Dave, I don't know if you remember me I was raised on a farm and ended up in the city. This story as all your stuff is very well writen. Thanks, this brought me back to the days of boyhood dreams.
I know this time of year is all about hard work, but if you get a chance take a look at "SUMMER of 55" its in my contest winners folder. You will get a kick out of it.
Very, very good job with this story. There are way too many Joe's that have a need to belong. I felt my chair vibrating as the train beared down on him. The pace was perfect.
Thanks and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Great job like always. Your end seems a bit grim my man. When its my time I will be on a beach with boat drink in hand. Watching warm crystal clear seas waltzing with the sand.
This was great. I love your style maybe because I feel it is a lot like mine. I have never said that to anyone so coming from me you have yourself a fan. I was freezing my ass off as I was reading this you drew me in my friend.
Thanks again and I do look forward to reading more of your work.
Billy great read. I hope Val finds her red bearded man.
Beauty comes from deep within the eye of the beholder. Times change but a warm heart will always search. Enough of my foolish talk, you got a very cool style my man. I enjoy reading your words.
Very nice job with this story. The pace made me take step for step with Judd on his way to damm nation. I like the style and your way with words.
General Patton knew the fate is the path way to glory and ones destiny. Most even when opportunity is kicking their door in they still do not have the sence to see who there.
I happen to be a dreamer and the points you make seem well thought out and put into words with style. It took me many years to became a dreamers dreamer. I no longer have to wait for the sun to go down for the day dreams are even better.
I enjoyed this read very much and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Welcome home my man. "Their souls are forever lost in this jungle of hell and torment . Here to hunt the enemy for eternity" I hope their reward was better then that my man.
I have a story in my port
"THE LAST BODY BAG"
Go visit COUNTRY MOMS port you will dig it my man.
Very, Very well writen. This is a great first step to a story that I want to read. Your style is visual and the reader watches the story unfold within their minds eye.
"Trista's shocked amazement, it wasn't just her fiance' that walked out , but also the most horrible thing that she thought she'd ever see." How could anyone not turn the page.
You did the deal Kid, I look forward to reading more of your work.
Geoff
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