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Review of Out Of Nowhere  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Terror by no cell phone signal, a crazed husband who had enough, and the tree that ended life as they knew it. He might have survived but she would live on elsewhere. I wonder if this story were grown, what happened to him? What if she did survive by some miracle? What if in a twist of fate, she survived and he did not? What was their history?

I could visualize the characters, and events, and believe the plot.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Family Gathering  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can smell the wafting aroma of food cooking, the grass and tree flavors, and imagine family members together enjoying a cookout. Divine love brings me to humans as the flowers in the garden enjoying a cookout.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You certainly conveyed well the mental challenges you experienced through Bla, Bla, Bla, and some other descriptive words. Bla stands out the most. I'm glad your story ended on a happier note. I guess according to your last line you also had jangled nerves? I hope things work out well for you in the future.

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Review of Comfort  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I do understand the relief of a quiet brain because it takes me a long time to go to sleep because my brain does not know when to shut up. I can see this writing from two points of view. From the view of the dead person whose brain is now quiet in death, and from the living person whose brain is stunned or saddened because of the loss of someone and is now quietly working through the grief of this loss.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I had to think about the words you used to convey your ideas in this poem. I like the ending which is as I understand it, about being honorable, not causing wars or other destructive issues, and keeping the faith. Yup, it takes all kinds of minds sets in this world to learn to work, play, and exist on Earth together.

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Review of who am I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
ESL English As A Second Language kind of reminds me of ASL. I was born premature by six weeks and placed in an incubator. Back then it was a very big deal. I can relate to medical challenges because I am living with medical challenges. It was nice to read about your life experiences.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that humans often battle against nature rather than working with nature. Your story is believable based on what I think would happen if animals were to stand up for nature and fight for survival. Your words show well how animals would react and the outcome of a vote for or against humans.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Messenger  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It didn't want to be written entirely, God wanted you to write this story, therefore because God wanted you to write this story, it wanted to be written. I completely agree with you that God loves and is interested in everyone unconditionally. There are, however, Requirements, but here is not the place to delve into them. WE HAD FREE CHOICE BECAUSE GOD DOES NOT WANT PUPPETS ON STRINGS. Oops accidentally hit the caps lock, but then this might be God's emphasis. I could believe this story, see the characters and scenes, hear the conversation, and feel the special spiritual influence upon your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
This seems to be an extraordinary and strong love for a very special person that can not be repaid in kind. Yje honor and respect for the loved one and the risks for this person show the determination and life long comitment to the loved one. I could feel the magnetic pull toward this loved one.

I noticed there are several typos.

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Review of The Beauty of Use  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I smiled as I read your poem story because thinking about a writer and the craft came to me first. Then, the idea of memories of things I have enjoyed and used. I could picture old things compared to new things and the character of the old things was shown brightly because I understood the love for them in your words. God came to my mind and my heart leaped for joy as I read more of your carefully chosen and placed words. God's love for us is always and forever not matter where we wind up.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Little Big Horn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The other side of seeing the future is the possibility of changes because of fear. Hopefully, history will be decided because of other influences besides fear. I could visualize the scenes and imagine someone possibly changing history because the future was revealed to this person. This could be a double-edged sword as are many things in life.

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Review of Faith's Path  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your poem is so peaceful after the relationship with God is forged. I could imagine the cuts and bruises of life and being distanced from God. I also could feel His gentle hug and careful bringing of his child into His sheltering and safe domain. The path forward is easy and His yoke is light.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The word count of 700 is interesting because 7 is important to God. You wrote a wonderful story that is believable. The scene and character are believable. I could feel the hope and regaining of the relationship between Megan and God. The note card made a good example of God at work through people or sometimes other means.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nothin' like having financial troubles and fixing them with a stiff drink only to find more trouble waiting for you on the other end of the conversation with the barkeeper, nice story. I could envision the characters and hear the conversation as if I were there close enough to hear and see everything but far enough away to be a spectator.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Warm hearts are a good thing and I can imagine these hearts wrapped in a loving blanket. As I read your poem, I was able to see the characters in silhouette dancing and the events as the characters proceeded through their encounter together.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad you found love in your heart today and every day. I enjoyed reading your poem because the words gently guided me along the way to know the story of your found love. It felt as if you were telling me about this wonderful event in your life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Trade Winds Sing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could definitely imagine the trade winds blowing and bringing the sounds and scents of the area to me. Your words showed a peaceful situation. I felt calm and relaxed as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Misled  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Maybe you should have known, but usually, people are good at hiding things, so I would probably think that you were deceived and the truth was hidden from you with other things to distract you from seeing the reality of the situation. I hope you have been able to heal and continue with a happy life.

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Review of Fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that fall is a nice time of year, but dread the coming winter because it means scrounging for firewood. It also means I need to fix and prepare the chimney and woodstove asap. Otherwise, I'm with you. I could see the brilliantly colored leaves cascading through the air and feel the coolness of fall as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Cosmic Serenade  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love never ending seems to weave through your poem and show a union of never-ending appreciation for all the best anyone could imagine for each other. I could feel the love and see how each of you felt through the vivid words you used.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of LGBTQ+  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I respectfully write that according to the scriptures, man should not be with man nor woman with woman. I do get that we should love one another which is also in scripture, but it is meant as brother and sister as in loving a family member. Some of my friends have different lifestyles than I do, so I'm not against you. I am sharing what I understand about the situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of LOVE’S TEAR  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems that you are in the middle of a situation that is in need of answers, yet I suspect that you also do not want to know what the answers are because of the possibility of disappointment.

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Review of Moving Forward  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
They were fortunate to be able to discuss the movie and game situation without it becoming an argument. I'm glad their marriage moved forward and hope it continued to be a positive experience for both of them. Through your words, I could see them interacting as they watched the movie which was eventually paused. They seem to get along well and to be able to agree to disagree, a good marriage is a a pleasure.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rob's Rescue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very nice story showing how caring for Robin is like God caring for us. I could visualize the characters taking care of the bird as well as think about God and visualize Him taking care of us. God is good all the time.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Furbaby  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am thankful for the pets I have. I can attest from my lifelong adventure with having animal friends that you are absolutely correct. I like the way you compared having pets with not having pets because for me I believe this is true, but sadly some people do not have a clue of the joy an animal friend and family member can give to someone. Your words spoke volumes to the reasons for bringing a pet into the family and cherishing that animal as a beloved family member.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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