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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful! Yes, I remember when my husband passed and I worried I would not remember his voice. But, if I rest, silent, and think of him, I can remember the voice in my head. Maybe I am crazy, but I believe I do.

Blessings to you and enjoy your dad as much as possible.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
for entry "Manage a Photo Album" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi JACE,

I am back again. Where do I go to learn how to upload or add GIFs to my photo album or any item I have created.

Seabreeze
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Review of Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thanks for letting me see your site! Wow, very creative.

Also, thanks for the trinket! One coming at you,





Best to you,
Seabreeze
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great, thanks. There is a lot of information but maybe I am not looking in the right place?

Can a static item be changed to a book item? I have a static item that I keep adding to daily and plan on doing so each day for a year. Will I run out of space? Maybe I don't need to make it as a book.

Seabreeze
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Review of Jesus Vs. Santa  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this Leslie! It so sets the tone of Christmas Mythology verses our Creator. Of course there is no comparison. But I do like it, how you have had the two entities having there conversation. I so wish more people would question the fact that Christmas and Christ our savior have no real connection since Christ wasn't even born on December 25. Well, that is another topic.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea, your daily garden walk. I love plants as well but would never think of getting a snip off someone's plant. Over all, cute premise for a story. I didn't see any errors and it seems balanced in thought. Nice job.

Seabreeze
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Review of Contest Entries  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very cute and unique story. I had one area where I did't understand what you meant, see below.

I didn't want to be with him right back

Not sure what....right back means in this context.

Best luck with your contest entry.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hard to argue with the heart! I like the analogy of what waiting is to a lover. We do, as a society, wait for the plates to move and move and witnessing water weather rocks is another excellent description. Using glacier comparison is powerful as well. It is a short poem but packed with power from a lover who is desperate to be with his love. It has all of the elements of emotional love. I like that it is not a poem that rhymes. Excellent poem.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A donation for your contests.

Seabreeze
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Review of NATURE  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful, very lovely! It says to me, there is so much beauty out in our world. We must stop, listen and take it in...it is free - the smells, the sounds of birds and the rocks sliding in the oceean. Just a few of God's greatness.

Thanks for this poem...I needed it.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
OMG, I died and have gone to trinket heaven! You are amazing. How do you find the time and the artistic creation to develope all of these.

Love it,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe this is one of the most fabulous sites and I want to donate. How do I do that?? Please let me know.

You do great work Princess Megan,

Seabreeze
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Review of Little Olop  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let me say, Olop, what does it mean? All I could find is Our Lady of Peace.

Sorry, that is not important, really, but that my mind, ha, ha! I love the story because it is about our lives. We are continuously climbing and moving rocks. There is always obstacles in our way that need to be moved before we can move on. How else would we grow. Your free verse tells it like it is. But, it is so much easier to climb that patch if we have our Lord by our side.

Great job in showing what our growth path is like.

Seabreeze
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Review of What Do I Write?  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Powerful piece. It has a sad ring to it, but it rings true for all of us. Limited time as we age brings out an urgency. For me, do I write today, paint (watercolors), play on my keyboard (music) or ???

We do have so many choices when it comes to writing. You have an amazing portfolio! Keep going at it as there is much to get down of paper.

Blessings to you,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow, that is a good story. I was feeling sorry for the guy. Great dialogue, great suspense. I hope you continue it.

Seabreeze
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Review of Mixed Emotions  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute! I like it when I am surprised with the ending. Many times you can guess how a story will end and you didn't disappoint me!

Great work,

Seabreeze
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Review of PEACE, Be Still  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely written. I believe we all have been created as to what the Lord wanted us to be. He has a purpose for each and every one of us. Your poem says it well. It is wonderful that we are not all alike. It is also sad that so many, especially young, folks want to be like each other. And, so true how we are influenced by others, by rules and regulations, some for good, some for bad. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very interesting poem. The poem has a rhythm, a beat to it. This attracts me to it. I am not normally much for the dark side but the words are beautiful and they flow. Well written and you wrote it so that it would dance, wow!

Seabreeze
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Review of Messier 64  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fascinating photo. Did you take it?

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let my say welcome newbie. Hope you find Writing.com to be everything you want it to be.

This is nicely done. I would not have thought to write an ode to my email friend but great idea. It completely tells of your relationship and your heart comes through in your poem. It gave me thought in how do I look at my friends here and so I reflect on them and what they mean to me. It is important for us to remember and give thanks to those that help and assist us in our writing. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done amazing job sharing your feelings, those deep hurts that haunt you. I want to hug you, reach out to you and I know nothing about you. You have a true talent for writing and if you can express the deep hurts you have, I believe you write just about anything you want.

I am glad you are hear at Writing.com. I think this is a great therapy, writing, a release. Not only can it help you but others will benefit. I say that because sometimes it takes another's hurt to help us come out of ours. Many of us don't know how to express it. You have given a lot here in your pain. We all have pain but not always able to express it and we need to get it out to recover.

Blessings to you my friend. Continue here. It just may be where you need to be.

Seabreeze
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Review of Soulmate  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh yes, I love this! You speak as I think about the ocean but you have been able to put it to words! Wonderful poem and I so enjoyed it!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great question asked in your poem! I guess it just is human nature. Well written and flows wonderfully. Oh yes we do pay, don't we?

Great writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of A Breath Of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, great writing! I love your poem. So much greatness said in such few words. The opening line grabbed me as I am invited to see your struggles but warned about them. It is such an upbeat poem. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review of Secret Garden  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

I can see why you had an winning entry! Amazing imagination you have. I really got into the story. In fact, I wanted to be a fly on the wall for future looks into your Secret Garden!

Great write,

Seabreeze
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