Thank you for allowing me to read such a poignant poem.
You have succeeded in humbly answering the question so many ask of you- "Why do you choose to fight?"
Thank you also for fighting for freedom in a foreign land to you.
Oh you are a hero allright. In the eyes of many like myself who do not take our freedom for granted.
Hello Sue,
I don't need the GPs so I'll send them back.
I just want to review this story above the rest that I have read of yours.
I really got hooked into this from around the third paragraph onward. I found the story line of a woman finding out she has a twin during her middle age years; to be unusual and intriging.
You have done a fantastic job with your imagery and the telling of this story.
-I can't think of anything that would make it better.
Overall impression -left me with the feeling that the ending was somewhat abrubt. I wanted to hear more about the story of the twins! An exceptional write. Is there more?
ShiShad
I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read here. If not the most beautiful! I was totally entrigued and overcome with wonder at your awesome imagery and imagination.
You obviously developed your own structure. I believe it is working.
I'm left with the impression that you really are a beautiful butterfly!
Keep up the good work.
I think this is a very unique form of poetry.
At first I had trouble understanding the meaning of your bound verse.
The more I read and reread the more sense it made.
I have no suggestions.
Overall impression - A nice piece of work.
Write on. ShiShad
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What I liked - I like the concept of writing a story about Guardian Angels in the first place!
Yours is very humourous. Diego sounds like an interesting character.
Suggestions - None that I can think of.
Impression - A vision of impetuousness amongst Guardin Angels leaves me intrigued. Write on.
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