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Technically, this is correct, but it lacks the subtle shifts in meaning created by the echo, as in: Shepherd. What most moves women when we them address? Echo. A dress. Shepherd. Say, what can keep her chaste whom I adore? Echo. A door. Perhaps this list of homonyms will help in that regard: http://www.english-for-students.com/Homonyms-B.html Let the creativity flow from your soul! Dave "The Poet's Place " |