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Review of Southern Snow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This form of poetry is interesting because I hadn't considered stringing-related Haiku poems together. The words guided me in a rhythmically smooth manner from the beginning to the end of your poem. I was able to visualize the scenes and see the characters watching the snowflakes.

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Review of For Andrea 2  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad I found your poem because this form is new to me. It is simple and clear with a nice rhythm. I was able to visualize the scene and know the characters through your words.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words about Jesus and Christmas warmed my heart and uplifted my spirit. The words smoothly and peacefully guided me from beginning to end. I could feel the love with which you crafted this poem.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your story seems to be the beginning of a romance. In my imagination, I was able through your words to visualize the characters and scenes. I wonder what the circular path is all about.

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Review of Citadel #95  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed both stories because they were written in a colorful way showing the characters and actions vividly. Each scene was easy for me to see in my imagination as I followed your words. You surprised me when a hawk grabbed the cat. Being run over by a boy pursuing his treasure was also unexpected.

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Review of Black  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like and have respect for ravens and other animals. Your story poem showed me the raven taking in its environment and enjoying life. I could visualize the scenes as the bird visited different areas. For me this poem was peaceful. Your words gently guided me in a smooth rhythm from beginning to end.

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Review of My Third Entry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand about the drama we have in the world these days. You expressed well your dislike for this drama and I felt like I was hit with drama. Emotionally it was a letdown because you showed the sadness in your words. We need more bright colors, laughter, and friendships which TV seems to dismiss as not important. I'm with you about decent comedies.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The auto-response email is concise and understandable. There are no excessive statements/fluff in words and sentences. I found the font difficult to read because I have limited vision.

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Review of The twosome  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You were blessed with two wonderful dogs. I'm glad everything worked out ok when the men tried to rob your family. As I read your story I could see the scenes and characters very well. It felt like I was visiting with you.

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Review of The Tree Sap  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I thought about God and all He has created. I could see in my mind's eye the two figures gathering the sap from the trees and feel their emotions of joy and gladness because they were provided this precious sap.

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Review of Rainy Days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your story reminded me of the time when I was in MD. We had a severe thunderstorm and I was watching and listening to it perform in the sky. Fortunately, I was on the front porch with my dogs when lightning hit one of the huge oak trees at the back of my house. After this incident, I didn't go outside during thunderstorms. I still watch and listen to the performance from inside.

I can relate to your words and see the scene. I imagined the sounds as your words showed me what was happening.

Thank you for writing and sharing your thunderstorm word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
And so you've left the reader on edge wondering what will happen next. Good for you! I enjoyed the story and was able to visualize Droplet and Bubble kinda as cartoon characters and Joe as an unhappy person feeling trapped in his current situation. The scenes were nicely presented and the lightning flashed before my eyes.

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Review of Starting Over  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought about strange and unusual TV shows like The Twilight Zone as I read your story. The characters would be more interesting if some of their emotions were shown, but I know you had a limited word count for flash fiction. Perhaps this story could be developed further into a short story. The scenes are descriptive showing me details of the events and I was completely immersed in your story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Following the story and imagining the scenes was easy because your words showed action and character without any fluff to take away from this story. I wonder how things will turn out in the future.

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Review of help  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to see in my mind's eye the scene of a sinking ship, the captain shouting orders to keep going and conquer the waters, and the passengers struggling to catch a breath of air as they struggled in the tossing and churning waters. Feeling the panic and desperation as it turned into despair and hopelessness made me want to reach out to get the captains attention and get the captain to realize the horrible situation.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Charlie did the best thing to look up because he then had eternal life in heaven. I followed the scene easily and saw the characters and events clearly through your words. During the talk about saving Charlies life I could feel Charlie struggling and wondered what decision he would make.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The cat has well explained and shown the scene. Characters who interact with each other and one who has no idea of cat thoughts kept me interested in reading your story. I found the ending of your story a bit eerie because of the cat being a god like creature, but it fit well.

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Review of Maria  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The scene is a spooky one that I'm glad I wasn't involved in even if it was for masking a movie. Seeing in my mind the teeth hovering over the neck is chilling. The characters are interesting, but how did they feel? Emotions shown would help the reader know these characters better.

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Review of Darker Than Black  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
My imagery is of someone on earth in a very dark place and situation longing for the light and escape from this horrid situation. I felt like there was hardly any hope or Means to change anything for the better without extraordinary human attempt intervene or a miraculous event.

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Review of Whatcha Not To Do  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I thought about Jesus and what He did while on earth. I know God the God of Israel is He who is no respecter of persons. His grace is sufficient. He is creator and glorious. Prayer is powerful. He is God of love and peace. I also considered the price of this world who rewards his children when they do or follow his plans. My reward awaits me in heaven.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I imagined Mom listening intently to the words of her son. I guess she taught her son well for know and respect the person he loves and to cherish her. I can see the mother proud of what her son learned and full of hope for the future for them.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the sadness and emptiness because of a beloved animal leaving the earth and a human heart breaking, but I also felt hope and joy because the animal shared wonderful years with this human. I've loved and enjoyed the many years of my animal family members life with me. The love for my animals is forever.

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Review of What Is It?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Your story is very much am unsolved mystery. I wonder what the noise sounds like? The way you led me to believe I would finally find out what the noise was is great. The neighbors getting together to solve this mystery works well but leaves the reader feeling either misled or hanging because the question about the noise has not been answered.

The characters can become more interesting by showing their emotions. The body language shaking hands, stomach in knots, or other actions/reactions. Inside the mind picturing something, nerves on edge-tingling, firing rapidly, breathing fast and deep, or other responses to the unknown.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate because I used to live in a place where I heard traffic regularly. Now where I live it is quiet. I was able to imagine the frustration because of the invasion of noise in the morning. I could see ears trying to shut tight, but mostly I could see someone turning things off and finally enjoying silence.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to see in my imagination the different people doing different jobs as I read your sone story. It reminds of patriotism and the love for our country that the founding fathers and common workin men felt.

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