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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can imagine this is something like a bingo card, or many of the same bingo cards, or many different bingo cards. I wonder if you are eventually going to relaunch this activity, or if you might use this item in a different unique way/repurpose it? I have repurposed some of my items as needed.

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Review of Across the street  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
After reading your story the question that loomed and demanded an answer is: what did you decide? Are you still considering your options? While reading your story I thought about the paramedic who successfully stopped riding the ambulances and had a music career.

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Review of The Note  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My thoughts as I read your story is that people who steal or are tempted to steal should consider the hurt they do and how they would feel if someone stole from them. This story is realistic because there are thieves and victims. It is unusual for a pic-pocket to have remorse but it might happen occasionally.

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Review of Why Me?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad I found your poem because it is uplifting and makes my heart feel glad. There is a lot of truth in your words and I hope many people read your poem. My thought as I read your poem is that God chastens whom He loves.

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Review of April Fool's Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh did I ever need the laughter, thank you. I get it about the overload of this day and can relate because it isn't my favorite way to experience April 1st. I was completely in your story and found nothing to distract me from paying attention. It is believable and the characters are realistic.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
At first, I almost didn't review your poem because it was written in a language I was not able to read. I decided to scroll down and see if there was additional information and I was rewarded with the translation, thank you. While reading your poem I could feel the emptiness, strife, greed, and other dark emotions fighting to obliterate the light, happiness, peace, love, and other wonderful and fantastic emotions.

You express the war between [the light] and darkness, physical and spiritual, and good and evil very well. Considering who is the prince of this world I'm not planning to stay for eternity because I want to be in and with [the light], God.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about humanity and the battle with me and WdC members.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You ask a good question at the end and I think this is a good question for writers to ask themselves about their notes or notebooks. When I consider a story I ask who did what, when, where, why, and how. You have written some ideas so that they are not lost and can be used in a project or several projects which is a great idea that I use.

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Review of Tired  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I wonder why you wrote that fatigue is a fake friend and tired is a real friend because I see these words show the extremes of the situation. Tired is less problematic than fatigued because fatigued is a stronger situation or feeling. This is what I pondered after reading your Poem. I prefer not being hit by any vehicle, lol, but I do understand why you use this to describe the differences.

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Review of My Greatest Folly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine many voices whispering as tales streamed through the air. The scene seemed to be busy with gossip and people pointing fingers. These images played in my mind as I read your poem.

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Review of Love Cycles  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is true that we have more strength and courage than we know. There are different kinds of love. Love can be deep or shallow as you showed me in your words, but I think you focused more on romantic love, sibling love, or love for God. The rhythm of your words is easy to read.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Years ago I bowled with the MS bowling group. We used ramps to roll the balls, but we did have to aim the ramp so the ball went where it was supposed to go. I watched the balls you wrote about score well and not score depending on how they were handled. Your words showed me the joy and fun you have when you go bowling. The scenes are vivid and the character, the ball is easy to visualize rolling toward the pins.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this quote because it tells me that God is and will be victorious over evil and death. It gives me peace in knowing I'm doing right by trusting God. I'm glad I found this quote.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I read your story without any distractions taking me out of your story. I could feel the struggle to resolve the challenges of life. It felt as if someone or something was trying to rip apart contentment but when you mentioned contempt I wasn't sure I understood the challenging problem.

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Review of A Love So Perfect  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the joy and love for each other through your words. The excitement of finding the special person for a lifetime is evident. Your words are peaceful and urge me to read until the end.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your characters kept me interested in your story. The scenes are good visuals that bring the story to life. Tension and mystery kept me reading to discover what happened next. The ending for me was understandable, but it was a letdown. I think it is because it came so quickly and there was no indication that the characters would meet again or where the money wound up. I figured Mac made off with the money, but how did Harvey feel and what was he going to do about being taken advantage of?

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for relating WdC to these other wonders because I now understand what WdC means to you and that you want other people to know how wonderful WdC is as a writing community. While reading this item I wondered where the WdC information was and finally at the end was rewarded.

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Review of At Last...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I understand the strong need to find a cure and that there was an attack, but some background information about why they are being attacked would be very helpful. My guess is maybe someone doesn't like horses or they don't want a new discovery related to the horse problem to be realized.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I could visualize the scenes through your words. It is clear to me that you have many memories about your house and family, some good and some that are dramatic. The ending of your story was sad and a bit of an unexpected change.

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Review of Hunger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You describe the different types of hunger that I imagined as I read your story. This reminded me that I should get breakfast. While reading the parts about blood-stained jeans, screams, the blade finally splits, and the rest, I thought about serial killers. I guess a serial killer can be someone who kills chickens. I was surprised when you wrote about killing a chicken because of hunger, you got me good, lol.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The conversation between Shasta and Bree reminded me of the TV show Mr. Ed. I was able to see the scenes, and characters, and hear the conversation as I read your story. There were no distractions to take me out of your story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The conversation between father and son is realistic, but fantasy also because bears don't really speak English, lol. The scenes are nicely detailed and the characters are well developed. It was sad to discover that Mom had died.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can understand why Salmon Rubenstein sought revenge, but this could maybe been avoided had he not lied in the first place or at least shortly after people got to know him. Lies and fear made things go the wrong way because after the lie people didn't trust this half-human and half alien. These thoughts and my imagination showed me the details of your story.

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Review of The Picnic  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I absolutealedy enjoyeded de non-sense cents poem you wort wid graded imajinasson. I had no trouble following the story as it rode the accompanying rhythm that also carried me from word to word and from beginning to end nicely. The scenes are vivid and I felt as if I was with them at the picked-nicked.

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Review of Late Night  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could picture the scene and hear the humming and words spoken in a whisper to Teddy Bears. I wonder if parents hear children even when they are being very, very quiet and they don't tell the children.

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Review of True Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I could imagine two people with love wrapped around them, eventually a wedding, and after that a family. It seemed even with their struggles love prevailed and they were a happy family for years until age and illness again plagued the parents and left them wondering about their children. I felt mixed emotions as I read this poem story from joy because love triumphed and life continued to sadness when the parents became ill and worried about their children. I saw every scene through your words.

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