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Review of Lighting  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I feel the same way I love seeing lighting in the sky.
It looks so amazing far away but I feel sorry for the people who are experiencing it lol.
I also think it's cool how rain travels like it could be raining to blocks away but not at your house.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Cool Poem!
When I read it I thought of a couple in the woods having a romantic picnic under the stairs.
Good Job!
Keep up the great work! :)

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Review of his loss  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Awe the poem is really catchy but really sad.
If that is the way your marring really ended I'm so sorry.
I loved how it rhymed.
Keep up the good work!

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Review of Dagger  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Fantastic Poem!

When I read this poem I pictured a girl struggling with a break up and she's in a relationship
graveyard and she just stands there morning the lost of her relationship.
I know this probably has nothing to do with the poem lol but I just have a big imagination..lol
This is really a great poem it has lots of emotion in it I really enjoyed reading it.

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Review of TRAPPED  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
I could feel the emotion and pain.
This poem made me think of a girl who looks happy on the inside but she is really sad and depressed and doesn't know what to do. Her boyfriend has seen the real her and knows she tries to hide her pain sometimes and he wants to help her. The girl wishes that one day everything will be okay.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Poem  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is an awesome poem.
It's written very well also.
But I can't seem to understand what it's about I'm not sure if I'm too young or haven't been writing long enough.
But, when I read this i though of a guy that went camping and he was staring up art the moon thinking of his lover.
Just because I didn't quite understand doesn't mean this isn't a good poem it's excellent.
I think I just might be too young,
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Good Poem!
Though I kind of have no idea what your trying to say it's written well .
I think this part is my favorite: "Watching my feet follow my shadow, the distant laughter reaches further than I could ever travel, "
That's a nice rhyme.
You have a nice gift here.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!
P.S: i LOVE YOUR USERNAME! :)

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Review of People say  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Great poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
It cool how you had another way of looking at those sayings.
"I say my hurt is a feeling so real
I say my life is an endless road
I say my soul is a bleeding heart
I say my love is what was stoled"
This is really creative.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Good story!
But to me this story seemed more dark than funny lol.
It is kind of weird to have a girlfriend in kindergarten but I hear it's all the rage now.
Even though the story was a little weird to me I did enjoy reading it I never expected the little boy to set the house on fire.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
It's so sad but it's kind of sweet as well.
I thought this part was so sweet:
"A face so perfect, so kind, so true
My heart skips when you’re in view "
And this is so sad:
"But the person you are neither kind nor true
My affection so coldly away you threw"
You've got some great talent.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)


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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Cool Poem!
You do write pretty well.
Better than me when it comes to poems I think.
It's cool of you to write a poem about your best friend. ( if it is actually about your best friend)
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great!
I love spring as well!
I hate summer because it's too hot and fall and winter are too cold spring is just right.
You write very well.
Even though this is only a couple of sentences it is an complete thought but I think you should put more imagery details.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Crazy Me  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
I really enjoyed it.
I loved the name of the poem.
My favorite part is: "hey, welcome to my silly life
that will surely bothers your loving wife
"
You write very well.
I haven't found any errors.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of oh no  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Great story!
I thought it was super funny especially the part when you said that the guy died from the old man talking.
I didn't see any errors.
You write really well, I enjoyed every minute of the goofy story.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work, my friend!

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Review of love  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is such a cute poem!
You go girl!
I loved every minute of it, I think this belongs on a valentines day card.
I could tell that it was a lot of emotion in this poem.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work!

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Review of Elegance  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I love this poem it's so romantic and sweet.
I love how you describe the girl this poem is about.
Man would I love to be her lol.
You write very well.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Beauty Is  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I think that your trying to say beauty is the sunset and you get mad at the people who
don't appreciate the sunset because not everyone can see it like the people in Alaska.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of SEARCHING MYSELF  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
It was written very well I could tell that's it's a deep meaning to this.
I'm not sure if this is true or not but this is what I got out of it. I think you're talking
about how hard it was and how long it took to find yourself but when you finally did you realized it was all worth it.
Good Job!
keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Ummm great little rant there.
Your not asking to much for your wife to delete an ex of her face book but, personally I don't think this is that important for you to start an argument over.
It;s just Facebook just Twitter. People have hundreds of friends and half of them they don't even talk to if they know them or not. If your worried about her cheating or something maybe you should trust her more or something. Don't get me wrong now, If she's having like full conversations with the dude then she needs to delete him because she knows you wouldn't like that.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Excellent story!
It was very interesting and suspenseful.
You kept my attention during the whole poem.
I hate big storms that cut out power especially when I'm alone.
I like the ending that was an interesting twist to the story when a crazy storm is going on, ware wolfs jump through widows.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of One In A Million  
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I like this poem it's very sweet.
But if you had a million dollars you wouldn't keep just a little for yourself? lol jk
I think this poem is very good and it's written well.
I have one concern what part of this poem ties into the be yourself thing?
Because I don't see it.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Not Over Yet  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Good Poem!
I loved how you were so descriptive!
But I really have no idea what this poem is about but it was written very well.
When I read it I was picturing the arctic and there was a huge black whole, why? I'm not sure lol.
I didn't see any errors.
Keep up the good work!

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Review of More Than Lust  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Good Poem!
I thought i was really sweet.
I liked the first part when you said
"If I write you a song,
would you believe I will never leave?"
That was a very good opening line.
I didn't seen any errors.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)
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Review of Silent Storm  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Awesome Poem!
When I was reading this poem I pictured a person trying to do all they can to help the environmental like picking up trash and recycling.
My favorite part about this poem was this stanza:
"Like the flowers need sun, soil and the water

It yearns for loving, gentle care in which it won't receive

When I pass by, I cry for the plant, so lonely in the night

Whoever failed to supply it, I'd like to pick a fight."
I thought the last part was really funny.

Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Today  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Fantastic Poem!
I loved every minute of it.
I love how you kept the rhythm to the poem and your rhymes went together nicely.
When I read this poem I pictured a girl walking down the street being as happy as she could be.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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