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Nov 9, 2018 at 6:28pm
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Re: Form of the week: Ya Du
here is my attempt at Ya Du , however I realize it's probably pretty awful and wrong.

Love in the face of illness
By Lisa Noe*Cat*

Wishing lifetimes
Feeling sorrow
Tomorrow’s time
Seeking my life
But feeling stillness all of my life

Love and laughter
Searching for both
Mostly hereafter
Laughter survives
My illness derived

Illness has found me
Bringing me down
Feeling so free
For his love is sound
I praying to God, His love abounds





Lisa Noe - kitty love signature
four time Quill winner *Laugh*
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