Through the poem, I can sense the happiness in here. Isn't it amazing how we gather at family celebrations and fill our hearts with content? Your poem is amazing and full of warmth. I like it a lot keep up the good work. Write more with passing times.
Well written, it seems to me that you like stones. Topaz is worth mentioning, It has a unique and beautiful color. When embedded in a ring its charm increases with glory. Your way of praising it is also unique, as you have written...
"They name you Topaz, assign you some worth.
But you are worthy of more.
No star that has fallen to Earth is more precious
then the light in your heart you have stored."
It's amazing, Wao!
Your perception of Jane Austen is remarkable. I also had read Pride and Prejudice, last month. Actually it was new year gift for me. When I am too much happy with my self I reward my self, it's now my habit. And I am very happy with it. It makes me feel good. So, for this new year gift, I bought my self 2 books. One of which I already have you. Your work is well written. Keep up the good work I will wait for the next Newsletter. Bye, Salut et bonne nuit.
It's wonderfully written. Well done. Imagination is indeed the escape route for all. I almost felt for the part...
Gallons of freshwater I drink,
The vortex of miseries sink.
Wao, It would be wonderful if just by drinking gallons of water our miseries can sink. Then no one would have to be sad.
Your work has an honest message for the world to here. It is true that if one is capable then he/she does not need to feel helpless. The world will see their efforts eventually. Only adding certificates to resume will not help much in the long term. as what is demanded is the passion for work.
The poem is well written and the message conveyed can be simply and is beautifully understandable.
Indeed poets brought the words from the valley of sensations and emotions, to express the world and thought to each other. Without bringing any offense to anyone. Poetry is expressed out from the hearts of poets.
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