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Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I always loved The Monkeys. Add me to your list!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So well done! Love the history as well. Great piece!

Seabreeze
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Review of Woke  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A very cute and well told story. I could not get my video to work on my You Tube so not sure about the Woke song; did you write it?

Great layout on the story, lyrics and music.

Thank for sure a wonderful read.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice poem. I like the style and the symbols used. It looks so nice centered. Sitting under a tree is a favorite passtime.

Thanks for your poem
Seabreeze
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Review of Promptly Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute and nicely written! It love the rhyme that has come from it. It had me pulled in to see what was living in there, ha, ha!

Seabreeze
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Review of Dog  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it! Anyone who has ever had or has a dog would love it as well.

Love the Diamante. It is fun to write and looks pretty. Who doesn't like diamonds!

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This tugged at my heart. It is beautifully written; love the format. So hard to lose someone we love. My prayers go with you.

Seabreeze
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Review of CON TIGO  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am not very knowledgeable on the Haiku poem, but I love this; it is beautiful. It says so much about the person. They are felling good about themselves, others, they are happy, at peace, at home and they acknowledge that they are important. What more could anyone ask for. Wonderfully written.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Great poem of what one's fate can be. We do have choices but sometimes things go totally wrong and maybe we can't pull out. We are not to judge each other; we are to be there if we can to help. "But, for the grace of God, go I." comes to mind.

Thanks for the read,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, that was fun!

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review of Activities Blog  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Amazing the number of poetry styles. The triquain swirl looks like an amazing amount of work. However, worth trying just to see if it can be done. Great job on yours,

Seabreeze
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Review of Bills  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Right you are! Very well written,

Seabreeze
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Review of Ode To The Earth  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an amazing poem. I love its tempo. I have trouble pulling out words that are descriptive.

Maybe I just don't seem to think of certain words like I see others come up with. My first husband use to read the dictionary, he had a large vocabulary, I miss not having various words at my finger tips.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Beautiful, A Summertime Memory! A feeling of love, excitement and extreme energy expelled. It screams youth! You have selected some amazing descriptive words. I really like:

We could not escape the
glitter of His omnipotent,
twinkling eyes peering
down on us from above
the Cocoa evening.

You have truly brought out the feeling of being in love and what love does to a person. Great writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love your "C" notes.
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Review of Carry On!  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written! It brought back memories when I visited a battle field in West Virginia. You could almost feel the presence of someone or something. I stayed slient and just listened.

Amazing piece of poetry,

Seabreeze
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Review of Keeper of Absence  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, this poem is very descriptive; giving a clear picture of the action going on. Sometimes when I read poems, they don't grab me and I want to leave. Not this one, I wanted to read on and on.

Excellent writing, pulling me in. That is what you want from writing!

Thanks,

Blessings Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well, that was fun to read! Very cute story. I was pulling for the Boss all the way to get his gun back, Ha, ha!

Thanks for the entertainment!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, so sad to hear about your frig!

Love the poem as I love left overs too.

A fun read,

Seabreeze
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Review of Sleeping Rough  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Sleeping Rough tells a vivid story of life on the streets. In fact, just reading it may be say to myself, "Thank God I am blessed with a home and someone who loves me." I have never been in that situation so it is truly difficult to know what folks go through.

The poem is complete and the feeling flows of the hardships of such a life. I saw nothing that needed special attention; it is complete in its description. If one wants to be picky, the very last line, after the word story is a period or comma that is not needed. Keep writing amazing poems.

Seabreeze
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Review of Whistle Stop  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
OMG, that is funny! So well written and so many of us can relate to the idiosyncrasies of others that drive us crazy.

It was beautiful how coming back with The Battle Hymn of the Republic chocked Betty's ambition to carry on.

Excellent writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of Fever  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my, quite the description! You have a talent for words, descriptive and you make it interesting to read. I wish you the best in your writing.

Seabreeze

p.s I see you are a newbie - welcome to Writing.com
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Not sure if the is fiction or truth because I am not sure what to say. If true, I hope he came back. In either case, good writing.

Blessings to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Other than a couple of typos, this is an excellent story. I enjoyed it all the way through. I was sad though that the detective got it!

Best wishes to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting post. I don't think I filled it out just right. Fun anyways,

Thanks
Seabreeze
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