this was a pretty thought provoking piece!
I know each piece of work is open to interpretation so.....
I took from this that you can have it all being atop your ivory tower but there is more to life such as companionship. riches are great however we live to love and our lives are consumed with the search for our companion to share life with.
beautiful observation. I loved the flow and insight this writing brought to me. I enjoyed this piece more so because it gives the opportunity to see things from another perspective, in this case the honey bee!
keep up the good work I look forward to reading more of your work.
This was a poem which can et so many people involved. As a sports fan and poetry fan I was sucked right in.
Therre were areas I felt wee a little "jumpy" however a lot of my works goes the same way.i don't feel it has to run to a particular rhythm and overall I really enjoyed your piece.
thanks for sharing.
this poem is true to the point.
it gives a very clear concise and focused description of what true love really is.
It trims away at the excess associated with "love" by todays social standards and simply show love laid bare for what it truly is.
good work.
the description provided in this poem really brings it to life for me. I can see myself there, feel myself there and hear the vast ocean around me! really hits home the isolation felt.
truly a great piece of work and one you should be very proud of!
Keep up the good work,
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