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Review of The Battle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem I followed you from body part to body part and saw the events clearly because of the words you chose to use to show your story. I could hear the fighting between the mind and heart as the tug of war was fought. Entering the lungs things became quiet as you focused on your breathing. When you relaxed and became calm I also felt these emotions. I'm glad the battle is over.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me about your triumph with me and WdC members.

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Review of The Dark...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
All the mannequins throughout the store and one with a shredded outfit were good visuals from your carefully chosen words. I could imagine a clothing store with night activities and then during the day everything quiet and still. The rhythm of your poem kept me reading because it was a bit different from many I've read before, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to change and updating dreams because when worldly things dramatically change like it or not personal things are almost required to change at least in these recent times. I watched dreams fade, progress at a slower pace, seniors neglected and overlooked, and saw a person who longed for the good ole days as I read your poem story. I also in my imagination saw history changed and generations aimlessly looking about and there was no history to attract their attention.

Thank you for writing about the past and future dreams and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of Starting Stories  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Your contest page is simple in a good way, easy to understand, and has the basic information needed. I wonder if in the future you would be interested in receiving donations so that you can offer more prizes for the contest entrants? In many contest rules about bitem information, the code is shown so that people who do not know how to use bitem can enter the contests. Or, you can refer people to the writing.com tools and then to Docs and Help. Other possibilities would be using text color and bolding the text for special or important information. Highlighting as needed can also help visitors to your contest find what they seek.

I hope your contest is a super success.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art, creating this contest, and sharing it with me and WdC members.
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Review of SENRYU 0005  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the footprints because they match this poem's story nicely. I can imagine a person and dog enjoying their time together while traveling. This time can be slow and relaxing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about time and pacing with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem it was like having you sitting with me sharing these words in a matter of fact way with concern and friendship. You gave my heart an uplifting experience while my spirit soared in delight for your honor to God.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Reflections  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A new to me poetry form that seemed to need to be read more quickly than usual because of its construction and the word flow. Although it had quickness I did not feel rushed but felt like it was a relaxed swift journey from word to word.

Thank you for writing and sharing this new to me poetry form and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of Elliot and Unda  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the giggle as I read your poem, thanks. The rhythm and ending words kept me interested in following the plot of your poem story. I felt as if the scenes and characters were embracing me and I was in the midst of everything.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story with me and WdC members

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Review of Converse Voyeur  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This seems to be a very, very secretive and scary situation especially when she might not be aware of someone who probably has designs to do possible harm. I was able to imagine the characters in this scene. It felt like a horror situation in the making.

Thank you for writing this poem and sharing your word art with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I pictured you and the other people gathered together. I'm glad you grouped together because people are social beings and need each other to manage to get through the days. I felt like you were face to face with me telling me this story. Another thought that your story evoked was that there are many ways to be homeless. I hope things have become better for everyone in your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being homeless with me and WdC members

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I was able to imagine the scene and the characters which is realistic of a magic/psychic show. Apparently, someone was murdered by a famous person, but leaving out the reaction of everyone and what this information would reveal left me feeling and wondering exactly where this story could start and end as a longer story. I know you are limited by the word count, but still, I'd like to know. Please let me know if you write a longer version of this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your mystery with me and WdC members

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Review of Save on Disk!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Computers can be fickle which your poem story shows in the plot. I was able to easily picture someone striding to the computer, turning it on, and discovering everything did not appear as expected. I felt the drop of excitement and rise of dread as still seconds later nothing changed. The scene reminds me of someone hacking into a computer and releasing a throgan or something. The other thought is it crashed and died because of old age. At least it can be used as a paperweight or boat anchor depending on the size and age of the machine.

Thank you for writing and sharing your computer story word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
And it's been said that weed is a gateway drug, what was Sam Adams thinking? I guess he was too drunk to know what he was doing. I saw Sam and the scene in my imagination and felt as if I were trying to get him safely away from the carnage of drinking and drug use.

Thank you for writing and sharing your Sam Adams word art with me and WdC members

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Review of There  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed me a true friend that I got to know through your words. I could see and feel the friendship in the scenes and the picture caused me to see hearts floating about your friendship as two people spent time together.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a special friendship with me and WdC members.

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Review of Mermaid Thrift  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read the ending of your story in my imagination I heard the shopping cart wheel squeaking. Robots and a baby shopping adventure are an interesting mix especially because the parents to be reminded me of my feelings toward AI and ROBOTS. The scene is easy to visualize. The characters realistic and shown in words that created a clear picture, and the store seemed to fit well also.

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Review of The Call  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hour emotions emanate through your words. I could feel the restlessness, despair, frustration, and others. I respect your decision to not get into religion. My comfort is with God, so hang on because this is the viewpoint from which I write. You love writing and it loves you back at least it seems that way according to my understanding of your words. Have you considered freelance writing? Please consider, what are you passionate about? Your passion can be your job or what you can write about. Your words spoke to me. Your words showed me the scenes. Your words conveyed emotions and emotions get the reader's attention.

You kept me in your story. You and your story can be helpful to many people. Perhaps you could be a motivational writer/speaker and give the gift of inspiration, and encouragement, and share different things from your life with people that would be helpful.

You got my attention and gave me food for thought. I'm glad to know you through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of standing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that doing nothing about a situation allows the wrongs of this world to prosper. I also agree with acting as God intended us to act. Appathy is like a cancer eating away at human rights, but with rights come responsibilities.

Using punctuation and showing where one thought starts and then stope helps the reader understand the meaning of what you wrote. It also makes reading easier and more enjoyable. You have shared great ideas and how you cope.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
I hope the funeral was well attended. So sorry the coffee machine did its self in and you were denied coffee especially after a night of craziness that resulted in having a morning migraine. I noticed you did not bold the words in the prompt. I was able to follow the storyline and visualize the action.

Thank you for sharing your adventure and your word art with me and WdC members

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Review of ROAD TRIP  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You painted a very colorful picture of your adventure with your word pallet. I got to know your family and enjoy a favorite trip through the beautiful country side as you headed to the cabin. I'm glad you had many of these wonderful family trips. I felt as if I was enjoying the journey with you and your family.

Thank you for writing about your family trips and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You warmed and uplifted my heart and spirit as I read your words. Yo make your wonderful words easier for readers to read using punctuation will be a blessing to them. You probably wanted to get the words written as your thoughts quickly brought the right words to you. I appreciate blessings and receiving them is awesome, but giving theming is them is a wonderful and fantastic opportunity that blessed me too.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about blessings and God with me and WdC member

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You have a very nice plot with a fun and interesting ending because I was easily able to picture the gunman, the flag popping from the gun, and Betty trembling and thinking she was going to die. I'm glad this had an ending with everyone ok. Probably someone did this for a joke because it is realistic. The characters, scene, and plot are believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the April Fool joke with me and WdC members.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I've been talking with God and I asked him to keep everyone safe and to reduce the fury of the storms. I also am concerned but have hope. I could feel your anguish and dispart through your words. I also visualized a storm approaching. In scripture it is written that we will have more storm with greater severity. I believe mankind has a lot to do with the weather changes these days. Humans are dabbling in things that are not for humans to mess with, but sadly some people think they know what they're doing. I hope your family and friends are ok.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about how you are responding to the threat of these storms and sharing you word art with me and WdC members.

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Review of All I Wanted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The ending was a noise I heard loud and clear. I hope your friend is doing ok. Sadly you wrote about the misunderstanding we humans tend to have because our communications are either not as clear as they should be or the person receiving them reads more into them than was intended. I could feel the turmoil and sadness of these words.

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Review of Falling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The fall is harmless but the sudden stop is a killer depending on how high this fall begins. I can imagine the swish of air and fast-moving things as in my imagination I fall endlessly. For some people, this is a thrill. The idea of watching the trees losing their leaves and renewing their growth is like watching a renewal of life so in this case a continual falling experience can be good.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about falling with me and WdC members.

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Review of The Beginning  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You created a story that had me wondering who was concerned about danger. This kept me reading. I was able to imagine a character climbing something to see what danger was nearby. My first thought was that that character would climb a tree. The strong wind I imagined being a twister. I didn't expect the characters in your story to be rabbits.

Thank you for writing and sharing your rabbit word art with me and WdC members.

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