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Oct 12, 2018 at 10:52am

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Re: Re: Form of the week: Lady's Slipper

by Dave

200 GPs were sent to WakeUpAndLive~lifestyle change

with this post.

Seems to me that those "sheets" ARE the "mess," and not the result of same.

Iambic meter and internal rhyming disappear in second and third lines.

Let the creativity flow from your soul!

Dave
"The Poet's Place "

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Form of the week: Lady's Slipper · 10-11-18 5:54pm
by Dave

Re: Form of the week: Lady's Slipper · 10-12-18 3:24am
by WakeUpAndLive~lifestyle change

Re: Re: Form of the week: Lady's Slipper · 10-12-18 10:52am
by Dave

Re: Re: Re: Form of the week: Lady's Slipper · 10-12-18 10:55am
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Lady's Slipper · 10-13-18 10:51am
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