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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Good Poem!
I think everyone has a war going on inside of them.
The devil and angle are always fighting but you just have to make sure you pick the right side.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Yours and Mine  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)

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This is an Awesome Poem!
It was so sweet how you described everything you and your lover would be.
You write very well.
I enjoyed every minute of this poem.
my favorite part was: "Look at me take me up way up high
Hold me tight lift me up to the sky
We'll touch the moon dance with the stars
Play with the planets dine in Mars."
I thought the dine in Mars part was kind of funny.
Keep up the great work! :)

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Review of Ordinary Family  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
There something really wrong with this family lol.
I thought it was cool how the rhyming went with the story.
Even though this story is kind of sad I think it belongs in a children's book.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of If Ever...  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awe this is a really sweet poem!
I loved this part: "For in my mind I'm a prisoner and in my heart I'm a fool"
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Attacked  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
This was very entertaining.
I was super on edge we the dude grabbed the gun and tried to shoot her.
That was pretty smart to only put on bullet in the gun.
But I didn't really get the last line.
"The phone fell from my hands and the sound of sirens engulfed senses, as I lay in the blood of the scumbag."
Why did she lay in his blood?
Did he hurt her or something? or did she just go crazy?

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Great Poem!
I think it's about a girl who's facing tough times, but she's not even shedding one tear.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Love has fooled  
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Rated: E | (3.0)
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This poem has a nice concept but I think it's to rhyming.
Like unnecessary rhymes.
I think you should add more emotion to this poem like tell more about how you feel.
Not every sentence has to rhyme.
Keep that in mind for your next poem.
Great Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
And awesome topic by the way.
I think love is so complicated because people are so complicated.
Because if you notice I bet animals don't have all these love problems that we do lol.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Alone.  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion.
I think this poem is about a boy/girl that has completely fallen in love with their partner.
But the partner is leaving and breaking up with them and they are scared of being on their own.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Awesome Poem!
I think this poem is about a break up a boy/girl is breaking up with her boy/girlfriend but they still love them.
The other person broke their heart so at the end they are saying that it's going to come back to them.
I really loved the first 2 opening lines:
"I realized to late that we
weren't fate,"
Keep up the good work!
Awesome Job! :)

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Review of Desire Awoken  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Fantastic Poem!
I loved it I could feel the emotion.
I liked how you repeated the words a little bit that made the emotion build a little more.
"Come back, back to me
Want you, want me, want us both.
Two words, seven letters. That's it.
Two words, that's all it takes." just in case you didn't understand what I meant.
I think this poem is about a girl who just got into a fight with her boyfriend she thinks he's going to break up with her because he was walking away so all these crazy questions were going on in her head. In the end the guy came back and said he was sorry and now everything is fixed.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Abandoned  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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This poem was okay I feel you could have done more with it.
Maybe explain how you felt when you got stood up or like your surrounds and stuff.
The point is you could use a little bit more detail.
Also don't space out ever word put one phrase together then skip a line it makes you poem choppy if not.
I should flow smoothly.

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Review of Lonely Girl..  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
I could feel the emotion in it.
It seems kind of sad though.
Good Job!
I love your name by the way! :)
Keep up the good work!

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Review of its not ok  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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You are an excellent writer!
I love how you write about important topics.
Keep up the Awesome work! :)

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Review of I Know  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
This poem almost made me cry I was seriously tearing up on the last part.
This poem is so sweet I loved every minute of it.
I like how you kept a chorus but you kind of changed it every time.
This poem belongs in a book somewhere you have some mad skills.
Keep up the Awesome work!
I'll be looking forward to your work! :)

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Review of see me  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Great Poem!
It really speaks to the soul.
How people always focus on the outside and never care to see what's inside.
I think this poem is about a girl/boy who smiles all the time and is happy but not one really bothers to see the real them underneath all of that.
I love poems that send a message.
Awesome Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of The Lost Boy  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Excellent Poem!
I loved how you kept a rhythm to the poem.
The rhyming was just perfect,
I like how you told a story in this poem I could feel the emotion.
I think this poem is and a boy/girl trying to find her way in life and she asked god to help her not choose the wrong one .
Awesome Job!
I'll be looking forward to your next master piece! :)

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Review of Waiting  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Awesome poem!
I loved how you used so much description and detail.
Sometimes fun and happy memories put a warmth in my heart like the sun.
Good Job!
Keep Up The Great Work! :)

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Review of White Twilight  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Awesome Poem!
Though I have no idea what it's about.
But, it's written very well.
I love your descriptions.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Clouds  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Great Poem!
I love clouds as well.
Sometimes I wish we could actually touch them.
I bet they feel like cotton.
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of Eyes of Love  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
I can tell this poem is about a toxic relationship.
I could feel the emotion in every word you said.
This was written very well, no errors.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of "The Girl"  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Great Poem!
This is the first poem I've read where you described a person.
I love the details you added into the poem.
It's so cool that not a single word rhymed.
I could picture everything you said.
Good Job!
Keep up the awesome work! :)

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Review of Your Today  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (4.5)

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Great Poem!
Sometimes I wish I could go back in time to the memories I've shared with my friends and family.
Sometimes I wish life wouldn't change so much.
This was written very well.
No spelling errors I know off.
Definitely Something I can relate to....

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Review of Winters Exhale  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I love winter it's my favorite season.
I makes me feel so warm and cozy seeing all the snow on the ground.
I think this poem is about a man who notices something that reminds him about winter and all it's details.
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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Review of 2 In one  
Review by Mrs. Populatery
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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Great story!
I really like the first paragraph some of what you said I can relate too.
But I'm not really sure how the second paragraph ties in with the first.
To me it seemed like you kind of jumped to another topic.
Like do you need your lovers touch to make you feel better about not having friends? or something different?
Good Job!
Keep up the good work! :)

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