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Review of Hero  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
You introduced me to Dagin Bar who I got to know through your words. He seems to be small yet mighty and someone to not trifle with meaning it's better to be his friend rather than his enemy. It was sad to learn his friends were gone and entombed. Loneliness was evoked through those words and I felt like it would be nice for him to have a friend.

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Review of Father's Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading you poetic words showed me the pain of a daughter as witnessed by her father who might have acted to resolve a particularly difficult situation. This could result in self-destruction. The scene is emotional and I visualized two characters In a serious struggle with traumatic events.

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Review of Chinese Couplets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading the simple, clear, and direct statements of your poem. The words gave me peace because of the protectiveness of banishing demons. The iddea of being prosperous gives me hope. The rhythm is smooth according to the way I read this poem.

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Review of Nothing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Depending on how a person reads your words different emotions are evoked. I could clearly see the scenes and throughout this story, I held onto hope, but looming large was the idea of "divided we fall" and this ate away at me in the background as your words penetrated my mind. God knows the end from the beginning. We humans have free will.

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Review of WOMEN'S ANTHEM  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your lyrics are a nice devotion to women. The story is clear and emotions express feelings and show strength. I imagined a huge march of different nations of women together in one accord. Sharing the joy of being and doing. This story in poetry form has a nice rhythm that kept me reading.

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Review of Rear View  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see eyes in the rearview mirror while reading your poetic story about the adrenaline rush of driving down a road. I could imagine the excitement and thrill of the activity while the feeling of dread loomed in the near background.

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Review of for the rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm grateful to God when He sends rain especially when it is very much needed. I could see the drops and hear the pitter-patter as I read your words.

To help potential readers find your poem you could add genres. Nature, Environment, Inspirational, or possibly Home/Garden.

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Review of Family Secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's interesting what a DNA test will reveal about someone's ancestry. I was very easily able to follow the events of your story because I'm familiar with LDS and researching family history.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Sam's ancestry with me and WdC members.

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Review of Family Secrets  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's interesting what a DNA test will reveal about someone's ancestry. I was very easily able to follow the events of your story because I'm familiar with LDS and researching family history.

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Review of Honey, Honey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The intensity of the rhythm of your poem according to how I read it and the choice of your words clearly showed me the everlasting love you have for the special person in your life. I could picture you taking great care of your wife.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I had to smile at the end of your story. Your characters are believable and act realistic. The scenes are easy to understand and imagine.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a life-changing event for Ethan and the woman who became his wife with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a strong and true statement in your Japanese Tanka poem. I believe you expressed the human condition and the fate of life on this only place humans live, Planet Earth. I don't need to imagine because I've witnessed the unrest but my mind still pictured a battle all over earth as I read your words.

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Review of Haiku [180.49]  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The pink flowers against the blue sky are calming and I understand why dinner will be served late. The words you chose for your Haiku poem make me feel like joining the person looking at the flowers.

I seem to remember Haihu has 5 lines, 7 lines, and 5 lines.

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Review of Malice Intended  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The innocent character got busted because of carelessness, well, well, well. The clues and characters kept me interested in reading your story. I suspected the person reading the newspaper might be involved but wasn't absolutely certain. Just before a tasty snack and leaving the place it seemed there was no reason for intrusion, but of course this enjoyable time had to be interrupted. The innocence of the story had me wondering where it was going to go until the end.

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Review of Hairpin Trigger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was easily able to imagine a sniper looking through the scope and exhaling as he placed his finger against the trigger. He squeezes and boom a projectile flies racing toward the target. The target falls, and life is gone. The sniper reloads. Your story evoked these images and thoughts because of the order and choice of your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your war word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Frying Bacon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Piglets in the kitchen was an interesting image in my mind as I read your story. Bacon is ok, but I am not a gotta-have-it kind of bacon eater. I might enjoy spending time with the piglets better. You pose a good question about exactly who is cooking the bacon.

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Review of No Title Yet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your no-title story shows me the despair and discouragement looming and clinking at times, and invading the depths of the mind trying to drag deeper the thought of hope so that hope no longer lives. But after the struggles, Hops is stronger, its life force continues, and the future is possible in a good way. I hope things are better.

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Review of Empty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story I thought about the visuals of the sky and beyond. These are clearly explained and vivid. I could imagine a long figure gazing into the beyond, hoping, and considering what to do. The Plot is well constructed and depicted. When I reached the end of your story I felt like this figure wondered about the past, present, and future. Also eternal life and decided to wait a bit longer.

, it's event horiz--did you mean even?

Thank you for writing and sharing your philosophical word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your lyrics show me a person who wants to live life fully but also doesn't want to deal with deception. I could see someone looking in searching for truth and wanting to be with this lifestyle and the people who enjoy it. I also could feel the longing for fellowship with God and people who fellowship together and enjoy what is in scripture.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way you explain your anchor because it shows permanence and not moving. You are connected to Jesus and God takes care of you is very heart-warming and I could see your anchor firmly stuck into the rock. I can tell through your words you have God's strength and wisdom and many other things of God.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art and fantastic story with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Very, very nicely written testimony to God, humanity, life, and challenges, and a new life after death moving from this earth to eternity. I enjoyed the rhythm because it was smooth and matter-of-fact in tone. The scenes are good visuals of the passage of life, the challenges, and finally coming to an end. The hope of eternal life is well mentioned.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story about life and eternal life with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Congratulations on your publishing success. I can imagine how wonderful and exciting it must have been for you when you got the news. This information is easy to read and understand.

I wonder if you would share how you felt about this success in this item, please.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I understand an F5 will relocate a house. Reading this was scary, a possible F5, and fortunately, everyone was ok. The way you told this story as I read it was as if we were face to face and you were telling it directly to me. I think when you wrote everything went back to normal that it actually was the new normal. Your descriptions of the events is clear and vivid. I could imagine the scenes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your tornado story word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
In my mind, I pictured a character drawn into a situation that was laughable by witnesses because he was pranked. I also saw the daughter at college. I witnessed the snarled traffic. These scenes are clearly shown through your words and the story kept me interested in reading.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I pictured the scene in my mind reasonably well. It is packed with descriptions and images, shows the events of rain, and is colorful. I'm not sure I've taken in the fullness of this story because you have injected much to think about and consider. It is like reading a fairy tale and a horror story at the same time. To me, the characters which seem to be people yet possibly another species are going through the motions and are not really living. I guess they are the living yet dead inside. The rain is a curious thing because of what it seems to be and beable to do as it hits the face of wherever these beings live.

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