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Review of The Old Poet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)



Hello! *Smile*I am reviewing:
 The Old Poet Open in new Window. (E)
Just a quirky piece I wrote tonight
#1752282 by FailedChoices Author IconMail Icon







FIRST IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* A very thorough poem. It is creative and original. It gives me clever vibes. I like the progression that the stanzas take until the last two lines. Then there is culmination and irony at the end.

IMAGERY AND YOUR EMOTIONAL SIDE:*CheckR* You remain in the third person and are taut with lovely images that come through this good poem well. Such as:


How to search the sky without the wings
of the albatross, or golden eagles


I like the fact that you might have assumed the role of the personna for us. You are very sympathetic toward him. This I really liked. Great imagery.

PHYSICAL SIDE: *CheckR* This side of the poem describes the aglessness of an aging poet. Something you feel you are proud of. Good lesson. It is informal and not preachy.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX, SPELLING: *CheckR* Good grammar. No mistakes in spelling that I could come across. The material in arrrangement of clauses or what one says, rhyme and rhythm is fine. It might be good to mention what traditional verse you are using at the bottom of your poem.

FLOW: *CheckR* The poem examines, it teaches in a breezy way, wraps us with good lines.

SUGGESTIONS:*CheckR* WRITE ON!

LAST COMMENT: *CheckR* I would certainly consider this poet one that deserves higher than normal attention. It gives you *Star**Star**Star**Star**Halfstar*! May you continue on with good marks in the company of many WDC members!



Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Review of Published Poems  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This folder deserves five stars. Like much of the other folders you have here, they are based on community hard work and essential participation as well as cream-of-the crop original work. This is something I myself am awed and grateful to. I love your Bio. It fits. I am from Leonard Cohen Generation buddies. This is all the more interesting to me that you like the" just an old fashion love song coming down in two part harmony" guys. The fact that your publications are excellent gives you even more skill to go the distance.

Best Regards.
Feather Duster
aka vicki
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Review of Zephyr Cove  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Loved this item, really. Saw you on the Public Review page and was impressed with your Bio. I love Taylor Caldwell who wrote the novel, "Pillar Of Iron" about Cicero. This has pizz-azz. Have you ever considered flash-fiction as being a great a way of life? I meant it just feels so exciting. This is extra good. It's a great genre. For last comment: much to read. I know!

Best Regards.


Feather Duster
aka vicki
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Review of The Midnight Ball  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


I am reviewing:

 The Midnight Ball Open in new Window. (E)
Lighthearted entertaining
#866457 by super sleuth Author IconMail Icon


FIRST IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR**Heart* Such a mysterious wood you speak of! The creatures of the night! How impaling. How intricate with lines of simplicity and special signs for us to go by with that delightful last light of line to tell us about the Ball.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR**Heart* You have a constant warning for us: it is pointing toward that last line. I grope with it. It fits. I do see the creatures. I do see the "mystery" in this material as it glimmers at us. Good spelling, good grammar.

SUGGESTIONS: *CheckR**Heart* I'm not going to make this poem what it isn't.. With good rhyme and stanza style with the lines equal, the rythm torked by a free verse glamour, it stands out as a very cool poem. So I don't see to criticize here.

FINAL COMMENT: *CheckR**Heart* I wonder. The Midnight Ball has a magical quality. Could it have been explained more without showing up with that last line as the total key? Probably not.


Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)


 Back To The Past: Jane Austen Seventeen Open in new Window. (ASR)
Jennifer is unhappy with Calin.
#1746961 by Party Princess Megan Rose Author IconMail Icon



BASICS: Good storytelling!


FIRST IMPRESSIONS: Excellent characters.



STYLE: Marked as yours, I recognized it. Way above average.


GRAMMAR, SPELLING: Only a few typos. Words: chivalry and brought instead of bought "Jennifer home." in two places. I am not sore over that. Your grammar is stylish and done well for a period-piece story.


SYNTAX: You have worthy material here. I am glad my name and Bill's materialized in this as did Megan and Ray. Perfect idea. Good inside the vulcrum. Inside the sphere. Twist the globe and make things private and public, new and old, you and others not of this world.


WOULD I READ IT AGAIN? Yes.

There has bee nothing that hasn't told me that you don't love Jane Austen. You have treated her character with dignity, grace, and elegance almost always. Without fail. What gives me these impressions is the ceaseless enjoyment I get from reading your works. Intriguing. Rare.


Have fun with those who review it. I hope you get more feedback.


Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Rated: E | (5.0)


A Little Drummer Boy Open in new Window. (E)
A young man is inspired to start a new holiday tradition.
#1358192 by NickiD89 Author IconMail Icon


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* Merry Christmas! This is such an impressively described piece for this time of year. You out-did- yourself with the detailed description at "grandma's house" and the themes of the piece run well with what Christmas is all about. I can't but smile at nona, she is so endearing and well-explained. A youth who meets up with her during the holiday eason is well-described too!

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR* Found no spelling mistakes. Your grammar is above adequate, it works well with good dialogue and tight phrases. The syntax? In other words, the material? It is brilliant. Just so nostalgic, so wonderful that I
was waiting for snowflakes on Jason's cheek at the church. Nona warmed his heart. And mine too. If it is based on real situation, it is most most endearing. Do you suppose Jason speaks from a voice that is a different drummer? I've heard that phrase and it might be appropriate here. Is Jason lonely? If so, he has gathered courage to make his way to Nona.

FINAL COMMENTS:*CheckR* I hope you spend Christmas with loved ones. Nona loves Jason and a family traditonal Christmas is always interesting to walk into.




Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)


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Mary Bennett's Happy Romantic Ending Open in new Window. (ASR)
Mary Bennett gets a happy romantic ending.
#1723072 by Party Princess Megan Rose Author IconMail Icon


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* An excellent mix, an adventurous romp with Mary Bennett who gets married and becomes Mary Trent. What equally good dialogue that is done in the style of Megan Rose's first novel, "A Passage To Romance." Loved the longer descriptions and the underlying emotions that the characters flower with.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR* The only spelling mistake I came up with was on the 7th line: bought should be brought -- bought Miss Mary Bennett to visit her sister Elizabeth
Grammar moves well. You are very respectable with it and it tells a heart-warming cycle of tales as these items in this folder play out. Your material is a sign of the times: Jane Austen is being brought up everywhere on media these days.

FINAL COMMENT: *CheckR* Good ending that soothes the palette after an apetizer of info on Mary and her cohorts. I'm proud of anyone who would write this well. I'm even more flattered that you are a good friend on this journey. Voila! Professional writing.

Feather Duster
aka vicki

Let's all write on!

Becoming Nature SP, JBIWT, & Circle of Sisters multi-sig
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)


The Romance Of Mary Bennett Part Two Open in new Window. (ASR)
Part Two of Mary Bennett's romance.
#1723036 by Party Princess Megan Rose Author IconMail Icon


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* I have been entranced by Mary Bennett since the first I heard of her in this brilliant and exciting folder about Jane Austen. Anyone who is anyone must read it. A true-to-heart must-read. As I recall, in high school, Jane Austen was emphasized. However, I went with weaker heroine-authors to idolize. Those that wrote. Princess Megan Rose's folder is just a tour-de-force.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR* Found no spelling errors. Spotting slight weak spots in identifying characters because I am not as quite at reading as some. However, as you develop this woman, Mary Bennett., she is larger than life, her characteristics ones that you can recognize immediately. I love traveling back in time with books. This is a rare chance for me to do so. Such grand material!

PRAISE AND APPLAUSE:*CheckR* Hurrah for someone who has endured folder work that folds out like an elegant series. It would be difficult to criticize it if the truth were told. I applaude your managing those characters with a blithe spirit. It is characteristic of you in your writing. Honorable even with a Mary Bennett that you describe.

FINAL COMMENT: *CheckR*I will relax and read on with this folder. I don't like missing an episode. That good. It makes this folder special for me. I double-dog dare more members to read these items and give Megan Rose some room on how many of them are tops. I re-read here at times.

A beautiful Rose signature.
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Review of Memories of Fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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Memories of Fall Open in new Window. (E)
The approach of Fall brings a message of eternal love.
#1608043 by Winnie Kay Author IconMail Icon


FIRST IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* What color! What brass! This piece sings professionalism. It is so inspirational. I like what you do to a story to make it special.

GRAMMAR,SPELLING,SYNTAX: *CheckR* Didn't spot any errors in spelling or a grammatical sense of things. Your material wings it. It becomes a veritable journey to think on. More. It takes on what I like to think on with romance and with buck season. Nothing could be closer than a twosome like this.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR* It's little pieces like this that I just love. Excellent and well-told. A colorfully thoughtful piece of good work.


Write on, Winnie!


Becoming Nature SP, JBIWT, & Circle of Sisters multi-sig
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Rated: E | (5.0)


RIDE OUT THE STORM Open in new Window. (E)
When all else fails, just ride out the storm.
#1203787 by SHERRI GIBSON Author IconMail Icon


FIRST IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR*How wonderful that I should have found this poem in the features this week with Romance/Love's Newsletter. An exclusive.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING:*CheckR* Nicely arranged, excellent grammar and spelling. Now the material. Just as magical as it gets. I love your positive atitude. May it always stay that way. Your words seek the truth, our well-beling. What could be better? You are just the right material for us all.

FINAL COMMENTS: *CheckR* Manys a' times I have felt the depression of not being good enough and seeking how to master that. This is just the poem to remedy that! GIve in to it, and it matches all. WIthout our juices flowing and our passages all open, we would not be free. With knowledge like this poem we CAN be free.

Write like an angel, You are.

Feather Duster
aka vicki


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Review of The Storm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


 The Storm Open in new Window. (E)
Please enjoy this cinq cinquain...5 stanzas consisting of 2-4-6-8-2 syllable patterns.
#1458000 by Iowegian Skye Author IconMail Icon


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR*Excellent lines of a grim storm scene. I liked your words, their tenseness. Being the clouds rolled in from the west, I'm wondering if there is underlying meaning there. Something that has gone on, in a mystery kind of way. You have a prophetical third stanza. It claims the poem. I can just see it pour. Then? Light at the end. How good.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR* The word you want in line 9 is spelled:crescendo. Your free lines are well-spaced and give great angles. Just a storm? Then, in that case, a relieving sight. Material worth reading. Good grammatical presence.

FINAL COMMENTS: I liked your centering this poem. It imagines itself perhaps like clouds. The value of the poem is there. Giving us sustenance with nature. Nature poems dealing with Acts of God even define a spirit to them. I liked that about this poem.

Write on! Excellent work!

Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Review of For I See  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* A beautiful poem with beautiful words. I find a sort of psychological relief with this one. It begs you to read more as the lines rule the stanza's meaning. You are swept off the ground with it and it takes on heighth and depth. You can only dream of being "loved" like this.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING: *CheckR* I liked the grammatical sense to this poem. The poem did not rely on imagery as much as it did a life-form philosophy with "love" as its eternal. This sustains through the poem and is done magnificently. No spelling errors exist.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR* I loved understanding this poem. With each line, since I personally have a deeply loved partner I measured my own lifestyle with him and it gave me an easy, serene feeling by the ending of the poem. It is very straight-forward. Sometimes that kind of thing just comes out all that much better than being subtler. Nicely done.


Feather Duster
aka vicki

Becoming Nature SP, JBIWT, & Circle of Sisters multi-sig
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Review of Bogeyman Nights  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* How enjoyable this piece was. It should be in Simply Positive. I love the humor I got from it. The thing is a similar thing happened to me at a young age. But not any of these circumstances. Bogeyman stories can be fun and even scary. Your take had a nice wit to it.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING:*CheckR* Perfect spelling. Good grammatical sense to it. The material I applaude. Bogeyman stories can be fun to hear about. Something like practical joker stories.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR* I can tell you have great talent in the writing business. You wrote thiis with ease from my end of it. Simply divine.

Feather Duster
aka vicki


Becoming Nature SP, JBIWT, & Circle of Sisters multi-sig
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)


IMPRESSIONS: I have a high opinion of this piece because it runs so well. It is excellent dialogue, and provocative characters. The view is really real. Even though it has a historical lean. Love your Kitty, what a gal.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING. Good in grammatical senses, perfecf spelling. The material for women is enchanting, jjust so much fun to read as it goes easy on you, and gives us magic with ethics. I love to see your characters proposed to
It is like a turn in your work as it moves that repeatedly is a success and feels good.

FINAL COMMENT: With that first paragraph, I was caught. The piano-playing . One of your best first paragraphs in formula terms. Loved the eyeglasses motif. An all-around well-done piece that went by me in a whiz. That's because as an author you are a whiz.

Feather Duster
aka vicki


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Review of The Climb  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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The Climb Open in new Window. (E)
My brother Wayne who contacted lung cancer from Agent Orange, and succumbed to it in 2007.
#733956 by Kings Author IconMail Icon




IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* An item I hold up as very important in my life. I beat it. I didn't have any cancer and three and half years ago I quit with no repercussions or wish to go back to it. As a poem, this really stands. As truth, as poetry.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING:*CheckR* Good advice-material for a poem. If we hear it this way, we can take heed without being as preached to. It lingers in our minds as lyrical and as God is watching as you say, his song about it comes to you.
Good grammatical sense and no spelling mistakes.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR* I just love your portfolio because I have reviewed you before and am very impressed. If you have time just browse the item below from mine. It's appropriate. Just a thought . . .so write on!

Feather Duster
aka vicki
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)


 Just One More Try. Open in new Window. (ASR)
Prompt One. We really do God's head in.
#1178150 by Destiny Falls Author IconMail Icon



IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* Your storyline was certainly a spiritual adventure to read. In the genre of fantasy, you have taken us into your heart and given us a sweet mystery with the birth of a baby. I found it a maize of good phrases and decisive words that gave us a higher calling toward our spiritual needs.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX,SPELLING:*CheckR* One mistake should be grammatically corrected: In line 8, His shook his head should be He shook his head. The syntax of the short story was like a divinely theoretical discussion and it came off well. No spelling mistakes appeared.

FINAL COMMENT: *CheckR* With the finality of the last line, I know that the gist of this piece culminates in an overwhelming event in the life of Maria. Just as important is our attention to your detailed account of rising life in the midst of death or near death. Nicely taken up and explained.

Feather Duster
aka vicki


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Review of Blueberry Pickin'  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)


 Blueberry Pickin' Open in new Window. (E)
Blueberry picking with my granddaughter proved to be a memorable experience.
#1707475 by Ah, September! Author IconMail Icon



IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* Nostalgic or maybe up-to-date nice piece about "blueberry picking" in Florida.

GRAMMAR,SYNTAX, SPELLING: *CheckR* Excellent grammar with the dialogue being right-on-target. Don't worry about the subject, it looked very enticing. I was very tempted to think of wild strawberries. I love to pick and gather those. So you didn't miss at all with what you have here. That alligator. I've seen one in Florida too. Peaceful. A place where they made a Johnny Weismuller film. This was close to the home we inhabited then. No spellng mistakes and I liked the font.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR* Easy to read material such as this goes down well for a contest entry. Good luck.

Feather Duster
aka vicki

A beautiful Rose signature.


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Review of The Funeral  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)


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Just about covers it all, when it comes to a funeral. It reels in the years of maybe really knowing "mother" and finding a prayer for in the end not in vain. Well-done style. I found it very spiritual and good to relate to. Great for a feature in the Spiritual Newsletter this week for purposes of really giving readers a chance to gain comprehension on the matters of mind, spirit, and soul.



Feather Duster
aka vicki

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FIRST IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR*Examining Sci Fi like this, (what little I know of it by reading it), I found it quite exciting and suspenseful. "Quorilax: High Tide" is a true and golden masterpiece. As the Hub Folder continues on, I think I will read it. Even if I don't review it, I would like you to know that it is a great undertaking on your part, and I admire you for it.

GRAMMAR, SYNTAX, SPELLING:*CheckR* There were no mistakes in spelling that appeared to me. Your material was swiftly a
good piece for me to read with its congrousness, without the pain of reading through much conjectures. Material like this
is fascinating. Like a conundrum, it falls into place. I liked things in sucession and noted in "One": 'like a tiny deer caught in giant headlights"; "Two": "Had I become the pet of a giant cat?". Lines also like: "I must be um . . .a little king." and in,say,
"Five": You will be where you been thus far, with Zarbaxa." Quotes which are the fibers that you find flow amongst good dialogue
lines.

SUGGESTIONS:*CheckR*Tell us more, tell us more. THus, is the reason for reading on with this piece.

FINAL COMMENT:*CheckR*It is only my opinion. I openly want to admit that I love a Sci Fi channel on TV. Film sometimes
can do justice to a piece. However,in the long run, for me,it is the novel that keeps time with the causal theory of relativity in a silent, mature, and effective way for me.


Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Review of Claire  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice intro to a mysterious girl. If this gels. it is something your memory will love to explore. Put a comma instead of period after . . . new pitcher," in the fifth line to keep grammatically correct. Voila, another excellent beginnings for a story. Write on!
Best of intentions,
Feather Duster
aka vicki

I modified this to fit my Portfolio at the current time.
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"Mina" Open in new Window.
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IMPRESSIONS: This journal, about three wives of Dracula is done tastefully and descriptively. Romance is the center of Megan Rose's journal here as it is in many of her exclusive pieces that come acrossin changing times like barbie dolls and ken dolls, princesses and princes, kings and queens, indian maidens and warrrors in armor,and in this case, vampires and their wives.. She is steadily giving us great picturesque stories that are great with characters and their attitudes in a psychological way. She is really good at it. I like her many sides to wolves as well and how she has worked with wolves in her work.

GRAMMAR: A few mistakes. Typos.

SUGGESTIONS: Continue with entries to tie in. It's an exciting journal.

FINAL COMMENTS: Princess Megan Rose's graphics have always been exceptional and the best. As you browse her portfolio those there in different folders are a joy to examine, showing a personal touch and a brilliant artistic examination of the labour of life and life in fiction.


Feather Duster
aka vicki

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Review of God's Eyes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)


IMPRESSIONS:*CheckR*Long are the days when I have feared the devil's wrath. To be there where the Lord lies in truth and civility toward opinions, I can see through these eyes, too. And How Great Thou Art. Thank you.

GRAMMAR, SYNTAX,SPELLING:*CheckR* Material for all time, all ages, all places. Excellent verse lines, steady and traditional. Content material at a balance, no spelling mistakes.

SUGGESTIONS: *CheckR* Write on!

FINAL COMMENTS: May I keep that last line in mind for my brothers too? It is so appropriate. This is my opinion one day at a ime.


Feather Duster
aka vicki


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Rated: E | (5.0)


FIRST IMPRESSIONS:*CheckR* It is true that when accidents happen God watches over us. In that, I trust. My impressions of your poem are straightforward for you: you have acheived what you want to acheive and it is something I want. . .good things happen to people who wait.

GRAMMAR, SYNTAX, SPELLING: *CheckR* I believe this is a sestina, am I right? You have not specified this at the bottom of your poem. This makes it nice for reviewers. With respect toward your sense of things you shape things with a great power and a voice. It is powerful. It is what I think you might have wanted to have reviewers see. Moving, yes.

SUGGESTIONS: True to form, I believe. No suggestions.

FINAL COMMENTS: Saw this feature in the Spiritual Newsletter this week. Congrats. It is a must-read for us at WDC who love this Newsletter.


Feather Duster
aka vicki


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Girl from a Dusty Memory Open in new Window. (18+)
Searching the dusty folders of my memory, her elusive name made me fall all over again
#1227557 by iKïyå§ama-Happy 25th! Author IconMail Icon


IMPRESSIONS: *CheckR* Coming from a distant star like Beetlejuice, you have captured me. I loved your dialogue with this piece. I find your bio a masterpiece and I hope to GOD I fit in with WDC because I feel I must have luck to enjoy pieces like "Girl From A Dusty Memory".

GRAMMAR:, SYNTAX AND SPELLING:*CheckR* Gee, you are all over the place with this. It's fabulous. A real epic adventure nd I'm wondering if you have done an interactive nor not. I'm not getting chummy but are you for real?

SUGGESTIONS:*CheckR* Keep it the same, keep it the same, keep it the same. LOL

FINAL COMMENT: *CheckR* Hope to someday visit your star again, er your portfolio I mean. You have great, raw talents with respect to where you are beaming from.


Feather Duster
aka vicki


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 Fairytales come true Open in new Window. (13+)
This poem was dedicated to two of my best girl friends and their boyfriends.
#1702660 by Jae Author IconMail Icon



Such a wonderful message to me today on this early morning! Brilliant writing for a breath of air and a cup of coffee. Thank you for giving me a chance to hear this today. May you have a nice day!




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Feather Duster
aka vicki
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