Nicely written details and a Princess hid from the world because she can't walk. Sad. Aunt Gladys comes home and wants to help. The King was over protective and his sister took the Princess to miracle springs and the Princess was healed. Good characters and suitable dialogue and heartwarming moments. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and it is hard to take in a new pet after one dies. Looks like Lola wanted this new owner and got her way. I am happy the person adopted Lola. Potter would understand. Heartwarming and well defined. Creative and a good presentation. I love when an animal gets a happy ending. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Envy. We all go through it at times in our lives and we make good things happen. Well chosen words and a good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and balances this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I wondered what a lemonade pitcher was. No AC. That isn't good. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this. I appreciate the humor in this. Well rounded characters and good dialogue. A good presentation and enlightening. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this cat has it altogether. Birds flying out of a tree and the cat having a meeting with the birds. Good one. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Two kids watching the birds and the cat. Creative and colorful. Entertaining and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some true facts about the badge things in the world. Descriptive and a good style. This holds the reader's interest. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes, it is hard to pain and remembering people we loved who have died. A good style and easy to follow. Creative and colorful with well chosen words. Some people are good at hiding feelings. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I like when dragons are considered the good guys and bring villagers good tidings and peace. A dragon's claw. Interesting concept. A good style and nice scenario. Creative and colorful. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's attention. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Fishes are eagles. That would be hard. We try to do different things and be different people and do the right things. A good style and easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely with a neat scenario. Good creative reasons why we can be eagles and fish. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Psalms has a lot to say about life and turning to God. David had troubles and we can relate and have all been there at one time or another. A good reminder. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening as well as spiritual. Words to live by. A good presentation. Words of wisdom and this is well written. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and an old tree and a creepy town. A woman rated and murdered and she comes back and gets revenge. Scary and paranormal. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. The ghost gets revenge. Creative and colorful. Well defined. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Finding an old clock and trying to change time and freezing time and making time work on her behalf. Nicely written details and a good word flow. This holds the reader's interest. A good style. Looks like you spent time with this. Be careful what you wish for. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I used to plant flowers bit haven't in years. I like lawn ornaments and I have quite a few of them. Well meaning neighbors coming into your yard. You just want a nice yard not a garden. I get it. Good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Since my mother died, I wish I could talk to her for two hours. I understand that the woman in the story got a message from her departed mother. Lovely reflections and comforting. Good characters and heartwarming. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Eternal youth. We all want that. This holds the reader's interest. An old witch uses a spell to be young again. Some well chosen words. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Entertaining. Always: Megan
Looks like two young boys pulled a fast one and the one boy damaged the window and the football trophy. A fingerprint kit. This holds the reader's interest. Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Easy to follow. A good presentation. Always: Megan
I don't like Doriven. He needs to be slapped but at least he let his pets in when it was cold. Not feeding them for being a minute late. Mean. Looks like he changed for the better. Sounds like this is a planet not on earth. Good descriptions and well rounded characters with suitable dialogue. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Planning a future with someone you love is nice and important. Some lovely reflections and this holds the reader's interest. This is cheery and makes a person smile. A good style and well chosen words. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Either the child is happy and she sneaks out at night to dance and climb up a mountain and animals watch her. She shows no fear. She is safe and returns home safely. Is she hoping not to live another day? Some interesting details. A well rounded character. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is interesting. A good style and nice play on words with a good scenario. Shifting of colors and letters and well chosen words. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. This draws the reader in. Moon and stars. Good call. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Tattoos. They are interesting and some are hidden. Some aren't. Easy to follow with a good style. I appreciate the humor in this. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a girl has a friend who lives in a mirror but she just sees her in her mind. A silver side. The girl had no friends just herself in the mirror whom she wanted to be. Sad. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Freda Paynes song Band Of Gold came to mind. Some good reflections and this holds the reader's interest. A neat style and good scenario
A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and blends them together with a neat flair. A good presentation with sad reflections. Always: Megan
Spooky and the young man was warned not to touch the curtain or open it. He does and gets a surprise. An upside down and very eerie girl who will haunt the dorm forever. Well rounded characters and scary story. Easy to follow. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Jesus does help us and we don't always realize it. A good style and this is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. This draws the reader in. Well chosen words and good reflections with some anxious moments but nothing to be afraid of. A good style. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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