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Dec 22, 2015 at 1:36pm

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Re: Re: Form of the week: Octet

by Dave

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Technically, the poem is a line short, should be eight, and fifth line has an extra syllable, because "chocolate" has three: http://www.wordcalc.com/index.php

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Dave
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