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339 Public Reviews Given
342 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I'll comment about your story, characters, descriptions (narrative), and point out errors if you have any. I won't tear you down for small mistakes but I will point out anything I notice. I'm always polite in my reviews, I will do follow ups if necessary and I'll certainly be thorough if that's what you're looking for.
I'm good at...
Characterisation - I can instantly point out if your character's believable. And I can also help with show and tell if your story needs more balance.
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, science fiction, comedy, romance, mystery, action/adventure
Least Favorite Genres
Historicals and political stories without humour or a twist. Overtly long non-fiction too.
Favorite Item Types
Short stories *Heart*
I will not review...
Well, there isn't much I won't review. I don't mind horror and erotica (no matter how hardcore) as long as there's a meaningful story. Please note - I will not review a random, weird fantasy that makes me feel like a perv *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!
As you probably must have noticed, I'm a newbie. So I can't offer any deep, meaningful grammar based reviews. Just my honest opinion as a reader.
And I can say - I agree with you a hundred percent.
Love may not be about hot water in my case but it's certainly worth the sacrifice :) This was a beautiful piece with a lot of quirky statements that made it an interesting read. Thank you for sharing!

-TG
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey!
I laud your bravery to take up such a daunting challenge for the sake of literature. Future generations shall speak of you in great reverence for establishing the first law of showerdom.
Clothes dont go with body wash.
Seriously? I couldnt stop laughing :)
Lovely attempt and while it was about as deep as The Fox, it was refreshing change (pun intended). You should be so proud - I found no grammatic errors or punctuation issues. Only one thing - the last paragraph is in present tense while the rest is in past. Other than that, beautiful ; )
I enjoyed reading it and I hope to read more from you...

keep writing!


-TG
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Review of secrets  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Not fair! Now you've left me wondering what's so embarrasing that she didnt want you to post it.
Anyway well written. A nice tale with nothing in it for me :( but still. Just one thibg though. I think in the first line it would be better if you used that started with instead of starting. keeps the tense consistent.

keep writing!
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Review of That's you  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

I'm new to WDC and I got to review your piece randomly.

Might I begin by saying wow. Just wow.

This was a beautiful poem, very well written and with so much emotion. It flows so well and it has such a strong tone. I only have minimal suggestions - and that's because I'm a perfectionist, so please excuse me. Last line of first stanza - I think you meant soul's mind.
I see you through a tunnel, this darkness need a fire. (I think there should be a comma in the middle.)
Times hands - I think you meant time's hands.
But otherwise - wow. I love reading poetry (not that great at writing it) and you just made my day. Lovely piece and I hope to read more of your work.

-TG
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Review of wake  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Hello!

That's my morning too, only you can factor in annoying alarm clock, drooling dog and frizzy hair. While I agree with your poem - I can't ignore the grammar. It's a nice piece but you'll be taken more seriously if you fix a few things.
'i' should always be capitalised. I think you meant too and to in almost all the places.The second stanza isn't broken down into lines - it makes it a little hard to understand. Also, it might need a little more punctuation. (I can help with that later on if you want.) In the last line, 'ill' means sick. You mean I will, so use I'll.
Otherwise, it's a good poem and I can totally relate.
Good luck and keep writing!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

This is the first piece I read on WDC and you're my first review here :) It was a lovely piece of poetry and I enjoyed reading it. I couldn't agree with you more - the adverb is constantly edited out of fiction as it slows down the pace. Easy, nice read - and I have no real suggestions. Just one (and that's because I'm a punctuation freak) - there should be a full stop after 'soundly'.

Good luck and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
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