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Review of Broken Ring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine the fights with screaming and maybe hitting which is a sad situation and upsetting to know about. It is realistic because this happens in life depending on the people and circumstances. I could hear the screaming, see the hands-on, pushing and twisting as things escalated, and then the ring was broken and eventually placed in the box. I can also imagine the ring being repaired and healing beginning.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about the broken ring with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Fan Issue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ending of your story made me laugh, I needed that, thank you. The events, characters, and interactions are normal human activities including sending hubby out for something. I imagined everything easily. I'm glad you got your fan back.

Thank you for writing and sharing your fan story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of persona  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is a sad circumstance within your poem because of the lies or misunderstandings. I could feel the tug of war as you were pulled back and forth trying to manage each issue in life that bombarded you from childhood to adulthood. Trying to be someone you are not to please people is difficult. I know from experience because I had to please the agencies I've dealt with through the years.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about persona with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is the first time I found an author's blurb on writing dot com. You wrote a concise and interesting introduction to your book The Pie, The Pie, and Oh That Smell. As I read your words I could picture children enjoying your book gathered in a circle with someone reading to them. Your blurb is easy to read, and understand, and if I had children I would probably investigate your book.

Thank you for writing and sharing your book blurb word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words uplifted my spirit as I read them. I could feel the love and praise through your words. Your poem is easy to read and understand showing reverence and evoking pictures in my mind of angels and people praising God.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about worship and praising God with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this wonderful and hearty tribute to the fathers in your family and to fathers generally at least those who step up and are fathers. I understand what you mean about fathers being part of the family and investing in everyone's lives, protecting, educating, showing how to survive in the world, and other important things. I could see those father in general taking care of their families and the joy everyone had in my imagination as I read your story. The love within these families is evident through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing about your family fatherhood with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem reminded me about the two years I was hit with excessive polin counts. One year on the east coast and the other year on the west coast. It brought back vivid memories of the stuffy nose, itching, sneezing, and relentless itchy throat that was impossible to scratch.

Your poem is colorful, bouncy as I read it, and easy to read and understand. I couldn't help chuckling even though the memories of the allergy attacks came alive in my memory.

Thank you for writing and sharing your allergy poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Skip  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dogs are wonderful and I'm glad this story has a happy ending. The characters, schemes, and events are realistic. You might want to put a space between the last two thwack words. I felt relieved when Skip was found.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about Skip with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I do not understand the language, but I can imagine what the picture is about. It looks like the person on the right is not happy with the foot on the left. Maybe it is smelly, or perhaps there is a serious injury, or it belongs to someone this person has trouble befriending.

Sadly this story has not been translated into English.

Thank you for writing, it would be nice if it was translated into English, and sharing your picture and word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Space is Dark  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a nice action adventure scene that I could visualize as I read easily. The idea about space being dark after reading your story has more than one meaning to me. It foretold the darkness of life extinguished at the end of your story as well as the situation the characters were in during the battle.

It seems there might be a few typos.

Thank you for writing and sharing your space word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Revelation  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your poem was easy and I found no distractions. Yes, first love is an extraordinary experience. The memories you shared about your first love are clear and I could imagine that time stood still for a while.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about first love with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate knowing Spot through your words. Your poem is easy to read and understand I found nothing to distract me from reading. Visualizing the events and learning about your beloved cat, family member, was easy and clear to me. I felt the loss as I read your story about Spot. I've had this experience many times.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Spot with me and WdC members.

"WINNERS:3X6 AUCTION CONCOCTION CLOSED*" 


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I suppose many husbands do similarly when their loved ones are having medical challenges. As I read your poem I could imagine the character and his actions. I could feel the anxiety and hope intertwined. I could feel the heartbreak too.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about D cups with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I neared the end of your story I realized that Matilda was no longer alive but a ghost roaming around her home. Sure enough, the police arrived and told her husband...It was confirmed to me that she had died. I wasn't distracted and taken out of the story. The characters and the scene are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Matilda and her family with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rough Draft (Duh)  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
And, keep it, you should. I enjoyed discovering what treasures were in your first draft. You showed your writing heart and longing to create. Some poets edit their poems many, many times, so enjoy the process and edit and create with joy and happiness. I'm glad you are writing and sharing your creativity.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and dC members.


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Review of Easy Goes It Does  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As it has been stated inspiration and perspiration with the right stimulus can create success. I enjoyed reading your poem as the words guided me from start to finish. Your words showed elements needed to necessary for a good strong future which are possible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Gentle Reminder  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a peaceful poem. I was gently guided from the beginning of your poem to the ending. I could feel your honesty and desire through these words. I felt like we were sharing this poem prayer together. Your writing uplifted my spirit, thank you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your heartfelt poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Going Home  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a fun ride headed home until the unexpected news temporarily almost ruined the trip. It seems Devon is resilient. Your story, characters, scene, and responses to stimuli are realistic. I enjoyed reading this story and found no distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing the trip home word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Change Me  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt like your poem was a prayer. It was as if you were asking for help to be the very best you could be with the willingness to endure trials and tribulations to achieve the cleanness you hope for and desire. I am thankful for finding and reading your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being changed with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pandora  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You wrote a suspenseful poem with detailed and vivid descriptions of each scene and actions of the character. I can imagine being faced with the problem of opening the box or leaving it closed, but human nature usually succumbs to curiosity.

Thank you for writing and sharing your mysterious box poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The pickled prince seems to have lost reality and become a recluse. Your words smoothly escorted me from the beginning of your poem to the ending. In a way it was funny, but it also was sad. I clearly saw the pickled prince and the scenes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and Wdc members about the pickled prince. Sweet or dill, or something else?


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree you are the writer. Your words are strong and show that even in challenging situations when it seems all is lost with a pen or keyboard you are able to overcome and win battles. Your poem showed me how you cope with this crazy world, that you are a survivor, and you have zeal for life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Requiem  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel sadness as I read your words because of the hopes that were not fulfilled and the challenge of making peace with the circumstances. Your poem is well written with a description that shows the emotions and life unfulfilled.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Griffin's Blade  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your opening is vivid and my emotions came along for this wonderful ride as I followed your words into the story. It's exciting to read this introduction and ponder the questions. My nerves became active with the thought of what if and what's this and that.

I laughed at the part explaining cooking the TV dinner. For some reason it was funny, but eating so many might not be funny at all.

The part about pro vs con is awesome. I chuckled at this and am sure it is a true statement even if people do not pay attention or believe any of this stuff.

The suspense and mystery in the first part of your story dragged me into it and kept me reading and imagining the characters, and scenes, and wondering what kind of unusual agency this is and what they do that is so secretive.

Oh my, what a scene of rage and hate driving the killer's blade with mega force and rapid movements. I could feel the excitement, adrenalin rush, and fear as the two men battled with each other. It figures this killing would be over a wife or special someone.

All of this story is believable because it is as humans react to stimuli and as we live today in our environment. The characters act like humans and react in the usual ways to things they dislike, fear, or enjoy. The scenes are very easy to visualize along with the characters, and their actions. The conversations are realistic.

I look forward to reading more of your story. It is full of action and adventure that I find compelled to be a part of as you develop more content.

Thank you for writing and sharing this intriguing story with me and WdC members.

Please keep writing and don't disappear leaving this fantastic story hanging.

Write on!


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Review of Love  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
My first thought while reading the last four lines is Jesus and His love. All of my life I have had a wonderful relationship with His and He has never let me down.

I can understand why love is so challenging because there are many types, versions, and levels of love. If you are referring to romantic love I can relate this to your poem. Humans are changeable and so are emotions which you clearly show in your words and this goes both ways. You wrote clearly, showed the character well-love, and I found no distractions to take me away from your poetry.

...to call my your... [me?] last line

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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