Rated: E · Book · Personal · #2172808

We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.

#1109278 added February 26, 2026 at 12:11am
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Board of Surfing
The fingers of this monster wet
yank me so firmly off my board.
That reef I'm on's my deep regret.
"How will it go?" My final word?

The roiling waves, the shake machine
'twould be a drink of greatest delight,
but I into the drink so green
will rue my latest surfing plight.

"Stay Up! Stay Up!" Each muscle screams
as grappling lines jettison my peace.
My hope for life on Earth, my dreams
full struggle against it to find release.

As down and down I go, succumb
to barnacles, that slice my skin.
Such loss of blood as I grow numb.
The hope for me now fades to grim.

The screen goes dark as lungs inflamed
cry out for fresh air for to breathe.
I pop up from the waves untamed
as breath can come before the grief.

line count: 20
poetry form: quatrains of mostly iambic tetrameter
prompt number: 8 (February 8th, 2026)

by Jay O’Toole
on February 26th, 2026


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