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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The idea of an unknown friend in the time of need gifting a home to a stranger is an awesome story be it real or a fictional plot of fiction based on fact. The beginning, middle, and ending, especially the ending kept me reading because this story held my interest and focus on the who, what, why part of my curiosity. everything about this story is believable because it is based on what people would do and hoe they would possibly react in such a situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a home gift by a stranger with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I wonder what it looked like as she explored the castle. Did she creep, tremble, move haltingly, or something else? How did she feel, nervous creating shaking hands, a squeamish stomach, nausea and acid mixing about, or something else? Was her mind racing and thinking possible scary thoughts or other ideas?

What else was happening to the characters in this story? Internal and external responses or thoughts?

The characters are believable, the scene is easy to imagine, and the plot has potential.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Family and friends are important. Jesus show this and much more to us when He walked the Earth. In your words I could see the situations. I understand what you are writing about according to my knowledge, experience, and what I can relate to that you have written. Much of what you wrote is in my opinion very true and I hope we can return to nature and a simple way of life with less emphasis on technology and more on caring for each other rather than fighting with each other.

Thank you for writing about humanity and refocusing on what is important and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of " THE LORD ''  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way you wrote about who God is and showed His glory. It is easy to read your words and find peace within them. I could feel your strong foundation which is steadfast. I'm glad you have a good relationship with God.

Thank you for writing about God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a nice article which people who know little about this information can understand. Placing resources with your article piques my interest in reading more about Quantum Entanglement. I was not distracted by errors and enjoyed your writing style.

Thank you for introducing me to this subject ajd sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This tail wagging tale has a good spin on puzzles, marriage, and customs, along with dreadful consequences. I agree that TV is ok, but often too much eats up valuable time and can in some cases be deadly if the necessities are not properly taken care of. I could imagine the unbearable high pitch and agonizing pain of the wrath of a spouse who felt neglected.

Thank you for writing this story of TV and a wife who is angry at the neglect cat of Hubby and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
You wrote a nice screenplay-style manuscript. The scene, characters, plot, and verbiage are believable because the characters talk naturally and act naturally, the scene is easy to visualize because it is a typical coffee shop or so it seems, and the ending is a nice twist that pulls everything together and is a surprise.

Thank you for writing this unique story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

There are a few typos.


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Review of The Sounds  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I could see and hear the storm as it moved nature to and fro. The rhythm of your poem for me is a bit bumpy but it may be the way I read your words. Of course, it could be because of the storm in your poem story. The ending I did not see coming. I'm not sure I understand the meaning. Is it the screams of the storm or something else?

Thank you for writing and sharing your storm poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of For Pringles =)  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words caused me to think of drugs, alcohol, or something addictive that often kills. Another thought is the possibility of tasting figuratively some spiritual essence. There were no distractions to interrupt my reading and I could imagine the magnetism of indulging while realizing this activity could be fatal.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Only to Herself  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw quite a mess, an angry mom, and two children wondering what happened. As I read your story I suspected a dog at first, then when the mouse was revealed I could imagine a cat hunting and sure enough it was the cat chasing the mouse that caused all of the damage and mess. You wrote an interesting mystery and your words kept me interested in reading your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the cat and mouse with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Your information about the group is clear, inspiring, and inviting. I would like someday to apply but realize I have work to do before giving this opportunity a try. I'm glad to know more about this group because I can share with people who are interested in what I've learned.

Thank you for writing and sharing this information with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Clown  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I can relate because when I was attending public school, I was called all kinds of names such as one-eyed Cyclops for example. Spitballs were thrown at me and also rubber bands, but I was protected by God and His wisdom given to me. I did not respond. The more I ignored them the madder they got and eventually, they stopped, I won.

I could see the scene and feel the emotions as I read your story. I'm glad you wrote this poem because it will help people.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about not bullying.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The storms can often have with then tornados, especially in tornado ally. I'm close to Oklahoma. I was thinking about the movie Twister as I read your word art. In my mind, I could see everyone and the events. The lightning and thunder followed by the rainbow were vivid images for me. This also reminded me of the time a tree was hit by lightning very close to my house many years ago.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your family and storm experiences with me and WdC members.


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Review of Trail Blazer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A faceplant in the snow is better than on other surfaces, but ouch! I could see the scene in living color as the ski adventure unfolded. Once I was able to ski and it was fun. Sit skiing might have been a better option. I was not distracted by errors as I read your story. The presentation kept me involved and interested.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of She who serves  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could imagine Lisa working and going everywhere keeping things on track and fixing problems. She seems busy and dedicated to her work. A possible issue is that some people are not aware of what she does. I hope she gets the recognition she deserves.

Thank you for honoring Lisa in your poem and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with your poem's story because of the warmth, light, and feel-good effects of the sun. I could imagine you sitting by a window and writing this poem. Your poem is inviting, and vivid, and shows how healthy and calming the sun is for us.

Thank you for writing about the sun and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Mutt Gus  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Through your word art I got to know Gus, see his antics, and enjoy the scene. The rhythm and flow of words work well. I was able to easily read and understand the story. It was humorous and caused me to grin. I like dogs and henceforth give Gus a virtual pat.

Thank you for sharing with me and WdC members your story about Gus.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad I found this poem about spiders because I like arachnids. I thought about tarantulas as I read your poem, then daddy long legs, and other spiders. The rhythm is nice and your words tell a wonderful story of birth and nature bringing forth life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about arachnids with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your words the scene, sipping, coffee, and remembering seemed to be calming. I felt like I was there watching the activities. I could feel the longing for these memories. Your words kept me interested as they carried me through your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about memories and the past with me and WdC members.


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Review of Unhealthy  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the anguish, frustration, fear, despair, and being trapped within your words. The questions and longing for answers to resolve the situation are evident. Living in a world of horror which is the word that came to me can be deadly I understand. I'm glad you survived to write about this experience.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your challenging relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of the end that is.  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You wrote an interesting story about Cloud because clouds usually do not break into places. The story is believable because the characters act as humans act, emotionally and by their actions. The conflict between the partners is something I'd like to know more about as well as the entire story.

There are a few typos which distracted me from the story.

Thank you for writing about Cloud and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine you and your beloved singing together. Your words showed much love for one another. I could feel the loneliness and sadness because you could no longer sing with your special person.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I pondered about a person flipping. My thoughts are the person could flip with amazement at what they finally realize what God can do or they can flip by turning about and coming to God. I prefer the turning to God part. The searching and seeking God as you wrote surely can make a positive difference. I felt light-hearted and uplifted as I read your poem. The words took me through the story smoothly and calmly. I could feel the excitement of the adventure, seeking, and learning. I hope this helps many people.
Thank you for writing and sharing your spiritual poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Responsible  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was able to follow the events of the wagon train as you described the action. I saw everything clearly in my mind and felt the adrenaline as things went differently than expected. The way you presented being the leader and then posed another situation brought home to me as I have known but more clearly and forcefully, the focus on being responsible and acknowledging that responsibility is extremely important.

Thank you for writing about the wagon train and responsibility and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Teal Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A special person who has teal eyes seems to be magnetic and inviting you to join them, but this may only be a dream until morning awakens reality. Eventually, these memories fade and love is no longer causing agony. I could imagine a dream state and teal eyes floating within a non-distinct human-like image.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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