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Review of Beneath the Stars  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great Poem!
It's so true!
Good Job!

I've really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I'm writing a new book called "My Best friend's Brother" I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it all because no one has some chapter haven’t even been looked at yet and I don’t know how to get people to read it.
Keep on Writing!

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a awesome poem!
Bravo!
Good Job!

I've really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I'm writing a new book called "My Best friend's Brother" I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it all because no one has some chapter haven’t even been looked at yet and I don’t know how to get people to read it.

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Review of IsThat Me?  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem!
Excellent!
Bravo!

I've really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I'm writing a new book called "My Best friend's Brother" I would like to know what you think about it. I would really appreciate it if you read it all because no one has some chapter haven’t even been looked at yet and I don’t know how to get people to read it.

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Review of Ripples  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
These poems are all wonderful.
But I think you might want to post the separately.
You might lose the readers interest.
Just a thought.
Excellent work.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work and continue writing!

I've really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope you would take the time to do the same to me. I'm writing a new book called "My Best friend's Brother" I would like to know what you think about it.

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Review of But...  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an Excellent poem.
I could feel the emotion of the
girl trying to decide if she should stay or go.
Keep up the good work and continue writing!

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Review of Paper plane  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute little poem! I love it!
Good Job and Continue writing!:)

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Review of Ain't It Strange  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awe! This is a beautiful love poem! So beautiful I have no words to describe!
Bravo! Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a awesome poem! I think this poem is about a bounty hunter or something. (A person who kills people for a good reason) I think he/she is trying to kill themselves because their thinking about all the pain and heart ache they caused people. But he/she doesn't regret what they did, bad people have to face there consequences even if it is death. :)
Good Job and Keep writing!

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Review of Who Am I?  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This Is a cute little poem. Good Job and Keep on writing!

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Review of Hidden pain  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Good Poem! But I feel it was a little to long and you repeated your words a lot. I think its about a girl who has a lot of pain and troubles but she hides it inside by putting a fake smile on her face.
Good Job and Keep Writing!

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Review of Beauty  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow this poem is very deep. It's about a girl who's starving her self to look pretty? That's so sad I hate it when people do that. They really don't know how much bad words can hurt people.

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Review of Emily  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent poem! It's so good I don't even have anything to say I'm "speechless" lol
Keep up the good work! Bravo!

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome Poem. Its reminds me of a girl who just got out of a bad relationship and she's looking for someone to be her friend and help her repair herself.
Good Job and Keep Writing!

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Review of You'll Survive  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great Poem! I pictured a girl hanging from a cliff and is unable to pull her self up because she's so hard broken. She's almost about to fall into the water below when you come along and tell her she will be okay.
"All these stress is driving me insane!" I believe you were trying to say "the stress" instead of "these stress"
Good Job and continue writing!

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Review of Big Kids  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this poem is dedicated to the people who stay forever young. The people who are thirty years old and still watch cartoons. Society is trying to tell them that you must grow up to fit in to the world, but they don't want to do that they just want to be considered "big kids."
Good Job and Keep writing!

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Review of Peacemaker  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good poem. It reminds me of a girl who has a boyfriend who's a explorer or like to travel the world. But the girl friend doesn't want him to go any where and she's tired of waiting for him to come back, so she questioning her love for him at the end. I'm not really good with spelling or grammar. To me it looks like everything is spelled right.
Good Job and keep writing!

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Review of Faking  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Awe this is a cute little poem.
All of your words are very true.
When I was reading your poem I thought of those movies when the girl/guy lies to
people and pretends to be something their not to get friends. Then when the friends
realize who the really are the leave then when they apologize hey come back.
Keep up the good work and keep writing.
I really enjoyed reviewing your work I hope I get the some in return.
Happy Writing! :D
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
OMG!! Fantastic story!! I would kill to write like you! lol
But anyway you have a really good set of fingers there.
I'm only 14 and you just murdered me with your awesome writing skills.
I'm looking forward to your next story and for some reason this story
reminds me of a lifetime movie.
I really enjoyed reading your work, I hope you return the favor.
Happy Writing! : D
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Review of Notice Me  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awww thing is a cute little short poem.
Sometimes it's good just to read a short poem rather then long ones that drone on and on and on....lol
I enjoyed your work, keep on writing.
I've took the time to review your work I hope you do the same to me! :D
Happy Writing!
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Review of Hurts Like Hell  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
You got a good poem here I feel its about a lying cheating boy friend.
I like the way you used the rhyming words too. But I feel you put to many words in the poem.
Like some parts didn't make sense to me.
Like: Did you go without for too long? we were all under your spell. are you talking about the other girls?
I've enjoyed reading your work keep writing.
Since I reviewed your work it would be nice if you could take a look at mine.
Happy Writing! :)
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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a fantastic story. I like how you told the story in a different perspective now I know what it's like for the characters that get ditched in action movies. This story was also very funny as well I kind of laughed to myself a little. I'm looking forward to the next story.
Keep up the good work!
I very much enjoyed your work. Keep on writing! Please feel free to stop by my profile and check out my work as well! :)
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Review of A girls luck  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this story it was amazing!! Are you going to write another chapter? If not I'll be looking forward to reading your next story. Keep up the good work!
I very much enjoyed your work. Keep on writing! Please feel free to stop by my profile and check out my work as well! :)
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Review of Lies  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem it reminds me of one of those movies in the middle you know when all the friends turn on the main character because they lied.
I very much enjoyed your work. Keep on writing! Please feel free to stop by my profile and check out my work as well! :)
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Review of Silly Girl  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good poem for the encouragement of girls. Keep up the good work!
I very much enjoyed your work. Keep on writing! Please feel free to stop by my profile and check out my work as well! :)
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Review of Questions!  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a great poem. Its really realistic I think everyone has asked themselves the questions you put in this poem. If they haven I sure have, I probably ask myself those questions every week.
I very much enjoyed your work. Keep on writing! Please feel free to stop by my profile and check out my work as well! :)
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