It is nice and neat how you put many stories together in different tasks. Very ingenious of you. I had never thought of doing that. Great idea on your part. Keep writing!
Pretty cool and way out story! I feel that you really dived into your soul and pulled out a very interesting story! You made the little toys come alive right before my eyes and ears. I couldn't had thought of something like this. Your imagination soars above the rest! Keep up the good work!
Wow, great story. It is very imaginative and dark. I like how you used children as a part of the story. Most people use adults or ghosts in a dark or horror story. But you did pretty much the opposite and used children as the subject for suffering. Quite ingenious on your part; I must say so myself!
Pretty cool and sad story, but really enjoyed it. It was short and straight to the point; how I like them. I like how you used red and viscid substance as a metaphor for blood and how you let us know in the end that he was dead. Keep up the good work!
Pretty cool poem. Ya know, it really makes you think about how a detective may feel when he is viewing a body and wanting so badly to figure out who or what may have killed the victim. I really never thought of a poem based on a victim and the detective who was trying to figure out her killer, but now I have. I actually thought that all poems had to rhyme; I see that they don't. That is what I really liked about this poem. You made me see that a poem can still be a poem and not rhyme. Great way to use your words here. I loved this poem! Hope I was not too redundant? Keep up the good work!
Oh wow, the poem is a strong one. I often ask myself, "what is love?" Most don't know; most have never, ever felt its strength. So kudos to you for this very emotional and yet powerful poem! Keep up the good work. I am sure that you shall find love, someday.
Aww, man! Why did you leave me in such suspense? I really enjoyed this story. I enjoyed how you were able to grab me with your words and keep me reading, wanting to read more and more. I really would love to know what happens next. Great job, keep it up! Oh, and yeah, it really did create suspense. Fantastic!!!
This sample really advertises what the short stories entail. The writer uses words that encourages the viewers to want to read the books online. I, myself, just love horror, thriller, and etc. stories and movies. I can't imagine how hard it may be to just right a sample. If I had to, I probably wouldn't be able to do it. I would probably go on, and on and on. Just alone, I wanted to read more of this sample. Great job!
Yes, yes it does solve the mystery of a hyperbole! I now understand what a hyperbole really is; I love it! This poem was energetic, fun and playful. Now this is just my feelings and opinions, but this poem is perfect indeed. I didn't see not one mistake, not a word out of place and everything fitted perfectly. You used more than one hyperbole and that was excellent because it shows the viewers what a hyperbole is and how to use it. Thank you so much for writing this poem. I have fallen madly in love with it. Keep up the good, no wait, the great work that you are doing. Once again, thank you!
Man oh man, I wish that I could write a poem like this. A bit too long for me, but awesome in its own right. I have a vet friend who has been diagnosed with PTSD and she has her good moments and her bad moments. I just really try to be there for her. I hope that you are coping with yours as well as you can. This poem is a great tribute to all who have PTSD, not just for the ones who went into the military. Thank you. You are heaven sent. Keep up the good work!
Very nice, indeed! When I read this poem, I felt so calm and serene. It made me feel as if I were in a valley of bloomed red roses; as if I were actually near an ice-capped mountain that was waiting for me to claim it as my own! Keep up the good work!
Aww, man! I want to read more! Please, oh pretty please write more of this story! Wonderfully done! What a masterpiece, indeed! You should be very proud of yourself!
Hey, I chose the short route because I understand that the story is very long; but all in all, it was quite interesting and very neat. I really enjoyed what I read. Keep on writing! You're great!
Wow! This story is undeniably, unbelievably crazy. I mean, it was okay, but it ended so stupid. It seems as if there should be a part two or something. Or maybe it should've kept going until it stopped with an appropriate ending. Like I said, it was okay.
First of all, this was a pretty darn good story; it has all the makings of a short story for television. Second of all, it was all over the place; just too much going on here. Third of all, pretty clever; we all know that the young man is freaking crazy. Quite ingenious on your part! I just feel that you had too much in the way of letting your viewers know that this young man is crazy! Nontheless, pretty good! Keep up the good work!
Okay, now hear we go! I liked the story and all, but this man is just too pitiful and weak. Listen, there is nothing wrong with being in love, but he takes the freaking cake. You should have had made the character a tad bit stronger. Oh but wait, maybe that was your intentions. Oh well, it is your story. You wrote it as you saw fit. Other than that, it was pretty good. Keep up the good work!
I didn't like the story that much. It just wasn't deep enough; not long enough, either. Mmm, I guess it was okay. Ya know, just not a story that I would suggest to read for a person's first time on this site. Just saying.
Oh, man! Now this story is unbelievably fantastic! The twist, at the end, in which I already knew about, was awesome. I just hate that it ended like it did! Oh well, such is life! All in all, still a great story!
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