Naturess's (tangytaylor) Reviews

Naturess

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#2334435

Review of Being different is OK

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love the idea that this poem is based upon. The only thing that I would do is add to it or make it a little longer, though the simplicity here is good too!

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#2334051

Review of Never Say Never Again

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

This poem certainly had a mysterious air to it with a passionate flair also. The only thing I would change, I'm not sure how you might change this but, you had the word "something" written a lot. Sometimes repetion is good for a poem, but in this case, I think it would be better without it.

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#2130392

Review of The Martian Codex - Book One - Act Two

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

This was very long, although I enjoyed the subject and the imagery. I thought this was funny: It took me a whole minute to scroll down the page! :)Anyway, I'd like to mention that I pretend to hate to be continued endings, but I really don't, so I loved yours!!!

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#2081976

Review of Preface - 3rd draft

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

I like how the beginning began. Ha ha: "the beginnning began" anyway, this... item was quite interesting and it kept my constant attention. i also like the ending.

"We dance round in a ring and suppose,
But the Secret sits in the middle and knows."

-- Robert Frost

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#2063481

Review of To Myself

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Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

This is a nice poem.

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#2052155

Review of What does it mean to be me

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I absolutely love that this poem was short and didn't take too long to read. I also liked that you ended your poem with a question that might make some people think. I also like the imagery of this poem. I can totally agree with "My mind is in another place". Happens a lot to me. I really like this poem, and I'm oh so very happy that you shared this with me. It changed my life. :) ~Taylor~

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#2052142

Review of Sick of the Rain

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I enjoyed this poem. Did you know in your last stanza "But no one KNOW I'M crying" I the last stanza I would change know to knows as you have in the first stanza. But in the 1st and last both i'ms aren't capitalized. :) Thanks for sharing!

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#2039686

Review of Road To The End

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I love the harry potter series and this is a great addition to fill my need for harry! Thanks for sharing!

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#2039409

Review of A Snowy February Morning

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I can't say anything, but I like it.