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Review of persona  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.0)
Powerful.

Kathleen
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Review of Rough Draft (Duh)  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.0)
I felt this way for years. Becoming a newspaper reporter helped me get over my fear of writing something, putting my name on it, and publishing it.

Eventually that confidence made its way to my novel writing. I'm glad I got over it in time to hear my Mom introduce me to her friends as "My daughter, the writer". I almost waited too long. Don't.

Kathleeen
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Review of More Me  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.5)
What a gift to be given.
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.0)
I share this dilemma. You want honest feedback, but how much should you change what you have written because of it?

I recommend asking for feedback from avid readers as opposed to writers. Writers tend to tell you how they would write it. It is your voice not theirs.

I ask my (at least 3) "beta readers"
1. Don't just tell me you love it. That does not help me improve.
2. Do you have questions? Want to know more about a character or a situation?
3. Did you have to re-read a sentence, paragraph, or page to understand it?
4. Were my transitions too abrupt or not make sense? (New paragraph or chapter)
5. Did you see the end coming or were you surprised?

And I acknowledge them in the book's prologue or epilogue.

One of my best friends has hated all my books - still love her.
One of my readers had a career in printing. She is a great proof-reader.
One of my readers is a writer herself and I can't use her any more because she wants to replace too many word orders (ex. He ran quickly. Instead of He quickly ran.) Does it really matter?

Best of luck!
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a powerful poem - especially thee last line. Hope to read more of your work. Welcome, Kathleen
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Review of Star  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
How beautiful. I'm amazed at those who write lyrics and poetry that could be set to music.

My own poetry doesn't have that kind of depth.

Looking forward to more from you. Kathleen
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Review of Bitter  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow. We've all been there but you summed it up so well! Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
What a great idea!

I'm strolling through your portfolio and enjoying myself.

Don't want to be too self-promoting, but from what I see of your interests I wonder if you'd enjoy one of my novels? Unintended Consequences - Wallis & Edward

I am fascinated with British Monarchy across the centuries. I'm amazed at by the simply consequence of birth you can be flung into such a complicated dynasty.

If you are interested, I'd be happy to send you a copy. I'm not about making money off my friends.

Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. You said a lot here. Wow. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
Such important information. Thanks, Kathleen
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Review of Breath  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
I love when so much is expressed in so few words. Beautiful. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Wow . . . I have soooooo been there. Please learn (if you haven't already) it was about them - not you.

Easy to say, I know. Kathleen
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Review of July 14/1962  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Bless your heart. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Interesting speculation. People always are so sure things could never happen in America - until they do.

I'm a member of your generation. Could we ever imagine a Trump presidency or a January 6th?

Kathleen
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Review of political rants  
for entry "Why Trump?" 
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
I enjoy the point of view of an American who has lived outside the states.

You would be much easier to read if you wrpte in sentences. Thanks, Kathleen
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Review of Dear Pip  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Yep. Been there. You said it well.

Kathleen
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Review of A STORMY NIGHT  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (2.5)
Inspiring.
Well-told story.

Thanks for sharing. Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh, good for you. My daughter had a similar experience in her past marriage and getting out of it is one of the things I'm most proud of her for accomplishing.

All the best to you, Kathleen
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Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Lovely. Flows beautifully. Glad I stumbled upon it. Kathleen
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Review of Dust My Book  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow. Wish I could all the stories inside that book. Only you could write them.
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Review of Matriarchal  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.0)
Powerful. Many will not understand all that is part of this poem but powerful.

Kathleen
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Review of One of Them  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow.

Kathleen
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Review of EFFECTIVE WRITING  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (5.0)
As a retired newspaper editor myself, I found this article to be right on point. Thanks for the information for all of us struggling "new" writers.

Kathleen
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Review of Singing Angels  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (3.5)
Lovely. Thanks for sharing this poem. Welcome, Kathleen
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Review of Bathtub Dilemma  
Review by Kathleen Cochran
Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh! I am a devoted soaker every night! This poem is my ultimate fear - but it's not so bad as to keep me out of the tub.

Posting this in my bathroom! Kathleen
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