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Oct 27, 2018 at 9:27am

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Re: Re: Form of the week: Cethramtu Rannaigheacht Mor

by Dave

Touching tale!

In the last stanza, rhyming pattern is broken. Second and fourth lines should rhyme.

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Form of the week: Cethramtu Rannaigheacht Mor · 10-26-18 6:54pm
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Re: Re: Form of the week: Cethramtu Rannaigheacht Mor · 10-28-18 8:44pm
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