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Review of Pandora  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You wrote a suspenseful poem with detailed and vivid descriptions of each scene and actions of the character. I can imagine being faced with the problem of opening the box or leaving it closed, but human nature usually succumbs to curiosity.

Thank you for writing and sharing your mysterious box poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The pickled prince seems to have lost reality and become a recluse. Your words smoothly escorted me from the beginning of your poem to the ending. In a way it was funny, but it also was sad. I clearly saw the pickled prince and the scenes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and Wdc members about the pickled prince. Sweet or dill, or something else?


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree you are the writer. Your words are strong and show that even in challenging situations when it seems all is lost with a pen or keyboard you are able to overcome and win battles. Your poem showed me how you cope with this crazy world, that you are a survivor, and you have zeal for life.

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Review of Requiem  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel sadness as I read your words because of the hopes that were not fulfilled and the challenge of making peace with the circumstances. Your poem is well written with a description that shows the emotions and life unfulfilled.

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Review of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My first thought while reading the last four lines is Jesus and His love. All of my life I have had a wonderful relationship with His and He has never let me down.

I can understand why love is so challenging because there are many types, versions, and levels of love. If you are referring to romantic love I can relate this to your poem. Humans are changeable and so are emotions which you clearly show in your words and this goes both ways. You wrote clearly, showed the character well-love, and I found no distractions to take me away from your poetry.

...to call my your... [me?] last line

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an inviting and concise blurb about the website you use and explained where to find your stories. Adding the link is convenient, thanks.

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Review of monday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I know many people dread Monday because of facing a long work week, but sometimes it can be a wonderful adventure. Reading your words is an adventure I enjoyed because I got to know how Monday is for you. I found no issues to distract me as I read this story. It is an easy reading experience and I could understand what you wrote.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Monday with me and WdC members.


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Review of Cyclic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You showed me in capsule form an entire life. As you wrote about youthfulness to middle age and then to senior citizens I imagined people making these changes. Your words guided me from the beginning to ending of your poem easily and I was not distracted.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem about life changes with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very nice tribute to May and the workers in poem form. The rhythm is easy to read and follow from the beginning of your poem to the ending. I visualized the change of season as warmth covered the ground. I could see workers enjoying their day and having success in completing their tasks. I saw nature blossom and life emerge in colorful array.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about May with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I envisioned rain dropping from the clouds and cascading on sheets toward the earth. I too know the wonderful smell of the approaching rain and rejoice because it at the moment is my only source of water. I could hear the pitter-patter of the rain as your words guided me from the beginning of your poem to the ending. The rhyming words are a delight to read. There were no distractions taking me away from experiencing your poem.

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Review of Morning Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see you in my mind as you sat in front of the computer thinking and creating word art. I'm glad you found WdC. It's nice to read your story and get to know you. Your story is interesting and I was able to immerse myself into the scene and follow your story easily. There were no distractions that interrupted my reading.

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Review of David Is Short  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Visualizing the scene and hearing the echo in the gym as the teacher bellowed his instructions brought back memories of the gym to me. I could relate with David because I was not the most athletic person and students picked on me too. Your story is believable, the characters acted normally, and the scene is similar to what I remember without the berating and yelling. Your story kept me interested in reading. I found no distractions as I read your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about David and gym class word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The characters you introduced me to are likable and inviting. It was nice watching them rekindle their friendship. While reading your story I was not distracted by any issues. More importantly, I was brought into the story as if invited to have coffee with them.

Thank you for writing and sharing the renewed friendship story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ẃeβ࿚Ẃỉtcĥ Author Icon I applied your success as a writer and in life. You wrote an inspiring story sharing your challenges and adventures growing up and becoming an adult. I could see you tinkering with the typewriter and your imagination gearing up to create word art. There is nothing in your story to distract me. I was drawn into your story and the words showed me scenes I could relate to as I started writing.

Thank you for writing and sharing how you started to write and use word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice dog signature. You created a nice and thorough review template. It seems to cover a lot of what writers want to know. The layout is clear. It is a good example template that can give people ideas about how they can create their own templates.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I soured as I read your closing words. My spirit is jubilant and peaceful enjoying the praise for God. While reading the beginning of your poem I thought about the words written for songs. Some for me are ok but others are distrubing which you mentioned in your poem. I could feel the urgency of your words.

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Review of Invisible There  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Because you write and share your ideas you to me are not invisible. I could feel and see the battle within your words. It seemed to be a tug of war between doing right and not. It also seemed to be contradictions, but I think "not so". The battle rages outwardly and within depending on the stimuli and its sources. Have you read The Celestine Prophecy?

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Review of Emerald Tower  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I had several thoughts. I thought about Jesus overcoming evil. Poisons used on weeds also were considered. People who are victorious in life no matter the hardships and challenges. Nature is beautiful but mankind frequently discounts nature nd ravages it either unknowingly or on purpose. Your words are easy to read and understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the tower with me and WdC members.


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Review of Style  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the word picture you showed me with your words because it was easy to imagine the actions of the scene. Going from standing to sitting with a face glaring shows me there is turmoil because having a picture taken was not wanted. The rhythm is good and carried me smoothly from one word to the other.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read both versions of the poems and enjoyed them. The first one at the top told the story with less rhyming yet it is relevant and poetic. The second one is relevant and has more rhyming words. This story spoke to me more in a way different from the other version. It seemed to have a closeness the first one didn't. The first one seemed to me to be more matter of fact. I could visualize the characters and scenes as well as follow the plot easily.

Thank you for writing about friendship and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could see you and Moby racing about in all kinds of wether and conditions. As the years and environment took its toll on Moby I could see the rust slowly creeping and eventually taking the life from your beloved vehicle. I hope you have a new vehicle that takes care of your needs but know in your heart Moby is still with you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love ever lasting is within these words that show a brokenheart. As I read your words I could feel the longing and sadness because of a love stolen, but I had hope the this would change and be healed.

Thank you for writing about a stolen love and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The 8 Sisters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed your story because it showed me a family not related yet people who worked together for a common cause. The plot, characters, scene, and actions are believable. My imagination saw the story.

Thank you for writing about this unique family and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Four Seasons  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For me it's about cool temperatures. Warm and hot temperatures and I do not do well together. Cold temperatures are too much for me also.

I was able to read and understand your prose.

Thank you for writing about the seasons and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am better when it is cooler but not cold. Heat an I do not do well together. Because of this as I read your poem I focused on the cooler statements while being aware that summer is around the corner. It felt like heat and cold, warm and cool were dancing in my mind. Your poem is a smooth reading experience.

Thank you for writing about the temperatures and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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