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Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember a movie that featured huge spiders but remember not the title. I had no trouble visualizing the mirror and huge spider and the end when it devoured its meal. As long as spiders are not big enough to eat people I don't mind them but am cautious about dealing with venomous spiders. I like tarantulas.

Thank you for writing this horror story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
It does cost to be nice but it is a treasured investment because I find friends, am able to put smiles and faces, and my time is well used for the Glory of God. I follow Jesus' example to my best ability. My time invested gives me fantastic returns and I want to emulate Jesus as much as I can.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Learning to Cry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is sad when emotions are suffocated because of someone or an event. I could see the tears as I read your story and then it changed to a dry desert. The emotions were stolen. Toward the end tears again were able to flow. You showed me these events well and I was not distracted while reading your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the stolen tears eventually returning again with me and WdC members.


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Review of Broken  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is quite a contrast between then and now in reverse which I visualized as if looking in a mirror that changed from a child of old and in need of parenting and reassurance to a young woman who is assured and strong. The image seemed to waver and fluctuate in a weird way because of the description that is unusual but understood. I hope things are better for you now. I'm not implying what you describe is weird but this is the best way at the moment for me to try to explain what I got from your words. Your fears versus your assured emotions opposite of what usually happens gives me the idea that something very traumatic occurred. Please feel free to write whenever the need arises. I appreciate what you have gone through because I experienced a real-life horror story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art experiences with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine a battle of wills and emotions as the characters endeavored to be heard and understood. The ripping apart of cohesive family relations screamed and then slowly quieted. Still, there seemed to be a strength which nothing would put asunder. Family ties sometimes come loose but fortunately they seem to stay together most of the time. This is what ran through my head as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art in poem form with me and WdC me members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate the cars built from the beginning of engines moving people from place to place. They are art. I also appreciate the horse these creatures worked hard moving people from place to place. Cars have horse power which I believe is a tribute to the horse. Your poem is a very nice tribute to cars. I enjoyed reading your poem and visualizing different cars traveling beside the horses.

Thank you for writing and sharing your car word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Tell Em All Now  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I could fee the fierce and devoted intentions to spread truth and bring people to their right minds so they can decide which way they would go. If a person is hot for God or cold for God He can do something, but if that person is warm/on the fence He will spew them out of His mouth.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Ignited  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love is a curious emotion and can be intense especially when it is true and forever love. This is how your poem spoke to me as I read it. The words vividly show this deep love and the scenes are realistic. The characters behave normally. I can believe this because the sincerity exudes as I contemplate the arrangement and meaning of which you write.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members about true love.


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Review of Only I  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This seems to a version of the Blitz Poem structure. It is a fast moving poem as I read it. I felt like I was in a hurry, being twisted round about, stressed, and finally at the end relived to be able to take a breath. It reminded me of traveling a rough road and having a fast and fun adventure.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art fast moving poem with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your story I could see the scene with the two boys freaked out of their minds. They reacted in a believable manner and their reactions to each other are authentic. The scene is spooky and realistic such as this type of story should be for the readers. The plot can be expanded and the emotions of the characters shown if you decide to extend this story. I was kept in the story and didn't have any distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art of the spooky kind with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Devils Deal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Those ideas are very scary unless the rest of the story is known. I could feel hands reaching out drawing in someone who know not the truth of the matter. I could feel and see the heat licking at an unsuspecting person. For me this is very real, but I trust God and Jesus.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about one side of spiritual warfare with me and WdC members.


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Review of His Fate  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very sad story poem. It felt as if there was no hope and the hands of death were so close there was no escape. I realize there are different deaths scubas physical, spiritual, psychological, and also those that come during defeat in activities. I was not distracted by errors while reading your poem. Your words work well together.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt like I was joining in the fun with you as I imagined the scene, characters, and foolishness. Your words smoothly carried me from the beginning to ending of your poem and did not distract me. I could feel the emotions of joy, happiness, and love of life through your descriptions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Poems old and new  
for entry "April Fools' Day" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt as if you had introduced me to your Dad. I could see and feel the excitement of believing ice cream was cooking in the kitchen, but for me it seemed a bit weird. I'm an adult so didn't take the bate. As a child I probably have rushed downstairs too. Through your words the love exuded and wrapped around me as I followed your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your April fools prank from your Dad word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of April First  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is sad when children are disappointed because something advertised to do something doesn't and the child is disappointed. I enjoyed the part when your son pulled a April prank but you knew the milk was ok. I'm glad the sad emotions were wiped and uplifting emotions replaced them. I was able to imagine the story, characters, and feel the happiness and sadness in your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your family April word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Real Fool  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I saw in my imagination you with your parents and your Grand-parent as you witnessed them becoming April-fools. I know that until much later in life children do not understand why parents and other elders do what they do to make our lives happy and better. I saw the transcending from being a child and thinking like a child to adulthood, but as an adult you also considered the child thinking. It's nice to visualize you making children happy by pretending to be foolish. I agree it's sad when you can not give an answer to a child. All the stanzas were bolded, was this on purpose?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being a fool with me and WdC members.


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Review of It's Wise to Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words seamlessly showed many emotions as you told me about your family, Bruhni, and your love for everyone. I could see in my mind many different times when everyone was together enjoying life, love, and a wonder family time together. I was carried smoothly and effectively from the beginning of your poem to the ending. There were no distraction to take me from viewing in my imagination the events you described.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Hypocrites  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Absolutely I could dwell your anger overflowing as I read your words. I don't know what your job was but it seems that you'd be better off in a new and better job. Yes, I know about the lies and deceptions, but sadly some people do not have a clue, so I hope your story is read by many and they understand the truth. You explained the problem, but I hope you write more about this to educate people about corporate judgements and other issues.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art story about your struggles with corporations and losing your job with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
A friend indeed is a friend that can be trusted to do what is right. This is what incurred to me after reading this quote. I hope more people will read this quote and be encouraged by it.

Thank you for writing and sharing your quote word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I very much enjoyed your story because you introduced me to characters who acted normally during trying situations. The scenes are realistic and I could imagine the characters acting well and doing the natural things required. The conversations are natural and as if the characters were talking to me. The story plot is believable and easy to imagine. I didn't find any major issues with the manuscript. I believe there are a few typos, but read past them quickly because I wanted to know what happened next.

Thank you for writing and sharing your war story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of WORDS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You encouraged people to be nice and considerate toward each other in your words which I applaud you for doing this kindness. I hope you are treated well in any relationships you have and that you show the meanings of what you wrote here by your actions so people learn how to better relate to each other. Your article is easy to read and understand. I had no distractions as I read your encouraging words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your encouraging word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Wedding in White  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your very dramatic story made me feel like I had been hit by a recking ball because I could feel the heartbreak when the true love was seen at the wedding for both parties involved. The bride as the shock hit her and dismay and grief fell upon her. The groom as he realized the significance of his brides reactions. The gathered family and guests as they witnessed these events and they were moved with disbelief. I was not distracted while reading your story. Your words guided me smoothly from the beginning to ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wedding story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Too Late  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
[the laughed] they laughed

This story of family relations is realistic because sometimes families or some members tend to want the inheritance without having any concern for the family members. Your story about a last-minute effort to get this inheritance shows characters at their best or worst depending on the point of view. I really enjoyed the ending because neither party got what they thought they would. The Uncle and Aunt thought they had thwarted
Sam Adams and his wife Maria Lee just before they died, but i suspect the lockbox would eventually be opened with great effort.
Sam Adams and his wife Maria Lee probably figure there is a lot of valuable stuff in the box, but my guess is they will be disappointed.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the lockbox with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hmm, your poem is a challenge and requires of me several readings, but I think I got it. The person is enjoying Turkish coffee and someone is talking to them, is this the scene? Or, The person is Turkish? I could visualize someone drinking coffee while another person was talking with them.

Thank you for writing and sharing your coffee poem sword art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
When I finished reading your words I felt like you were inviting me to join with you and simply know we were not alone in this world. One aspect of "Are you okay?" is sometimes people ask and do not intend to know the answer to this question for whatever reason. Sometimes people feel they can not give a detailed and truthful answer to this question. I take things at face value if someone asks or I ask either way I want to know or share. I hope people read this and take advantage of these wise words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members. "Are you okay?" I may not respond in a timely manner for various reasons but I will reply.


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