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Review of Within Arms Reach  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story it felt like taking a trip through the arts. I could see in my mind creativity frolicking about as ideas became artwork. Emotions raced as this artwork was set out for all to see and admire, but you stood in the shadows unnoticed, yet your light shone. These ideas and images formed as I read your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your creativity and word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Balloon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched through your words as you experimented with space flight using figures and a balloon for each one. As they ascended into the unknown with no hope of return there was a sense of loss with the sense of adventure. Your astronaut doll seems to have the greatest chance for survival and the ability to go further into the realms of space than another figure before.

I felt like I went on this adventure with these figures.

Thank you for writing and sharing your space travel word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Today, I Will  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
As the words twirled, swirled, and cavorted about I saw them changing positions until they found their right places within sentences and then the sentences formed paragraphs. The story became a living community of words and I visited there while reading your poetry in motion.

Genres that would fit this artistic poetry might be writing, action/adventure because this is an adventure with words, mystery because writing can be a mystery, thriller because it is thrilling to go wherever the words take you, and personal because writing is a personal experience. There are other possibilities of course.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about words and showing what the imagination creates.


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Review of Wanderer  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could imagine a figure searching down every street, path, and trail looking for love or other treasures related to love. Feeling the pull and gentleness of love guiding the figure forward yet not one to love can be found, however, the world is explored daily and nightly. A broken heart beats with this uearning.

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Review of PTSD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read through your story at first you show him as the ideal person, but as the story continues he gradually becomes more of his real self until he is completely exposed as a person to be avoided and possibly feared. I could see through your story he uses psychological means to control and manipulate. When I got to the end it was as if something heavy dropped to the ground shattering life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about things not being as they seam

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Review of Stone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your words I saw a burning bridge, Gold in her hair, and saw you landing in golden rocks unharmed. Although this can be seen as dark, I felt as if there was hope woven into the story. With hope, survival, and a future ahead it is possible for this story to continue. I was not distracted by issues while reading this poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your adventurous word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Summer Nights  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I heard the thunder and pitter-patter of rain mixed with buckets dumped upon a rooftop. Seeing the flashes of lightning illuminate the sky as I looked out watching the storm. Feeling the coolness glide in as it caressed my skin. Smelling the dampness and tasting the dense air. I know the creatures scampered for cover. Your poem is a movie created with words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your stormy word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of I Won’t Survive  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
At first, it seems a mix of contradictions, but this tug-of-war is more than survival. I know some writers have become lost mentally and not come back from their worlds within and yet others never come near to this challenging situation. This also has happened to some chess maters because they obsess over the details of the game and it overtakes them. I feel like surviving writing and other life challenges are a lot of what you considered as you wrote this poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the challenges of survival with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw your ending coming because of the {10 Ladies} reference. The conversation also gave a clue because the interruptions and offerings were distracting the inspector causing him to eventually want to leave without asking for details. As I read your story the conversation was as if I was eavesdropping and it was realistic. The scene was easy to visualize. Your characters engaged in a way that made the story move forward nicely. There were no distractions and I was completely immersed in the events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about the crows with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Feeling the emotions of your words is like having a heavy weight on me. I could imagine fighting to get out from under. Running on a hamster wheel by repeating the same actions over and over must be a horrible living circumstance. I hope there is a light at the end of the tunnel.

Thirty for something...
I believe you wanted to use another word. Auto correct might have changed this sentence.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I saw the events and felt emotions that people might decide to experience, good or bad. More importantly I felt and saw the focus on life as being a precious gift from God. Considering that things happening in your story I believe that through all these things there should be thanks for life. For example I'm thankful for having dirty dishes because I'm alive to wash them.

Thank you for writing about the challenges of life and sharing your word art about life being a precious gift from God. This is what I get from your poem


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Chuckling after reading this is great because it is uplifting and a fun story. I saw an older person running after the cab and eventually realizing it is safer to let the cab go. Also the younger person or persons caught the cab because they could run faster which was a nice visual. Nothing distracted me from reading and emerging myself into your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art chasing a cab with me and WdC members

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I see two tethered together flying and life springing forth in brilliant colors. As if live had just begin after a long sleep. I could feel the happiness and joy of being able to live a wonderful life. There was nothing to take me out of your easy to read story.

Thank you for writing about life and joy and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Escape The Keep  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words had me running in the story and then jumping eventually panting to catch my breath. I could hear the storm winds, crashing of the waves, and the walls grinding against each other as they collapsed. Watching those trapped inside dashing to escape their deaths made me want to help them. Fully inside your story I was not distracted and enjoyed reading it from beginning to the ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your stormy story with me and WdC members


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Your story sounds like a happy ever after fairytale. I got to know the characters through their wishes and dream to be married. The wolves seem to be wonderful creatures. The area and townsfolk according to your story are nice and everyone gets along with each other Your story is easy to read, understand, and there were no distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wedding story and word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I got to know your characters well because of the nice conversation they had. It was funny when they talked about how each of them was. In my mind according to your description Danny could have been a little person or an alien. I can relate to shopping hassles.

Thank you for writing about your shopping trip and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Fireflies Rising  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could visualize everyone watching the fireflies and enjoying the night. I like fireflies and could see them flying about polsing their light. Feeling the need for sleep I could imagine everyone heading to a comfy bed. It was easy to read your poem and there were no distractions.

Thank you for writing about the fireflies and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Uncaged Grace  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poem, you showed freedom at its best because the dolphin gracefully swims and leaps in the sea. I could see the dolphin joyfully having fun and enjoying life and the day. Your happy words painted a wonderful picture of the dolphin free to frolic. My focus was on watching all this in my mind's eye.

Thank you for writing about the dolphin and sharing your word art with me and WdC member

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your story. The ending made me laugh. I appreciate the laugh. It is my kind of writing and reading a lot of the time because my imagination can follow the funny, weird, and crazy stuff. Your words guided me from the beginning to the end easily and it was a smooth reading experience. I found nothing to distract me.

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Review of A Moment Together  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is shining brightly because of the description shown in detail and the expressions of emotions wrapped into a wonderful love toward your special someone. I had no trouble reading your poem and I was not distracted by grammar or typos.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to easily picture the dark sky illuminated by the moonlight and the twinkling stars. The next picture I saw as I read your words was of you relaxed and lying in a meadow gazing up and seeing the moonlight and the stars. I felt peaceful viewing these images. Your poem is easy to read and understand and has nothing distracting.

Thank you for writing your poem and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You describe your pleasent so that I can enjoy it also. The memories of your childhood accompany your enjoyment of the day. I could easily see ans fully experience your day and mental adventure into your childhood memories.

Thank you for writing and sharing your day and mental adventure into your childhood with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can understand the challenges of visual communication because I have limited vision. You touched on a topic many people either are unaware of, or ignore or take for granted. I also have hearing loss so can understand not knowing voice inflections and the meanings. It's amazing how people do not understand and decide to avoid a situation be they so-called normal or people with challenges/disABLEd. I agree with you about being able to help because what you wrote came from your heart and shows your concern for people. Through your words, you explained well the topic of autism and the spectrum.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Autism with me and WdC members.


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Review of The New Job  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's amazing what some people will do to advance their careers. Ted seems to have taken advantage of information that he used to blackmail Dennis so Ted could get a position high up in the company, but I think that Denis did a similar thing to someone else. Your plot, characters, scene, and style are very nicely created and realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word about the company and getting great positions within it with me and WdC members.

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Review of Checkmate  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is an eerie story that I enjoyed reading because I was able to insert myself into the characters, actions, and be fully aware of everything. In my imagination I saw the details and heard the conversations. I was drawn to your story because of the word CHESS that was in your title.

Thank you for writing about this story with chess as part of the plot and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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