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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I can easily relate to taking a long time to get to sleep because eyes don't close but for me it's my brain won't shut up and stop working on ideas. Your poem expressed the challenges of being retired in an amusing way, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being retired and maybe tired with me and WdC members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
WOW! What a spiritually uplifting story. My heart felt glad for the achievements of the people in your story. It is wonderful when God has a plan and the person has a strong faith. You clearly and concisely presented wonderful people, a great lifestyle, and a glorious outcome.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this wordy adventure with you because the words beaconed me to keep reading and imagining them dancing about creating phrases, sentences, and word pictures of all sorts.

Thank you for writing and sharing you love of words and writing with me and WdC members

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is a nice twist because it reminds me of games and challenges shown on TV. Gala is an interesting character because s/he seems to have a huge sense of adventure and curiosity. Boredom doesn't fit into my lifestyle so I have not exactly understood how boredom works.

Thank you for writing and sharing your alien word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the stress of the job and see the detective struggling to deal with the crimes to be solved as muscles were tense and nerves jangled. Later at the Front Porch, I imagined the stress slipping away as nerves rested and muscles relaxed. The characters and scenes are realistic and the story is plausible.

Thank you for writing and sharing your detective word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Comedy With Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the laughter. Jokes can be uplifting and fun to read. It's been a while since I spent time reading jokes. Many thanks for posting them. Laughter is good medicine and you saved me from spending money at the doctor's office.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art jokes with me and WdC members

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Review of In Mongolia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The picture is colorful and shows merriment. I can imagine this laughter being contagious and rippling throughout the region causing other beings to laugh and enjoy life. In my mind, I can hear laughter and see a crowd of people enjoying a gathering. This story put a smile on my face. Many thanks for this smile.

Thank you for writing and sharing your laughter word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Random stuff  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know I dream, but when I fully wake I do not remember them. I imagined someone asleep and dreaming while reading your story. It felt as if I were part of the dream. You created a story that mimics a dream state that is realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your dream story word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for taking me with you on your trip. I felt like I got to know everyone. Certainly, Buddy added interest to this adventure. I have dogs and enjoy spending time with them, so Buddy fits right in and I imagined giving him pettings and watching him look around.

Thank you for writing and sharing your trip word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
We just had a thunderstorm a short while ago and while reading your poem I could hear in my head the thunder and pounding rain. I could imagine the earth soaking up the rain and becoming a huge sponge.

Thank you for writing and sharing your thunderstor word art with me and WdC members

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Review of NbHD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Clearly, this was quite an adventure of faith and endurance during trying times. The scene, characters, and plot kept me reading and wanting to know what happened next. I was focused on this adventure to freedom and hoped everything would work out ok. The storm of enslavers and the sand storm made me feel like running away. I was relieved when the family got to safety.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wiord art about faith and belief with me and SWdC members

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Review of Self portrait  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to understand the scene and ideas about hoe to get the most out of life. You clearly expressed how you see life and respond to it each day.

Genres help potential readers find your word art. Some genres what might fit your poetic story are: spiritual, nature, educational, personal, environment, or home/garden.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about life with me and WdC members

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Review of "THY WILL"  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your prayer is very uplifting and encouraging. I smiled after reading your thoughtful words. I could feel your hope and trustfulness. I'm glad I found your prayer through random reviewing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your prayerful word art with me and WdC members

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Review of A story to tell  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can understand your poetic story that shows challenges in perspective and encourages hope and continuing to figure out how best to enjoy a life journey. Telling stories is important and can help people. I'm glad you mentioned this in your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your encouraging word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to what you explained about ignoring things because I have tinnitus and although I'm aware of these sounds, I ignore them and usually have no bothersome situations. Also when I'm asleep I am unaware of what is happening. Probably a sonic boom wouldn't wake me. I can imagine all kinds of noises not distracting you from your activities because you clearly explained your situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about noises with me and WdC members

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Review of Tanka Rhyme  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem and checked the accuracy according to the rules. I can understand why you decided to not work on it any more but it is a nice poem so I'm glad you kept it in your portfolio. I hope you are successful when you write another tanka poem. The rhythm is smooth and easy to follow.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poetry with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It's great that you shared you favorite romantic songs and then asked questions of whoever reads your song list. Right at the moment I can not think of any song titles to share with you. I do vaguely recall a song about "in the morning when we rise" but the singer and title allude me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your song list word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Why  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed hope to me in your poetic story when writing about never being apart in the after life. I could feel the yearning, loneliness, and love you express for the person who is not longer in your life.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the special person you miss with me and WdC members

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Review of The Quest  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm of your words and felt like I was sailing smooth seas of imagery as you showed me the characters and events of your poetic story. I could feel the heartbreak and see the tears falling when it was discovered another ghostly suites had captured her heart.

Thank you for writing about love found and lost and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Childhood fears  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine the fear and see a shark fin in my imagination. Also in my minds eye I saw two brothers enjoying their time together while surfing. Your story is understandable and conveys the emotions well.

Thank you for writing and sharing your shark word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of On The Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw the gathering in my mind's eye and heard many voices raised protesting injustice. You showed me unity and a common ground protest that was chanting for justice for which I cheered on those who gathered for what was right. It is written that we should treat others as we want to be treated and you made this clear in your poetic story.

Thank you for writing about the need for justice and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of On The Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem I saw letters shaping into words and words lining up to create sentences, and eventually, paragraphs became visible. I know what you mean about ideas and creativity spurring a writer to create poetry and stories because I have had similar experiences and because you express your writing experiences clearly.

Thank you for writing about writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of I And You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the love and sincere respect you have for this special person whom you cherish and will hold in your mind and soul. I hope this loss of physical being has lessened or changed in a way that allows you to enjoy life and continue a spiritual living and thriving legacy for both of you.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about this special person with me and WdC members

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I saw through your words the changing in the seasons as you described summer moving into fall. The fall colors illuminated the scene and I could feel the coolness moving in as my imagination took in your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the changing of summer to fall with me and WdC members

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Review of Tribute  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your poetic words spoke to me because I live close to Oklahoma, I'm in Arkansas, and because I could see in my mind's eye and feel the emotions of love and respect you have for your father. The clarity of the scenes and characters made your story come alive for me and I felt like I was with you and your family.

Thank you for writing about your father and family and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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