Writing.com
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not sure if the is fiction or truth because I am not sure what to say. If true, I hope he came back. In either case, good writing.

Blessings to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Other than a couple of typos, this is an excellent story. I enjoyed it all the way through. I was sad though that the detective got it!

Best wishes to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting post. I don't think I filled it out just right. Fun anyways,

Thanks
Seabreeze
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Review of A Seam  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is my favorite phrase: "...and light rips into fractals." I like the word fractals and can see its potential usage in poetry. Never seen it used before.

Beautifully written with a mystic to it.

Oh, and yes, welcome newbie!

Seabreeze
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for entry "Faux-ku" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is great! I have a hard time with this form of poetry. I never seem to find words that flow, especially enough of the right words. You have put so much meaning with little words.

Great job,
Seabreeze
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Review of Activities Blog  Open in new Window.
for entry "A Moment In Time" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Fascinating poem. The workings of the mind is how I feel awaking from a dream!

Relating the mind to a puzzle is excellent. And, many times it is as if someone came along and scattered the pieces.

Gread writing,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Yes, he is beautiful; but again all dogs I love. They seem to look into our souls; knowing that we need them.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is so pretty. It has a beat when I read it. I can visualize the work going on as I read. So, I am there looking off from a distance.

Thanks for writing this one,
Seabreeze
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Review of Time for Bed  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute and so true for all of us past children, ha, ha. My dog even objects to bed time.

Nice writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of FunGirl-27  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very pretty poem. The words tell of a love strong with a mystique attached to it. It flows beautifully and has a unique rhythm to it.

Wonderful writing,
Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome newbie
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very beautiful. We are truly blessed by our Lord with the gift of life here and the better gift here after!

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review of Never Mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this. It caught me off guard as that was not the ending I expected. Great job,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That works; its cute. Now I must go create one.

Seabreeze
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Review of Healing Hands  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is beautiful and a very nice tribute to our wonderful healers. Poetry is a wonderful way to show people we care about them as well as fun to read.

Best to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for the trinket! The story, very interest and wild; not sure what to think but was interesting read.

Seabreeze
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple, but nice. Sets the stage of winter. I remember my snow boots making those crunches and we were eager to get out an make a snowman.

Love it,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Amazing what you have done on this poem. I like that it flows in structure as well in thought.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi G.B. Williams,

Seabreeze back to say hi.

These are amazing; very creative to come up with your Squibbles. Great place to have a reference for sayings and you can always refer back to include in your writings. Great idea,

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review of ON A CLIFFS EDGE.  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, love the format you have chosen; it flows so well and gives it a special flavor. My favorite is the 4th stanza. I think of the seed and its growth how we all grow and become better as time goes on; especially people who write. Amazing creativity here at Writing.com.

I also see that you have written a book (Amazon). I do hope it has been fruitful for you.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
for entry "Cyclical" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. The Circle of Life. I am glad it starts over and over. God's blessing to us. We get a new chance at the beautiful of it all.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review of Toys and trinkets  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice. I like the rhythm, or bounce it seems to have. Fascinating how we need our trinkets and our toys. What is it about us that like to collect things? Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing collection of trinkets, thanks!
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is funny! I like using animated targets and insects the better. I could visualize these characters talking with their long pointed noses and could remember when bit.

Great job in your dialogue,

Seabreeze
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