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Dec 8, 2015 at 5:50pm
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Re: My response to Discussion Weaving The Fabric.
by Dave Author IconMail Icon
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Touching poem, but the rhymes do not carry from one stanza to the next, as in the ABA BCB CDC DED EAE pattern prescribed.

Here is an example of how it is supposed to work:
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Troubadour  (13+)
Contemplating changes.
#1481876 by Dave Author IconMail Icon


Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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My response to Discussion Weaving The Fabric. · 12-08-15 3:35pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
*Star* Re: My response to Discussion Weaving The Fabric. · 12-08-15 5:50pm
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Re: My response to Discussion Weaving The Fabric. · 12-09-15 12:38pm
by Past Member 'oldmonty'
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