I knew this one would be excellent. The title speaks volumes!!!! Again, you have tremendous talent. I hope you will publish these, if you have not already. Summer
Again, I don't believe this flowed as well as the others. It spoke volumes with its content, however. I do believe I would like to try my hand at sonnet someday. You will have to be my mentor, for I see tremendous talent there.
First, I must conquer writing short stories and such. Thank you for allowing me to review these. Enjoy your moments. Summer
Brilliant!!! I love your writings!!! I appreciate how you have also including an explanation of who Bertrand was. As a thought to what you have written here...all countries are guilty, yet they point a finger out. Each one need look and see that when you point that finger out, there are three fingers pointing back at 'self'. In this case, their own country. This is only my thought. America is guilty as well. I don't believe any would be exempt. Thank you for placing this out here for my view. I am enjoying these immensely. SummerLyn
Excellent work here, in my opinion. This most certainly is 'food for thought.' I love to read philosophical thought. Again, you have a gift. I can see you becoming better than Deepak Chopra. I say that with respect, as he is a man of wisdom, in my opinion. Enjoy your moments in peace. SummerLyn
Great thought and truths here. I personally liked it. I don't feel it flowed as well as I would have liked, but that doesn't mean it wasn't good. It was quite good. When I read others work, I always look for a flow. Like the universe, everything has a rhythm, and so it is in writing, in my opinion. I am new at all this. I was encouraged to write and so it is I have come to this place upon recommendation. I feel we can all learn from one another. I most certainly feel I can learn from you. Write on! You have a gift! SummerLyn
I feel you have tremendous talent, from reading this one. Not just in writing, but you have a gift of wisdom. I not only felt this was well written, it held truths. Good reminders for many who need that reminder. This flowed quite well and I didn't see any visible flaws. SummerLyn
I thought to come to your port. Perhaps I could learn something from viewing your Masterpieces.
It took me quite a while here, but I finished this. Quite good! I have to ask however...did I miss something? And I will go back and review again...I thought this took place in Seattle? Why 'Lone Star'? Just curious. One more question...the last quote here...
Here's to woman! Would that we could fall into her arms without falling into her hands. —Ambrose Bierce
Should it be 'women'?
Thank you so very much for reviewing what I placed out at the very moment you reviewed it. I thought it was amazing that someone could read it so fast. I hadn't realized I had sent it, but was still editing. HA! Anytime you would like to edit and critique my work, please do! I really appreciate honesty. SummerLyn
Thank you for this Ben...I enjoyed reading..the flow was great and brought peace. Thank you also for the explanation of form. I wrote poetry as a little girl...something within me inspired it, but haven't done any poetry since. Perhaps you will be my inspiration to try again. Blessings~ SummerLyn
I've got to say that I never thought that a story such as the Ghost Dance and the massacre that occurred soon after would be placed into a poem, so well done. I am impressed, as this is so tender and recounts very clearly what occurred so many years gone by now. Thank you for allowing me to review it. Well done! SummerLyn
Woww!!! Is this the sun glistening on the water like this or I am thinking flowers from like a dogwood or something...It is a great shot here. I love photography and I think you captured this well. Where was this taken if I may ask?! I know you have titled it 'dancing diamond in the sun'...but had to share with you what I saw upon opening it. Thank you for sharing it here. Love it! SummerLyn
Ohhhhhhh this is cute!!! She looks like she is saying...'Oh brother!' LOL but the hamster seems like he's quite comfortable. I gather they get along...either that or she is just mild tempered. She is a collie? Regardless, this is an excellent picture that you have taken. Thank you for sharing. SummerLyn
So this is what a 'blog' is?! I found myself getting dizzy as I read your schedule, however, you have one like mine. Well...at least my schedule was like that. I decided to plant both feet on the ground for a bit, before taking off again. In fact...now that I think about it....I don't think I will go anywhere at all. It feels wonderful to be able to do nothing for a change AND LIKE IT!!! I wanted to see what blogging was about, and it seems it is like a diary. I don't think I want it as a diary but am wondering if I can just share thoughts?! Thank you for allowing me into your world...even for this small moment in time. SummerLyn
You write in this short story here..."God Damn it has been a good run, he though." I believe it should have been 'thought'?! At least, the way I was reading it.
Although it flowed well and held my interest, I didn't like it as much as I enjoyed the other. That is not to say it was not good. It most certainly was. :o) SummerLyn
Delightful!!!! This is a refreshing story...very cute and most certainly made me smile. I am glad I got the opportunity to review your port. I feel you have a great gift! Thank you for allowing me to review what you have placed here in your portfolio. Sincerely~ SummerLyn
You really have a gift! This was an excellent piece relayed so very well. It too, like your other, is an excellent reminder of how we need to not look back, but be in the NOW and leave the past, the past! Thank you for allowing me this opportunity to review this. I hope you will do more. SummerLyn
I really like this...It spoke volumes of truth and rang out with emotions that truly touch my heart. Without reading this, this thought of veterans being forgotten tears at my heart. It really bothers me. So when I found this and read it...I believe it is a great reminder to people who really don't think of Veterans much...perhaps they need to think on this. You relayed it very well...Thank you ~ SummerLyn
Great imagination and vision went into this...Your perspective, quite good! I enjoyed it very much. I think it flowed pretty well. Flowers...hmmm...I like that thought. I think you did well with this piece and actually look to review your portfolio to see what else you have in there. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to review it. Summerlyn
I have enjoyed this...it flowed well and was a story that captured my interest. Ironic how this particular tree was chosen, and the flowers take the shape they do. Regardless of it's truth in the story of the Dogwood, it is a story that is delicate and beautiful! I thank you for sharing what you have here. SummerLyn
So tender are the words. Filled with many emotions that transcend from this story into the heart of the reader. At least for me. Perhaps it is because I can relate to this experience shared with the writer?! Perhaps it is because the authors emotions bled through so well. As a thought shared in return...why is it that so many are lost and can never find the light until perhaps, it is too late! Thank you for placing this here for my review. SummerLyn
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