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Dec 15, 2015 at 12:15pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley
I really tried hard on this I probably did it wrong but at least I tried. I really got a lot from your lesson thank you for taking the time to teach.


Mom’s Christmas.
Lisa Noe*Cat2*


You and I went Shopping yesterday
As I love to spend so much time with you
You and I created a Christmas display

The Bible’s under the tree in our special way
The lights create the most spectacular hue.
I love you more and more mom every day

I love all the games that we take time to play
You are so special with all the things you do
You and I created a Christmas display

God has blessed me in this life with a mom like you.
I have such memories that will never fade
I love you more and more mom every day

We decorated our Christmas tree that special way
In the front yard the deer are feeding on hay
You and I created a Christmas display.

We have so much fun when we are at play
We laugh and joke and look for sunshine rays
I love you more and more mom every day
You and I created a Christmas display.
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DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-14-15 6:33pm
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*Star* Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-15-15 12:15pm
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 7:32am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-15-15 1:10pm
by amyjo-Keeping it real and fun! Author IconMail Icon
Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 7:35am
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Re: Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 8:42am
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Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 1:07pm
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 1:27pm
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