The injustice system as it is, and it is because often those who can not afford proper defense lawyers, you know the lawyers who make the big, bug bucks, more often than not get the worst end of the justice system. Justice for all is dependent on who has verses who has not. When you are able read Dead Man Walking.
I felt as if you were telling me about a special friendship. Also your poem covered all friendship as it should be. The rhythm as I read your poetic story was smooth and upbeat. I agree friendship is very, very special and should be nurtured.
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This is an eerie story that I can envision as the things in life that have pluck at you since childhood. Fuel for your body either is inadequate or minimal. Your spirit strives and desires to keep going yet your physical self is ebbing away. I can only imagine the helplessness of your situation.
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I see in the bird many people who have been hurt and carry this heavy burden. I hope the bird recovers and flies again. This hope I have also for the people struggling and trying to heal.
Thank you for your word art about the injured bird with me and WdC members.
I thought of the human condition after reading your poem. Some humans can be lofty while others can be humble. Some humans cane determined to reach their goals, while others set holes too high and miss their goals, or are unable to reach their goals.
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Reading your poem was like listening to an angelic choir singing. I felt peaceful and thankful for all God has done. I am glad you wrote this poem honoring God and all He has dome.
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I remember seeing a video a while ago about grocery stores going out of business in a neighborhood and a new grocery store not legally allowed to take the place of the store that no longer existed. I'm sorry the cat suffered and died. I'm sorry your family suffered and struggled. While reading your story I heard the loud rumble of hunger, felt the isolation, and wondered what situation prevented help for your family. I hope everyone survived and eventually thrived.
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The night as I first considered it reminds me of death especially when peace was used because many people associate death with having peace. The scene, character-night, and the plot are easy to imagine and are believable.
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Toshi your main character should have a character profile so you the writer can get to know Toshi very well. The more you know your character the easier it is for readers to get to know and care about this character even if the character is one of the bad guys. Take the time to ask Toshi questions and wait for the answers. This will start your imagination working on creating Toshi.
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while reading your story I felt like I was there observing. The characters are believable and easy to imagine face to face or side by side conversing. The scene felt different from aa typical earthly place because I sensed it had a different energy. Your story encourages people to do kindness, helpful activities for each other.
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In your Teddy story you showed how to work out differences in a calm friendly manner. I enjoyed reading about this especially because the political involved folks and anyone who has a short fuse needs to know bout this and learn from it. It is a pleasant relief from the tensions and disagreements chaotically roaming everywhere.
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Your story has a twist that I didn't see coming. I knew from the clues something was amiss, but certainly suspect tis so called husband was someone who's mind was not in reality. I thought perhaps this husband was mistaking a situation or the stranger was not a lover but maybe a school friend from years ago.
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This story seems to be about love against regulations, but allowed only just so far. My imagination created an illicit love affair. I also thought of perhaps something a person falls in love with that could be addictive. I know sometimes love can become an addiction because I know someone who knows someone who has this challenging situation.
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Your description caused a chuckle to escape from me. You are right and I can relate. I could hear the cacophony of a concert that sounded like a tuning session with everyone for themselves trying to out do each other. The sight of clean apparel now decorated with bits of the buffet offerings loomed before my eyes. Mouths stuffed and working furiously changing the delightful tasty morsels into mush gave me the feeling of being stuffed to overflowing.
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Your poetic story made me feel the emptiness of the diary pages left blank, the sadness of the loss of human life as well as life that was taken from nature and playful hope for those left to deal with such a devastation.
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Ok, now I'm considering having salad tomorrow and my mouth is watering. While reading your poem I saw my idea of a wonderful and fantastic salad. I can imagine adding to this my idea of a meal fit for mouth watering adventures through a meal. I appreciate the reminder of what salad fixings go through. Also I thought about what people go through because sometimes we can feel like we've been made into salad.
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I saw through your words wife waiting and husband traveling for home, but also his concern and hers because he is late. In my opinion there is no fault for falling i love, love happens. I can imagine the uncertainty of traveling through time zones especially when he is late because of the Time-space Continuum.
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In the scene of things and life we don't know many events in the future but this possibly is for our protection against what the future should be. I can see how people wouldn't know some things. Sometimes not knowing means we don't pose the question. I considered these thoughts as I read your poem story.
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In your poetic story you showed me the trials and triumphs of life. I felt through your words hope. I saw rising sun and rising son. I'm hopeful things will improve for the better.
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I hope things get better for you. One thing I appreciate is you don't sugar coat and you have a sit down and tell me what's happening approach to your daily events. Dear God, you know the situation. Please help change this situation for the better in Jesus' name, amen.
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While reading your story it felt like God was giving me a huge hug. One consideration is in scripture it is said and I'm not quoting, you have not because you ask not. I believe in God and I believe in you because God loves you and will guide you.
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Oh my! And, I happen to like lizards. I enjoyed your poetry rhythm because it carried me smoothly from scene to scene. I was in the story with no distractions. I saw the characters, action, and heard the chilling sounds in my mind.
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Your poem showed me a wonderful, loving child who has a sense of adventure. I can imagine the joy when you realized she would thrive. I also am aware of the heart ache when there are medical challenges because I was born pre mature and no matter what I said or did she felt guilty because of my limited vision.
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If this tea has a smokey aroma and taste your title works well. I am not familiar with this tea. Your poem has me curious and I hope to research the tea provided I remember its name. I could see you enjoying your tea and this made my mouth water.
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I hoped that Christmas would be happy. I'm glad someone or several someones donated to make Christmas Day happy and bright. I felt the despair, the concern, and helplessness, I also saw the scene and believed that your hope would be rewarded.
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