~ The Poet's Place Cafe~

Hi Monty, I live with sore feet too. I dread winter when I will have to wear enclosed shoes all of the time. Luckily here in California I can wear sandals much of the year.

Your poem made me smile. You could solve the problem of one too many syllables in L4 by eliminating the word "your" and it keeps your rhyme in place. If you are entering it into the contest the syllable count will be important.

Always fun to read your work.

~~Tink