Thanks for your kind words about my stories. I see your'e hip enpugh to dig me. Your word here make me feel proud. I think you would like "The Most Beautiful Little Boy" in my port. I am looking forward to reading ALL of your work.
#55 I didn't let him run a jump. Next week we drop him in for $10,000 claiming around two turns. He will win wire to wire. At 10 to 1 its called a home run my man...
Billy, Billy, Billy, WOW, WOW, WOW. There are so many great lines, this is one of your best stories, and that's coming from a true fan. What is going on inside the dark corners of your mind, makes me tremble.
" Hatch knew he had not gone home with death, but they had definitely been at the dance together."
Billy, I am sitting at work and the system went down. I went to writing.com and did a little editing and started looking to see what you been up to. Sure glad I did.
This is vintage Billy. I love the line "The old man spit, and then smiled showing teeth the color of bark and honey".
I have been so busy, two kids going to good schools, but I have made up my mind to get back to the thing I like most, read & write.
Billy, another great job. I like when you write about care free boyhood days. When what seems like fun truns into an adventure. I felt the dampness as my mind was lowered into the unknown.
I have been so busy I haven't had alot of time to read or write and I do miss it. I have decided that life is way to short and I am going to make the time.
Thanks for featuring JAKE in your next Action/Adventure Newsletter. Another part of his life "The Fight" will be posted this week.
Twisty, its been a long time. Your way with words make me hope that my style is similar. I love the way the words to this story become so visual. Can’t wait to read more.
Check out “JAKE” in my port. It is the start of pretty good story. Let me know what you think.
Billy, great job. I've got to know you too well my man. "Mr Frank you are on the sixth floor of a police station". I knew the deal, but I enjoyed the tirp to the end...
You are cool with the words, my man.
Been busy with one girl at NYU and my baby girl started her 1st year at Boston U. All work and no play makes Geoff a good dad.
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