Nicely written details and a poor girl at school walks home and finds a shiny change purse but it belongs to another. The other girl's mother takes them out for ice cream and the poor girl finds a friend for life. Heartwarming and well rounded characters. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I believe in ghosts. I had ghosts at the old county home I worked at. They watched everyone who worked this. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this. Some well chosen words. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this . Always: Megan
Nicely written details and more then once I want to be a child again. Playing in the sand. Flying a kite. Come be a child. A good title for this poem. A pirate. A queen. A nice play on words. A good style. A neat scenario. Looks like you spent time with this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I love the Smurfs. The Smurfs got to try the cell phone life but couldn't stay. Their way of mushrooms life they were used to. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Being in a cell phone store. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Surprise. Sometimes, we get good surprises. This is entertaining and some men might like this gift. Inflatable Doll. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
A lot of foods you have to acquire a taste for. I am a fussy eater. Nicely written details and quite a conversation and ingredients. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and thinking you have a burglar in the house. Being armed with a gun. The woman was serious. Finds out her daughter had a boyfriend with her. She wasn't happy and the girl was grounded until she was eighteen. Well rounded characters and interesting. I appreciate the humor in this. A good scenario and nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. We do need rain. Rain does wash away chalk on the sidewalk. The world refreshes itself. A good style and this holds the reader's attention. Creative and well defined. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Good imagery. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and deer are afraid of us and curious. The boys should have whispered but one talked out loud and scared them off. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. This does hold the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Easter. Spring. It is always a nice time. Some good reflections. This is lively and fun. Bunnies. Sprint. Grasshopper. A good style and easy to follow. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and your stories are always entertaining and fun. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A sticky plan. Cooking a pie in a microwave is bad. A good style and I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, we misjudge people and are happy later when we get to know them. Jesus wants it that way but sometimes there are those we can't be friends with. A good style and some good reflections. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I always liked dandelions. The Nuns at the college I went to like to make dandelion wine. They collected them in trash bags. Some good descriptions and nice reflections. A good scenario and I appreciate the beauty and humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Pillars of society. Pillars from history. Singers. Poets. Political? That's a laugh. Nicely written details and a good word flow. Looks like you spent time with this. A good style with well chosen words. Some good reflections. Creative and colorful. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this woman wasn't born into the ton. She worked her way to get there to be a Lady. A man she always loved is engaged to someone he doesn't want to be.
His mother turned the woman away when she came to visit and now he decides he is going to be with the woman who he always loved. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Creative and colorful. A good scenario and nice presentation with good romantic sentiments. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. There are so things in life we don't know and wish we didn't. Food for thought. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters. A good marriage. A bad accident. A daughter gets killed in a car accident. Easy to follow and sad. I don't understand why the woman was in jail. Maybe for the speeding thing? Well rounded characters. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Sad but hopeful in the end. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Sad the woman had several stillborn births and died. Her spirit visits the babies graves and bothers him. The man's former wife sings to the babies. A good character and nice scenario. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Having a job and patience was never easy. Some good details and easy to follow. Creative and colorful. Well chosen words. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion, blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I wish I knew how to do meditation and yoga. They could help me. Food for thought. Thought waves. Looks like you spent time with this and had experience with this. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Neat presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and taxes helped us like they did the dinosaur train, it would be nice. A good style and well rounded characters the dinosaurs made. Suitable dialogue. There is some good humor in this. I smiled as I read this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and my father fought in Vietnam but came home safely. I have been to Arlington and saw JFKs grave and eternal flame. A bugle is important. This holds the reader's interest and has a good style. A neat rhyme pattern rounds this out nicely. Well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and some sad romantic reflections. Some neat romantic overtures and sentiments. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Sing to a minstrel. Good call. Creative and colorful. I was in tune with this. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good reflections with well chosen words. Neat imagery. Sounds like a romance. You paid attention to details. A good presentation and neat style. Mandolin. Flowers. A neat scenario. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Some good details. Sweet sounds. Instruments. Twinkling the meddling score. Tiger mentioned. A good play on words with some neat reflections. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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