Very well said. My rule of thumb is "It's not so important WHO says WHAT, but rather WHAT is being SAID." It may sound confusing at first, but once you reread it a few times, It starts to make some sense. I base my writing on this as a way of trying to do good when I write, but after seeing what is here on this site, my stuff seems almost too embarrassing to display here, so I save myself that embarrassment, and stick to reading and reviewing. Thak you for sharing this. wrdz
The last stanza, second line has no connection for me. The last stanza has you saying "Believe in yourself and follow your own destiny.
(This is where I get lost)
Make sure not to let the ones you care about so deeply.
(What about the ones you care so deeply?)
Drop the ones who fake completely."
It seems to be a good piece overall, but I just can't seem to get past that one incomplete line. Maybe it's just me (?). Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
I believe dreams are inspired of God not mans' thoughts. God's inspirations are very real (as you say "reality beyond conception"). A rather deep piece of writing. Not bad. Keep it up. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
A way to find out answers to questions you are not sure about. Sounds like a lack of communication, or an insecurity of some kind. You at least deserve answers. Thank you for sharing a nicely done piece. wrdz
A loss can never be felt unless you are personally involved. If you have never been in that position, you can never express the wrdz needed to be expressed. You can not know the agony and frustration one has to endure because of a loss. The closer one is to those who are lost, the more intense the feeling of that loss. May I simply say "I'm sorry for your loss." God will find a way to fill the void you now feel (when the time is right).
So very true. I found a few errors in spelling and some capitalizations that were missed. ANY reference to God is capitalized (He, Him, His, Son, I'm sure you have been writing long enough to know these things, but they are easily overlooked). You might want to edit this piece. It is too good a piece not to. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Sounds like the natural order of life. (Regardless what type of being it is, it is still life, and having that idea in mind, it is to be respected as such.) We pay our respects to the variety of life. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
There were a couple of places where you neglected to capitalize the "H" on He making reference to God. Any reference to God is always capitalized. I really like this piece. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
But eventually, you will let go of those things and begin to move upward and onward. You have to, or you will find yourself in an unfamiliar time. One that has no begining, and no ending. I hope you will chose to let go. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
A very nicely written tribute. Another good person (although he doesn't sing) is John "The Duke" Wayne. I happen to live in the town where he was born (Winterset, Iowa). There are other good inspirations like these two,but that would be another whole poem. Thank you for sharing this piece. wrdz
Good job. Well written. Children have a different way of looking at things that gives them a special advantage to making new friends. We as grown ups seem to forget, and "lose" that advantage. I say "lose" because we will always have it, but we forget how to use it. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
The saying about "Time flys when your having fun." takes on a whole new perspective after reading this piece. You have given a reminder that there IS another meaning to that phrase. Thank you for that. And, thank you for sharing this wrdz
Quite an imagination. Very well done. We all have need to sit and let our imagination go active.If it were not for having an imagination, we might end up putting footprints on the ceiling. We especially need to be able to have the romantic aspect included in our imagination, for without the romance, there might not be any thing to spark us into being curious about what romance is. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Whoever thought up the rules for the english language, nedds firstly, to be shot. Thank you for your "modernization of the english language". We nedded that! Thank you for sharing this. We need some lightening of the pressures of being grammerically correct. wrdz
It will take a long time to complete the circling of eternity. I doubt there will ever be an end to this "trip" around it. Gets me to trying to imagine doing such a "trip". Even though I never will be able to imagine it being completed. Good writing. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
Cute. You will be growing into you whether you are in your room, or anywhere else in this world. And you know what? God will be right there with you all the way. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz
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