Excellent Poem!
This is really good you did an awesome job!
This belongs on a car, news paper or magazine.
You have a great gift here.
Keep up the good work! :)
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I like your poem I could tell there was some sort of emotion behind it.
But I'm not really sure what this poem is about though.
I would love it if you could explain it to me.
Keep up the good work! :)
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Fantastic Poem!
I could feel the pain and emotion in it but I have a few corrections.
"Tell you I'll alright" I'm guessing that's suppose to be I'm
"What else am iI supposed to say" that's suppose to be I and maybe you should put a question mark there for more emotion.
"If you cuold see me" should be could. Also I think you should put question marks by the questions.
Keep up the good work! :)
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Fantastic Poem!
You're just like blew me away on how awesome it was!
You have a great gift to write poetry!
I loved every part of your poem the whole thing is my favorite!
I love how you kept a rhythm to your poem.
I can't wait to read your next one.
Keep up the good work, you're on fire! :)
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Excellent!!
I love this poem.
Its so cute a playful!
Keep up the good work!
I really loved the last part!
Good Job! :)
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Great peom!
I loved every minute of it.
I could tell it was about a young girl trying to find her way in the world.
You have some skills here.
I'm not sure why you only had a 3 star before the poem is great.
Keep up the good work and I'll see yah yah around! :)
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This is an awesome poem good job!
It feels like more of a love poem to me in some ways.
I think the last part is so cute I think that's my favorite.
Your first stanza had good rhythm it flowed out my mouth naturally.
Keep up the good work! :)
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This poem is great good job!
I really loved the first to stanza they came of my tongue so easily!
I don't understand why people do really review newbie's work you guys art talented!
This poem like literally blew me away!
Keep up the good work you have a gift my friend! :)
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Great poem!
I could really relate to this.
Sometimes I have insomnia because I have to many thoughts in my head at once.
I get myself to fall asleep be clearing away all the thoughts in my head and then i picture the sky with floating clouds then I'm able to sleep.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!:)
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Omg! This poem is so awesome!
You did a really good job!
I read this poem and I could feel all the emotion and sadness and I could relate to some of it.
You have an fantastic gift of writing poetry!
You're really good!
I like the ending the most I'm glad the person realized it wasn't meant to be.
Keep up the good work! :)
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This is an awesome poem but I don't think it works with the description you gave.
This poem just sounds like changing seasons or something.
It doesn't really scream summer to me maybe you should try change the description.
Or you could explain the poem to me more I would love to read about it in detail.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)
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Great Poem!
I really enjoyed it!
I love music as well but I can't play any instruments sadly lol.
I guess god didn't give me that talent.
Excellent Job!
Keep up the good work.
Personally I think short poems are the most meaningful! :)
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Great poem!
You did i good job I loved every bit of it.
I could feel the emotion.
Is "toxicity" a real word?
If so it's my new favorite word it has a ring to it lol.
Keep up the good work! :)
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That was alsome!
Great Poem!
You did an awesome job!
The first part kinda sounded like rap to me and I loved the last part the best.
Keep up the good work!
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You say you don't like writing love poems but your good at it!
This poem was excellent!
I love how you described the sun set and stuff.
It was really interesting to read. Keep up the good work!
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Good Job! :)
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Great story it was really good.
I didn't quite understand what was happening until the end.
good Job.
Keep up the good work!
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Excellent story that was really entertaining I was on edge the whole time.
You have a great gift for writing keep up the good work!
But I have one question was it really a dream or night I could really understand that last part.
Bravo! Bravo! :)
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Excellent Poem!
This almost made me wanna cry!
It was so beautiful!
I could feel the pain and emotion in ever word.
Great Job! Bravo!
Keep up the good work! :)
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Great Poem I could really feel the pain and emotion in it.
I'm not really sure what it's about though.
Excellent!!
Keep up the good work!:)
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Great poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
Keep up the good work! :)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved how it rhymed and made sense at the some time!
It rhymed so well I think this would be a great song!
This is a really awesome poem!
Keep up the good work!
Bravo!! :)
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Great Poem I really enjoyed it.
I really loved the ending.
Excellent!!
Keep up the good work! :)
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This is an awesome story good job!
Keep up the good work! :)
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