Nicely written details and a well rounded character who blows out candles and wishes his parents, friends and the neighborhood would disappear. They did. Sad. A good style and a scenario that couldn't reversed. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Cradle of the cosmos. Some good reflections and this holds the reader's interest. A good style. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. Some neat imagery. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Fun with numbers ot seems. This holds the reader's interest. Half a dozen. Half a dozen of good things is nice. A nice style and this holds the reader's. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Writing is important to us. Writing on a keyboard, typing out stories is good. A good scenario and nice style. Well chosen words with good reflections. Relaxing and soothing. I agree. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. My mother passed recently and she saved everything. I bought home a small, rubber Alf, Star Wars cards and change purses. I always need paper clips or safety pins. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. Creative with well chosen words. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections and neat romantic sentiments and overtures. Sad reflections it seems. Sounds like maybe the person stays because he or she has been with this person a long time. Some good reflections and a nice style. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
A blue ribbon. I think of ribbons I won at the fair years ago. Ribbons can have other meanings. Nicely written details and a good word flow. A neat style. This holds the reader's interest. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. It is always nice to praise God but it is hard when we are going through bad times. Well defined with well chosen words. This is creative and colorful. This is uplifting, inspiring and enlightening. Beautifully stated as a neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a vacation with prehistoric birds. I don't think I would care for that. Scary but this holds the reader's interest. Some good drama and suspense. Looks like you spent time with this. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and men think they got this and always know what is wrong with the car. They think. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. I had to smile that father doesn't always know best. A good style and creative. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and angels rejoice every time someone is baptized. Flowers in heaven will be nice. Some good reflections and neat words of wisdom. This is creative, inspiring, enlightening and lifts one's spirits. A pleasure to read like usual. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and good reflections. Good descriptions with well chosen words. Some good reflections. A neat style and good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. The bus that never came. The life that never happened. Some food for thought. Maybe life we missed is the one we didn't want anyway. Food for thought. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good style and sad ending bit is it? A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections. Summer is a welcome sight. Creative and colorful and easy to follow. Good imagery and nice descriptions. A good scenario. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in motion and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this sounds like a good day with a granddaughter. Walk in the park. No TV because it was broken. Getting ice cream. Good call. Well rounded characters. Creative and colorful. Looks like this was fun to write. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sometimes we go through a stage we have nothing to write about. Good call. We think about what to write. This gets the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Sad for Santa. Someone jacked his sleigh. This is entertaining bit sad for Santa. A good style. Creative and colorful. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in perspective and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Dieting, exercising and cleaning house stink. Nicely written details and a good word flow. I appreciate the humor in this. Sometimes, men just don't get it. Good characters and suitable dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. A nice presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I love Ferris Buellers day off movie. Borrowing a red Ferrari from his neurotic friend. Singing in a parade. Going to a museum and getting a waitress employee to believe he was Tge Sausage King. Well rounded characters and a good retelling of the movie. A neat rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Some good reflections. A damsel in distress. A prince. We like being saved by a prince or knight in shining armor. Well rounded characters and this holds the reader's interest. Creative and colorful. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I have lost both my parents and my mother just recently. Some words written from the heart. I can relate. Well chosen and well defined. We pray to God. I like the style of this. A small rhyme pattern wraps this up nicely. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I wouldn't enjoy being by a muddy swamp instead of the ocean and a tar shack when the brochure promised a fancy resort. Sounds like the author is making tge best of their vacation. Somewhat entertaining. Creative and colorful with good descriptions. A good presentation and neat scenario. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. I used to work in Nursing and it is anything it glamorous so I get the long hours and rough shifts. A good style with well chosen words. Passing pills. A practiced skill. A neat rhyme pattern blends the words together and sums this up with a nice flair. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a man trying to get organized. We can feel feel for him. Thinking okay a Diet Pepsi and ready to start the day. Coffee and rum for this guy. Good call. Easy to follow. Creative and colorful with a well rounded character. A good presentation and well defined. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and be careful what you wish for especially if a fairy hears you. Some good characters with suitable dialogue and a well meaning fairy. Creative and colorful. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation and a fun read. Always: Megan
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