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Review of A Moment In Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, washing dishes has never been my favorite activity, but you have shown me a new way of seeing this activity and many other activities. For this, I thank you very much. I've seen doing dishes as thank you, God, for the dishes and my ability to wash them. Now that I can experience washing dishes differently, I expect to become more eager to do this task with gratitude and thankfulness as I relax and enjoy the experience. Do you have any other ideas or different POVs to share with WdC members?

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Review of The Pro!  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is amazing how people can think they know someone and their story. It seemed to be a huge surprise for Danny and Pete to discover the ability Bobby had for riding a bicycle. I liked the idea that Bobby was not a showoff and that he understood how other people would feel if he were to compete with the rest of the bikers.

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Review of Sleep My Dear  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In your words, I could feel the loss and the hope together intertwined in a moment of grief and relief. Because I've been there and done this for family members, I can relate to your poem. I also could feel the hope for your loved one to have peace and to be happy while sleeping/being away from earth and waiting for you to join her or him.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the condensed history lesson because the words kept me moving forward and wanting to read to the end of your poetry story. I could follow the events and understand what was happening.

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Review of Crown of Glory  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
[The crown of glory] makes me think of God. Nature as God has made it can be breathtakingly beautiful. Your words brought this experience to life for me. It was as if I was with you and we were sharing the same wonderful display of nature.

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Review of That Night  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Your story is believable, the characters, and the scene because things like this have happened in real life.

[Before Jeff and Jennifer had gotten to the sofa, they were three miles up...] I know you mean the spaceship and its occupants were three miles up, but, I had to pause a moment because I could have interpreted it either way. This temporarily took me out of your story.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When you switched the ending rhyme it made me feel like I was in front of a stop light. It worked well for me. My reading pace slowed as I was guided to a gentle end. The rhythm seemed to be a bit bouncy throughout except for the ending four lines which kept me reading at a faster pace.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I chuckled when I read the ending of your poem. I could see, smell, and hear the furnace as it kept working hard during the night keeping you awake. Although it seemed dangerous, it was probably better than no heat at all, glad everyone is safe. Also, I could imagine the relief when at long-last the old furnace was finally in the junkyard.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is definitely vivid and shows the conflict between being with and being without. I could see two people being together and yet at the same time pulled apart. The hurt although worse at times seems to be always nagging and tearing away at you and maybe the other person. I know there is something special about soulmates.

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Review of Aground  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could certainly feel the loneliness, dread of same stuff different day, and the isolation. Seeing in my imagination on old person reviewing years of the past in their minds as the only activity brought sadness to me. I have experienced being in a place like this because of visiting friends.

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Review of Dancing Sticks  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed a nice video. I was able to see the brand name and it is exactly the same brand of drumset I used to have many years ago. Your poem brought back vivid memories of setting up and breaking down as the band played different gigs. I completely understood your poem because of having this experience, but other people might not completely know about the many techniques and aspects of playing drums. It is great that you added the video.

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Review of No Reservations  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, you wrote a nice poem with vivid words showing emotions. I could see the ribbon of road(s), the vehicle covering many miles, and the fatigue of driving eventually requiring rest. The feelings of anticipation were evident on both sides. The relief of being reunited is unmistakable.

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Review of Pears  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems there are bullies among the fighters. I can believe the story, characters, and scenes. It is a strange world though. Showing emotions for example: Robin had muscles of rubber, heavy eyelids, and stumbled his way to his bed. Or The chattering group silenced suddenly looked straight toward the clanging glass. This shows action rather than telling about the action. She was angry--telling. She stomped to the door, flung it open, and then slammed it shut--showing.

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Review of i miss you  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fear can twist thinking, but sometimes it is helpful. I understand that missing someone you love can be very difficult. Grief takes time and there is a healing process made step by step. The emptiness and regret must be strong because it shows in the words of your poem.

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Review of THE COOKIE LAMENT  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought it might be a sweet situation to be overwhelmed by so many cookies. But too many could become a very sugary avalanche. I saw through your words a huge 18-wheeler in a driveway with workers piling mountains of boxed cookies everywhere possible. My mouth watered as I thought about peanut butter cookies.

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Review of Nekky's Story  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Phew! I could feel the prison in which this character is locked The despair, fear, and other appropriate emotions also went through me as I read these words. The crush of demands day and night loomed over me as the facts of the situation were revealed. No hope, no friends, and being completely alone must be like a living death.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I trust God. Your poem is easy to read and understand. I could visualize the ups and downs in life you wrote about. Whoever is your strengthening person or whatever works together with you, nature, other people/friends, and of course family. This is I think what your poem embodies. True we humans enjoy success

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Your poem tells a story of being united and then ripped apart because of ideals and principles. It made me feel like betrayal was on the loose without any conscience involved. The feelings that must have ripped through the person who originally believed the two of them were working for the same cause but reality showed a different situation.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your vividly worded poem. The characters, actions of the scene, scene, and nature's creation of winter are easy to see and even feel. It felt as if I were there watching everything. The cold is a stark difference from the weather now. I am glad to have read your poem in July and for the cool story.

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Review of Made me Whole  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words gave me a relaxed and peaceful state of being as I read your poem. I was given insight into what I hope is a marvelous and wonderful relationship. The respect and kindness you showed toward the other person is evident.

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Review of O Mohonk  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Visualizing the colorful beauty, tasting the scent of the flowers as I inhaled their bountiful bouquet, and listening as nature spoke to me brought this poem to life. I felt the peacefulness of this day that you showed me. Your words had a calmness to them. They were inviting and I continued to read them. Your description made this experience and place real.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (1.0)
Unfortunately, I was not able to read your story. I think it is written in a language other than English. Hopefully, you will be able to correct this issue so that people can read what you wrote.

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Review of Happy Haloween  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A spooky poem with vividly shown actions through haunted and wonderful words. As the words danced the Halloween dance and worked together to show all the spooky Halloween things done, I enjoyed the song they created and sung along in my mind's eye watching the colorful events and characters.

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Review of Abandoned  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the despair and hurt as I read your poem. Your words gave the feeling of emptiness until the turning point of resolve and need to repair. Sad because of the surprise dumped unceremoniously. But, in the end, peace and joy because of the healing.

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Review of Wings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Do you know who Temple Grandin is and about her accomplishments? I have a few friends who are autistic. I enjoyed your story about the wings. It is a nice way to explain a little about your situation. Hopefully, we will be able to stay in touch.

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