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Dec 16, 2015 at 7:32am

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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley

by Dave

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Lovely poem, but the Villanelle pattern of repetition and rhyme is not there. The first line should be repeated as the last lines in the second and fourth stanzas as well as the third line of the last stanza.

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DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-14-15 6:33pm
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Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-15-15 12:15pm
by Lisa Noe

Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 7:32am
by Dave

Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-15-15 1:10pm
by amyjo-Keeping it real and fun!

Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 7:35am
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Re: Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 8:42am
by amyjo-Keeping it real and fun!

Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 1:07pm
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Re: Re: DISCUSSION: Echoes in the Valley · 12-16-15 1:27pm
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