This titled captured my attention because it has been something in my life that I have come to realize we are all here for. I have written on such a thought. The thought of Jesus carrying the cross to his ultimate destiny comes to mind when I was reading what you had placed in the end there of getting back up...shaking yourself off and remembering your purpose. He fell many times but got back up, didn't he?! I thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for the reminder. SummerLyn
I enjoyed reading this. I sort of gathered you have taken a course here online? You are never too old to dance, but I don't think you would really want to be kicking it up out there in a jingle dress at 75! Laughing at myself here!
There are many similarities between the various cultures, if someone really stops to look. Even our ceremonies can be compared and there are similarities. Thank you for placing it here and allowing me to review it. SummerLyn
I was just exploring all that writers.com has to offer and ran across your website here. Wow!!! I am impressed with how you did your picture sharing. I just want to say that you did an excellent job and you have been very blessed with what looks like a wonderful family. Enjoy your moments! Summer
Excellent work here, in my opinion...it flowed very smooth and saw no flaw. In fact, you could put it in a card! Lovely and thank you for allowing me to see it and give it this review. Summer
You have a lot of passion...I really feel you have great writing ability. You seem to write from your heart and it reaches the reader. I look forward to reading more of your work Mark!! Great job!!
I felt sadness in this because obviously there is pain, but not in the body...more so the heart. I never did like the word 'crippled'...for some reason, for me, that implied that the person wasn't capable of doing anything and they considered themselves 'handicapped'. Again, handicap seems to imply you are incapable, but I know too many who are in wheel chairs that may not be able to walk, but they sure can do alot more than I can. To those I say...I envy YOU! Some great speakers and leaders that I know are in wheel chairs. I personally feel you have great writing ability. Keep it up!
This is a good one to have around Holiday time...did you do this or did you find it on the internet. I actually thought that it would be animated and the list would fall down. HA!
Lovely!!! I saw no obvious flaw...it flowed, in my opinion, very nicely. I think you have a knack for this. Keep up the great work! I enjoy poems like this. Sincerely~ Summer
I felt your pain in this...very moving. I can't see any obvious flaws...it flowed pretty good and the emotion came through. I appreciate this form or work and thank you for placing it out there for me to view it. Summer
Excellent!!! You really can tell a story!!! Just a thought in general, life is like a kaleidoscope, ever changing, so too with the places we live...ever changing. You have a great gift for story telling and giving vivid accounts. I thoroughly enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing what you have before me. Summer
Brian~ Good Evening<day?> for you!
After a long day, I thought to relax and work on a bit of my story that you were so kind enough to rate.
I wish to thank you again for your thoughtfulness. The very fact that you took the time in reading. And so it is, I thought to stop in and read a few of your masterpieces. I must say, I am impressed! I am quite sure I could learn from you. Any pointers you can give me...any criticism to help me improve and point me in the right way would be greatly appreciated.
I was very much stopped in my tracks with this one. Wow! Sent chills. Wishing you to enjoy your moments.
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